Cultivation of Immortality: My Branching and Spreading System

I spent more than 10 yuan. Reading the book is really expensive. If you are frugal, I don't recommend spending money to read it. In addition, the specific realm of cultivating immortals has not yet appeared. Isn't it possible that the protagonist hasn't started yet after a few years? I really don't recommend watching it.

There are too many female protagonists. In fact, three female protagonists are the best. One is a home support person, one is a career helper, and one is a mood adjuster.

You are blessed to have many children, and you are also engaging in soul-transportation. It is really green. Moreover, it has been many chapters, and you are still mentioning the "original body". Don't you think it is not green enough? There is also this protagonist, who is between the Virgin and the decisive killer. He is extremely awkward. His parents and the people around him seem to be fools, without any IQ.

I read a few pictures. Many people say that it is very poisonous to find a widow to open the system at the beginning. I can't understand what the poison is. If I give you a system, I am afraid that you will start looking for a bitch soon. I am probably more anxious than anyone else.

Either the Holy Mother or she is ruthless. If the Holy Mother is ruthless and cruel at the same time, she will offend two groups of people. I don't believe how many people in modern times can keep the bottom line when they travel through ancient times.

This book was written by the author for himself. In the early stage of the protagonist's character, he was a turtle man. In the middle stage, a wealthy family wanted to kill anyone who wanted to snatch a woman. However, he did not kill anyone and protected the home. Later, when someone set off smoke to rob someone, he only injured them but did not kill them. Well, well, if you write like this, then leave.

He is already invincible in the mortal world and he still hides it from his family. He seems to be sick. He changed the map, threw away the family here and left. There is no point in pretending to be a grandson. This novel is nonsense. It is a waste of money.

Is there a pig demon? After all, there are many pigs in one litter, which is quite suitable for this kind of pig-type protagonist. You can select the offspring that have a long estrus period, early sexual maturity, and short gestation period to cultivate, and then let them breed with each other to keep their traits stable.

After watching it for a while, I can only give it two stars. 1. The system is too complicated and I can't understand it at all. There are no rules for upgrade rewards. 2. The system is just like spreading branches and leaves. I want to abandon women just because they are not virgins and the rewards are small. Will he abandon this maid next time he meets someone taller? If you want to get more rewards, why not try to find someone who specializes in buying virgins? If you don't have access, are you afraid that others won't? It's not like I'm short of money. I don't know how much proficiency I can get in a month.

Can you change the name? Zhang Chuan is just Zhang Chuan, what else should I write about Xu Fei? With these two names, I sometimes think they are referring to two people.

Dog💩Novel, I found a widow at the beginning, and bought it from a trafficker. Calling it wrq is not an exaggeration! The male protagonist has two names, which are used differently depending on the plot. How about showing off his IQ? The system is so complicated that readers cannot understand it. Is the author not complacent? Putting aside the writing style, the writing is quite competent.

