The Goblin Offensive

The writing is okay, but the plot arrangement is very strange. Registering an adventurer and going through a lot of calculations are painful to watch, so it's not popular.

How can I put it? It's good. The problem is that it looks good, but it doesn't feel very good. The plot arrangement is a bit tight, and the protagonist is also plotted against.

It's a pity that the female characters in it are always in heat, which makes people uncomfortable The plot before chapter 90 is still good. Since chapter 90, there are always female characters in heat for no reason, and this situation of deliberately selecting female characters as teammates is also very bad. As expected, the quasi-professional female ranger and Vera should also join the team, basically forming a harem team. It's terrible. Your fantasy novel is not as good as other people's fantasy novels. At least the male protagonist of fantasy novels will have a fat guy as his younger brother, so they won't all be female. What a pity. Ignoring the plot of the female character in heat, this novel is basically on a par between food and grass. That's not to say that you can't be in heat, but are you in heat a little too frequently? Moreover, it is a bit difficult to form a harem team. Normally, there will be at least one or two male members. Your intention to form a harem team is too obvious, and the foundation is basically laid. Can you write an adventure well? I feel jealous and resentful every day, so I might as well just write a female video.

Registering a fucking adventurer and doing a lot of fucking things, do you want it to be so disgusting?

The female character is in estrus and ovulating, which is the first problem. Not much to say, it's hard to explain. The second problem is that plug-ins can suddenly be used by teammates. Here, readers will gradually split into two parts. One side despises the protagonist for being stingy. This skill should be given to teammates, and that ability should be given to teammates. On the one hand, I hate the protagonist for being so generous. I want to keep this for myself and that for the protagonist. The number of readers should be cut in half by now. . . Combat power planning seems to be far away, which is the third problem. Now that I have decided on the painting style of Brother Ax, I am reluctant to part with magic. The style of painting is impure and the passion is lost. The grass has been cut in Novice Village, and they are not officially professionals yet. Will they be wiped out in the future? . . For the above reasons, I can only endure it until chapter 145.

The protagonist is mentally retarded and has enough intelligence to take care of himself, so please don't dwell on things that the protagonist can't think of in the article.

Registering as a cannon fodder adventurer is full of conspiracies and troubles. If you don't make good use of your own mistakes,

Overall, the writing is very good, the plot is very exciting, and as a new author, he is already a supermodel! It would be better for the protagonist to be more decisive and decisive. In the magical world, the jungle is the weakest, and there is nothing to worry about. Without the Virgin, the protagonist can be regarded as a moral model if he does not take the initiative to harm others! In addition, don't waste plots about calculations on trivial matters. The calculations of registered adventurers are a bit childish. It's interesting to play big tricks like Master Gu! Hurry up and put it on the shelves and update soon! I'll save my monthly tickets for you, come on!

A follow-up work, the protagonist is a human, not a goblin. The goblins in it can refer to the chimera ants in Hunter. Both the racial talent and strength are very similar to the settings of the chimera ants.

It's a pity that it's a pretty good book, but maybe it's because of the newcomer. The opening chapter is not very attractive, and the title of the book is wrong. This kind of result is indeed too dismal. If the opening chapter had been better and the title of the book had been better, the level of this book would never have been like this.