American Literary Hero 1956

I have read more than 260 chapters, and everything up to this point is OK. Now, in these two chapters, author, what are you doing? ? I don't understand how to write sentences into paragraphs. Isn't it strange? It's like being out of breath. The plot also started to become confusing. Maybe it was my problem, but I didn't understand it. I felt that the writing was unclear about the character's motivations and was confusing. Anyway, I didn't see the sudden separation between the male protagonist and that guy, and even though the female star had already foreshadowed it, suddenly the two of them started to feel disgusted with each other (the wording may be inappropriate, but it was the beginning of the development direction of "Oh no, we are not suitable like this", obviously the first two were weirdly sweet), I:? ? ? Did I skip any chapters? Finally, the author didn't read the article twice. The sentences are repeated, which also makes it difficult for me to understand what you are doing. There is also a chapter (the part where the protagonist just returned to San Francisco with the female star to record a radio drama). It is not only repeated but also has unclear parentheses. I don't understand what the technique is, and the number of words is not that bad. .

It's well written, at least for a pseudo-illiterate like me. However, many literary writers with a certain level of literature like this book, Verification and Wenqing, which are not lacking at all. The description of American literature and society is excellent enough for laypeople, and the errors in some places can be said to be flawless. The author's private goods are the biggest threshold for screening readers. There is no work that is not mixed with private goods. From the choice of words and sentences to the core soul, everything is the realization of the author's private goods. Literary novels, especially well-written literary novels, are essentially about selecting readers who have the same three views or who can at least accept the author's three views From all the content I have read so far, I am the audience of this book.

It's very tiring to watch, the literary atmosphere is too strong, and the pretense is extremely stiff.

One thing I don't understand about Western literature is that when society is in a bad state, their literature is either a submissive and refined placebo, or a rampant, chaotic and vulgar resistance. Everything is so diode. If you don't choose the refined middle class, you must choose the hippie who drinks and drugs. Look at how Lu Xun criticizes society. He also describes the bottom class, but his language is as precise as a scalpel, and every sentence is a aimed bullet. In comparison, Western resistance literature is like a gangster who shoots randomly on the street and ends up with no casualties. He can only export emotions.

The writing is good, and the plot is fairly smooth, but if you put it at the starting point of 10, there is a high probability that it will be a hit. At least that's the current plot. It doesn't feel exciting at all. The whole thing is full of literary writing, sometimes XX structure, sometimes XX genre. This is an online novel. . . . At most, there are some niche enthusiasts. Don't keep those esoteric things in the clouds. I am a junior high school student and I can't understand these things if you show me them.

It's well written, but there's a big gap between the previous one and the previous one. The first one is an accuser and an angry person, and the second one suddenly has a shrewd businessman side. It's very contrasting and not quite right. If you follow the second one, then the front one will have to change it. The first one is too desperate.

Hemingway could kill himself, but you're still alive? That can only mean one thing, the time-tested pen of capitalism

I don't know why I'm writing about such a literary youth. I might as well just write about how to get rich and experience the heat of capitalism.

No, bro, you are outrageous. There are so many characters about Jack and his girlfriend in the front, but none in the back. What do you want to do? 😅😅😅

After reading five chapters, I couldn't stand it anymore. It had a weird plot. The editor especially liked the protagonist's book. Then, without leaving any contact information, he just let the protagonist leave with the manuscript! How the hell are you going to contact me next time?

After reading three chapters, I feel that the author should not be short of money to write a book, so he can play whatever he wants. It's awesome. The last sentence is that literary youth is really disgusting.

Everyone is right, it's not fun and there's nothing compelling about reading it.

He looked tired and not relaxed at all. The plot is dragging again. Let's talk about the writer, when will the protagonist's book be published?

The subject matter is good, but the content is really not that good.

Chinese literary youth can't even appreciate it, so why not come to American style?

The writing is indeed good, but I wish it was a little more literary and youthful. Just like what was said in the introduction, it is too romantic and romantic. Even if the writer is romantic or self-sufficient, it is better than this. It is too literary and youthful, and is not suitable for Qidian novels. You should go to a female channel for romance. . . I hope the following article is not like the introduction, but I am still looking forward to it 😁

Since when did all the writers of literary novels suffer from the disease of literary youth? The protagonist can be a literary youth but the articles are not. The Internet articles you write are all infected by two trees.

I have only read about ten chapters. The book is really good and the writing is really good. I know it is a good book, but I can't read it. I may be the kind of person criticized by the protagonist who is willing to soak in formalin and rot slowly. I don't understand the United States, let alone American literature, so I can't understand why the protagonist is so angry and wants to smash the American order of 1956. The book is good, but it is not written for me.

This result is really bad, there are not even pirated copies 😄

I originally came here to read the author's articles, but are the commercial content of a few chapters a bit too high? Also, the behavior of deliberately liaising with Bob and Puzo about investing is really a bit uniform, and the behavior of someone criticizing Vince, and then Vince's words of affirmation and then disapproval is a little too frequent? Also, making mooncakes during the Mid-Autumn Festival is a bit of a show. The introduction of Vince as a Chinese traveler here is far less interesting and reasonable than the previous recipes. There is also the mooncake for a black girl. I really don't know what the author wants to portray Vince's character. Anyway, I think it is a bit boring. Now, it is far less interesting than the previous chapters about the Beat Generation. Can the author tell me what his thoughts are on the business and literary routes in the back, so I can give up the book or continue reading.

I clicked on it four or five times, reading one or two chapters each time, but by chapter 17 I couldn't hold on any longer. Why does a novel by a literary giant have to be written by a literary and youthful person? Forget it by being a literary and youthful person. Some of the passages can be said to be inexplicable.

No matter what happens next, Shuhuang patiently read thirty chapters. It doesn't mean you should have fun, but it doesn't mean you can't be a literary person. But the protagonist must at least be a decent person. The overall feeling is that of shit that smells like honey. Tsk

Garbage garbage garbage garbage

This is a book that can be read over and over again and has a sense of immersion every time. At first, I was misled by other people's comments and thought it was superficial. But I love this subject so much that it has been in my favorites for a long time. But when I ran out of books to read, I found this book and spent the whole night reading it. A good book can transport you directly back to that era, and this book does it. A good book can make your heart surge, and this book does it. I hope the author can keep his composure and write well, and ignore external comments.

There is a problem with this type of novels. They are all written more seriously to make themselves appear more competent, but in fact, only by writing novels can you really make money. Which novel that is widely circulated in the West is not a popular novel?

Write quickly, do you want to stop eating? ! ! Are you not angry enough after eating recently?

Not updated? What are you going to do? I need to cut it.

I haven't seen a thoughtful book in a long time. It's hard to be criticized by a bunch of jealous villains. I am usually very busy at work, but occasionally I read a chapter and feel mentally relaxed. What a good book, I hope the author will continue to update it

You are a Chinese who traveled to the past, how do you look like me? ? All kinds of cynicism, taking the original person as oneself? ? What are you angry about? ? Are you writing about a foreigner who would resist because of other people from other countries? ? No one will read it if you write it like this

A copywriter made it look the same as what he wrote, and he got involved in all kinds of things