Dream of the Red Chamber: Crown Prince of the New Dynasty

Three Kingdoms Struggle for Hegemony 9, the heroine plays 1 role, the focus of the battle, the woman is the adjustment, the author's writing method is OK. On the contrary, in Red Mansions, Garden Opera Seven, Machiavellian Three, are normal. Machiavellian is for better writing of Garden Operas. The audience's preferences are very fixed. How can anyone come to Red Mansion to see Machiavellian? Although the author Jin Chai's writing is quite consistent with the character, but the proportion is small, and he often disappears for a few days. No matter how good Machiavellian is, he always ignores the fundamentals and pursues the last. Half the effort, suitable for interspersed writing, the Red Mansion is like this. Although the original heroine in the book is disgusting, the writing method is interspersed. The plot serves the garden drama. When I can't write plot, I often don't have any garden drama for a day or two. This book is too distracting for those who want to see The Red Mansion. Maybe the writing is good, but I don't like to read it. Three Kingdoms: The prince of the new dynasty is more suitable for this writing 🥱

Have you ever been a prince? Some things are scribbled and taken for granted.

There are endless chapters on administration and institutional construction, with several chapters focusing on the Manchu and Qing dynasties, with no interludes in between. Yuanzi Opera has broken the plate that can hold it from the very beginning, and the scene about Jin Chai is probably not even one-tenth of the existing 700,000 words. The tears came from my father looking back on his past hardships, which would be a long chapter. There was basically no joy at all, and I couldn't even arouse my interest in reading. Let's talk about it first. The best score in Red Mansions should be "Shuangtianqingqing". The cool points are set up, from Jia Heng entering the Rongxi Hall three times, trolling people to show his fighting power, to cleaning up the chronic diseases, taking advantage of the opportunity to kill Diao Nu, expelling the clan name from the ancestral hall and promoting nobles, and killing the head of Rong Ning Mansion. Basically, there are more than ten chapters each. Where is the protagonist? Originally, leading the troops to kill Qi Zi was considered a very exciting point. The protagonist only needs to learn from the two phoenixes, whether it is capturing two kings in Luoyang in one battle, or 3,000 to 100,000. The defeat of Liu Wuzhou and Song Jingang, the surprise attack at Weiye, and the two hundred-mile pursuit would all be more enjoyable. However, the role was given to the old father, and the result was that he was not happy at all, and there were no highlights, so he fired a cannon in return at the end and barely had any memory points. There was also killing Jia Zhen, which could have been a bit more fun. However, the protagonist stood too high and lost his popularity. He looked down upon something that might be a show of dignity in front of others, something that might be a bit more fun. This kind of thing is not as high-level as governing a country. Every day is to deal with government affairs, chatting and talking with the ministers of the previous dynasty, discussing political affairs, and then discussing and explaining the whole article. The most interesting part of the plot of the Jia family is to pick up the letter and curl one's lips, shake his head and chuckle while listening to the report. Enjoyment is the first guarantee for pursuing reading. Without enjoyment, who can continue to pursue it? Where does the enthusiasm come from? Let's talk about tears. Since the title of the book contains the Red Mansion, we will focus on the Red Mansion in a large space. The rest will be supplements and expansions, distinguishing the priorities, and grasping the main contradictions. The main subjects of the tears must be the women in the boudoir such as Lin, Xue, Qin and Jia. It can be the protagonist going on an expedition. At first, he is reserved and polite, making affectionate eye contact. Then he breaks through the feudal ethics, rushes out of the shade of the willow umbrella, and runs forward with the expedition horse, his tearful voice is sad; Since it is The Red Mansion, the main theme must be the regretful completion of those female characters who are persecuted by feudal ethics, and everything else must give way to the theme. Otherwise, wouldn't it be better to just write a historical article? The audience is even wider. There are also numerous arguments. This kind of thing, even if it is a hegemony article or a historical article, must be interspersed with the cool points to discuss it, otherwise what you write is not a novel, it is called a project feasibility report. It can be seen that the author really started the book in a hurry, and did not have time to summarize the advantages and disadvantages of novels of the same type. The writing style is there, and it is good, but the structure is too poor, and it cannot grasp the main points and key points, nor can it create exciting and explosive points. The previous Red Mansion + Weird novel had the same problem. It had a grand world view, exquisite conception, and great imagination, but it ignored the biggest difference between online writing and traditional literature - readers actually don't have time to slowly expand your world, and will leave you if you are not satisfied with it after one or two chapters. Finally, the ending is hasty. It's a pity that the subject matter is good and the writing style is good... Internet novels still need to keep filling in the fun points. Beating bosses by leapfrogging levels, breaking out magical equipment, and the routines that can be used to death by others prove that they are good routines. Thousands of words are written eloquently, but I skipped four or five chapters without affecting my reading. So isn't the time spent on so many ideas and coding a complete waste? Data and follow-up reading are the biggest positive feedback on code words, so I still hope that the author can summarize the shortcomings and get good results. Above.

There is a big problem with this book. All the girls from the Jia family have entered the harem, which is too powerful.

After reading the updated chapters so far, the overall evaluation is that the shortcomings are not hidden, the overall writing is relatively smooth, and the original characters are not too deformed. As for reforms and military and political aspects, you can know what the situation is at a glance. Aren't all Dream of Red Mansions fans interested in Jin Chai?

The writing is good, but strictly speaking, it cannot be considered a Red Mansion fanfic if it is a historical time travel story. This book is bland and boring, with not much garden drama and too much about institutional reform, so no one wants to read it.

It is appropriate for the protagonist to be the prince's harem, but it is recommended not to give so many original women titles. Otherwise, so many concubines in the protagonist's harem are close friends, and their families have been allies for many years. Thinking about it will make you feel cold in the back. It's okay for the protagonist to be alive, but when it comes to children and grandchildren, it's better to have a field wife, and Yang Guozhong almost jumped out. If they all want to be justified, then they can ruthlessly seize or divide all their relatives within five servers and send them to other provinces to farm on a few acres of land.

By the way, if the employment contract system with a maximum period of five years is implemented in the palace, won't it weaken the palace residents' loyalty and sense of belonging to the imperial power? Will it reduce the "binding of imperial power" among palace residents, thereby making them more susceptible to the temptation of external forces and increasing the possibility of internal and external collusion?😥

I feel like this book is okay, but the characters are well drawn, but don't switch the perspective too quickly. There are too many characters in one picture, which makes it a bit confusing to read. It would be nice to add more sense of immersion.

But in terms of productivity and production relations in ancient society, ordinary palace maids, eunuchs, and slaves of wealthy families did not want to be ransomed, and they were really not as comfortable outside as they were inside.