Spirit Cage: Bai Yuekui, I Am Your Wall Breaker

You said you wrote about the spiritual cage. I feel like you are doing something original. I told you to create something original, but then you were forced to come back and write a spiritual cage. I have made more settings than the original drama. When you write a little bit later, you have to go back and see what settings you have that can't be filled in. It's not that your writing isn't good, just don't read it. What a waste of saliva to comment on you. Your settings can completely open up another spiritual cage world. As long as you can come back to it, it will be great. But if you follow the world view of the original drama, I can only say that you will collapse and there will be no way to make it work again. Just like a top killer, because he was going to a primitive tribe to kill two primitive people, he followed the Romans, gave up all kinds of weapons, and fought with the primitive people on the spot with bare hands and bare hands. No matter how you write about how exciting their fight is, and tell readers how powerful this killer is, it will be hard to watch 🤔

Chapters 33-34 are directly awesome! Seeing this made me orgasm inside my head! I have read more than ten books by Spirit Cage fans, and in terms of the depth and extension of the plot, none is deeper than this one! I feel like the different paintings can be used as reference for scripts!

Good books, good books. Linglong has too many pitfalls, and I suggest the author not to touch it. As for some setting issues, the author can send them to discuss together.

The writing is beautiful, and the daily writing is quite interesting! I hope to have more daily life, come on! Never be a eunuch

The writing is pretty good and the setting is okay. Author, you must write well. I will give you a subscription 😭. No more eunuchs.

Chapter 14 slipped away. I couldn't understand what was written and what was written. I kept following the plot from beginning to end, and there was nothing interesting about it.

To be honest, if the protagonist really becomes the Ultra King, it will fall into a cliché. It would be better to use Ultraman Regulus as a model to achieve the ultimate state of materialism and idealism.

The author's writing is very good, but it's a pity that I didn't enjoy it.

Author, if you force Bai Yuetian's body to follow the original plot, your book will be useless.

Judging from the first two pages, the plot and writing are pretty good.

Come on, write well, put it on the shelves and order it all

Now there is a small problem with this book that the main plot is not clear enough. Of course, it is definitely good to have more daily life. After all, who doesn't like to fall in love with Boss Bai 😁, and the protagonist's sense of urgency for the end of the world is not deep enough. After all, the background introduction at the beginning of the first chapter of the book is in 2047, and the Mana Ecology is about to explode in two years. The author can focus more on some of the layout before the end of the world for subsequent plot development, and the main I think the emotional experience of Jiao and Boss Bai can be divided into two stages. From the acquaintance before the end of the world to the two of them helping each other after the end of the world, they regard each other as the most important people. They can be written more slowly. In real life, unless you fall in love at first sight, you have to fall in love slowly, so the emotional aspect will be better. Also, systemic problems can appear appropriately. There is nothing wrong. The protagonist is cheating. It is better to just have a giant of light, which looks more enjoyable 🤓

I just saw it evolve into a mobile suit It feels weird if the final evolution is still a half-dragon. It's either Ultraman or Dragon.

You are very familiar with the spirit cage and have a deep understanding But the writing style is a bit immature The description is a bit immature and embarrassing Are you a new author?