Interstellar Daoist

Personal opinion, I am a bookworm of ten years. After reading your first chapter, the writing is okay, but the plot is too bad. It feels like a follow-up book from the second-generation school belle era of Fishman, but with the addition of a different world. As far as the first chapter is concerned, without explosive points and ideas, it is difficult to retain readers. Chapter 1 Pig's Feet Wakes Up. Taoist books, medical books, and martial arts books appear here without any foreshadowing. It's already a bit poisonous. How about three books appearing at once? Studying medicine, studying Taoism, and practicing cultivation. To be honest, if you can write one well, you can be called a great master. How about you just do all three? It's better to add a system to make it better; the appearance of plug-ins is too sudden, there is no foreshadowing, and the way to open plug-ins is not so open and so given, and what the hell is your second uncle, who is he, why is he so nb, second uncle and three flowers gather together, I am a Taoist? Master Tao, I can not only practice Taoism, but I can also cure diseases. Can I also release a few Qigong waves? This is not the second uncle, this is the second father and second grandfather! For such an old man, if you let him be a tool (memory version), it would be more reliable to write that he brought his second uncle along with him; the little girl delivering water, repaying kindness and treating the sick is too plain and classic. After reading this plot, I can tell the story below.

I was looking for traffic here and there, but when I clicked in, I found that I had only written 70 chapters before I became a eunuch.