The Live Broadcast of Building a Shelter Turned Out to Be Doomsday

I have read 20 chapters, let's talk about the conclusion first. Hay, the recommendation index is six stars (out of ten). It is a very fresh subject matter. The author has solid professional knowledge and rich theoretical knowledge, which makes people want to read more. The author's writing is very strong and can easily arouse the readers' emotions. He is very familiar with the characters. The portrayal, psychological description, dialogue, and facial expressions are described too hard. Too much effort will make the readers confused. It is recommended that the author can use simple words to describe or reduce the description appropriately. He should reduce the complexity to simplicity and use blank space to let the readers make up their own minds. The above is a personal opinion.

If it were an apocalypse that could only be nourished by a shelter, then China would definitely be the happiest in the world. No one knows exactly how many holes China dug in the face of blackmail.

The first chapter said that the signing fee was only 3 million. When I read Chapter 20, everything must be the best. Not counting how much it costs to take down the mine, just the 30 million to build the 10th floor is not enough.

Whoever writes Doomsday Shelter, I'm here to support them

The writing is too rigid, with a lot of professional terms piled up. This is a novel, not a design manual. These professional terms are not organically combined in a narrative style, but are stuffed in a rigid form. It seems that the readers are not the readers of the novel, but the construction engineers. This matter requires a certain amount of moderation. Too little will make the novel seem empty and unprofessional, and too much will make the novel appear arrogant. Only the right amount, appropriate insertion methods, and appropriate explanations can perfectly integrate these hard things into the article. This book does not explain most of the professional terms. These are not things that everyone is familiar with or can interpret literally. Many of the materials and equipment you mentioned are things that readers do not know the difference or function. They can be written down and used directly. Readers cannot rely on text descriptions to construct any picture in their minds. The novel is like an incomplete model. One part of the plot is empty and another part of the plot is empty. This situation is like the author who made up the plot in his head but did not write it out. Is it appropriate to expect readers to fill in the unwritten plot in the author's mind? If that doesn't work, how about inserting some pictures into your book? In addition, I feel that the focus is slightly out of balance. There is too much space to renovate the shelter, and the part about infrastructure construction is also too long. The detailed description of each step of cleaning is certainly immersive, but the appropriate length and short rhythm can also maintain the reader's interest in reading.       ，，，，，，

I found that in many novels, the plots are written very naturally... It just feels like the protagonist will develop how he thinks it will develop. There is no contingency plan for sudden situations. One line comes to an end and the final ending

I still like to read vernacular novels. This kind of novel that describes a bunch of expressions and tones in one sentence is really not suitable for me. The corners of his mouth were wide open, he took a few breaths, and the fan-shaped image under his eyes was described in detail in every paragraph. I really can't understand what is written 😰

Brother, I don't recommend that you always write about the protagonist's sharp eyes and ejaculation. Occasionally, you can also express a tough character by writing about it. It's a bit uncomfortable to write too much.

It looks like it was cut. . . . . .

Overall, it's pretty good. I voted for a monthly ticket because I wanted to complain about why the products are shipped expedited every time. Before starting work, you must conduct an on-the-spot investigation on what you need, and stock up on goods in advance. It seems a bit awkward to rush shipping every time.

Why are there so many repeated conversations in these two chapters recently?

Are these things that the protagonist can do with 3 million? ? ? ? ?

I want to draw a picture, but I don't have a picture in my mind at all. I don't know what this launch silo looks like. The silo is said to be underground. What is the layout of the shelter? Where is the model room located?

Your copy of "I Can Upgrade the Shelter" was copied in Yangshizi! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Your last book was really ugly, but the good one was the one about Upgrading Shelter. I remember that you wrote about Shelter at the same time as the author Jin Jin Jin. Now his new book is really good and has become a hit. I hope your book will be the same.

Underground silos

Seeing that the catalog is all live broadcast construction, is the end coming? Is there a Shennong?

There is a problem. The original idea is not to use four silos as the hub, but also to radiate some small shelters that are not very strong. No plans to build small shelters?

Why did I stop updating? I feel a little watery.

The author's writing was not colloquial, which gave me the feeling of watching a model drama, but the plot was okay.

Recently, I encountered a situation where the basic beginning was good and then it became more and more shitty. This book has also started. So are these books written at the beginning and sold to studios?

The author did not ask for leave or explain

Are there any other apocalyptic texts of this type?

Fifty tickets at a time, if you can afford it, get up and work overtime 🙂

Fadian people map and community concept map

Brother, I submitted 8 photos this month, but I stopped subscribing after that. I feel like it didn't cover the points I wanted to read, and it was a bit too boring. I hope it will be better in the future

If you don't understand, just ask, when will the end of this book come?