The author should revise it a little, the economy is completely untenable. Those with more than 100 acres of land are basically not considered landlords, but only at the level of rich peasants. Even small landowners with no official status usually have an area of ​​300 to 1,000 acres. You can give me a few taels of silver at will and still have seven servants, which is only possible for a big landowner. I have a great-uncle who is at about this level, with 100 acres of paddy fields and 30 acres of dry land (mountainous land). There is only one long-term worker in the family, and he can't even afford a servant. As a result, he lost half a silver dollar during the Republic of China. I was so distressed that I couldn't sleep. I never dared to go to a casino again for the rest of my life. This matter was passed down from generation to generation as a negative example. When I was a child, my grandfather used this example to teach me not to gamble. Silver is all hard currency, and his family has less than a dozen silver dollars in balance a year. Your child's pocket money and red envelopes are only ten taels, not to mention that you still have to eat, drink, sleep, study, build an ancestral hall, and have all kinds of taxes and money for oil and water.         ，，20， My grandfather usually writes letters and compositions for people, sells couplets before the new year, and buys lanterns and kites after the new year. My grandfather and the others had to help split bamboo strips after studying, and they also had to work in the fields during the busy farming season. Just like this, my grandfather only had a fountain pen when he was in high school. He bought it for him after he went to work. The family really couldn't afford it. Therefore, the number of acres of land in this book is too low. It would be better to change it to about 800 acres. If there is no official background, too many acres will be eaten. Otherwise, if the land is set at 100, it would be good if the tenant can rent 200 kilograms of rice per acre. There is a high probability that it is not (the irrigated land may be 300 kilograms). Counting your 100 acres, it is only 20,000 kilograms of rice. If you count rice, it may be a little more than 15,000 kilograms, and polished rice may be only 13,000 kilograms. The author writes that this family has at least 12 mouths (grandma, parents, two brothers and seven servants) and almost half of it is eaten directly. This is based on the fact that there is not much meat. If many people eat meat, the average person will eat more than 1,000 kilograms per year, which is roughly equivalent to 10,000 kilograms of rice grains. Grandma, parents and brothers here each need four sets of clothes a year, right? Even if the servants are not paid for clothes, they still have to be given one set of winter clothes and one set of summer clothes, right? There are also taxes, bribes from officials, and school fees, which are not enough. And according to the author's estimate of twelve taels of cash per child per year, his parents and grandmother must need more, right? Every year, we spend dozens to hundreds of taels in cash, not counting the risks of disasters, building bridges, paving roads, and building ancestral halls, which means we are seriously unable to make ends meet.

The heroine is a widow, old and not good looking. What does the author think?

From the beginning, he suddenly started to act chivalrous and righteous, and almost broke my waist. I told you earlier! Waste of time…

The system of spreading branches and leaves does not give proficiency when you are pregnant, tsk tsk tsk, just change the name to Shuangxiu or Royal Girl. To be honest, this novel can only be read as a pornographic novel, and it is still an ugly pornographic novel.

The protagonist in your novel is really a coward.

I estimate that the whole family is dead and the protagonist may continue to wait until the protagonist is stabbed in the butt. He may run away. With the protagonist's strength, shouldn't he try his skills to make himself feel confident? Just go on in such a muddle?

This system panel is so disgusting... There are numbers for the level limit and proficiency. It looks so tiring before it is put on the shelves. What will happen after it is put on the shelves? Everyone simplifies the panels one by one, but you are better off, as the panels become more and more complex.

Extreme disrespect for women and extreme masculinity, distorted values, single plot, soap opera word count, 1 star negative review.

The main character always had two names. It was so uncomfortable that I skipped a few chapters and quit the game.

The author's writing style is okay, and I felt quite comfortable reading it anyway. But I still have some comments to make. According to the author's writing, it is not easy for monks (without background) to earn spiritual stones. The conditions of the protagonist are considered good among monks. Ye Yuanmei, a 40-year-old, has hundreds of pots of mana. The protagonist only has 12 pots of mana in a year. Please consider it carefully next time when writing about age and cultivation. No, it's too unbalanced!

Why did the heroine die in the end? When writing about the harem, write well

I really can't understand what the hell is written.

I just want to know how you can write shamelessly when so many people criticize you? Just to cheat money

Chapter 336: 700 years, defying the heavens, really defying the heavens.

When I saw Chapter 13, this golden finger was extremely weak. The writing was complicated, cumbersome, and a bit messy. There was no actual physical bonus, nor automatic reading comprehension and analysis bonus. This was one of the weakest golden fingers I had ever seen. It was like watching Douluo Continent, and fighting energy turned into a horse. It was all ground and floor.

Can't we have a situation like lv1: 1/100? Isn't it simple? It has to be done in a way that makes people look awkward! ! Abandon books

What is rare to see in Daily Guide to Poison is that the author's writing skills are not strong enough and the writing is too sloppy.

I can't even handle the names well, and the units of measurement are written in a mess I'm convinced.

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