Ultraman: Open Up, the Neighborhood Is Delivering a Leo Kick

It feels like you're writing something omniscient and omnipotent, a self-righteous writing style. Please try to see things from the perspective of each supporting character. It's very strange.

There are clearly better ways to train, so why do you have to torture yourself with the Jigangche? Isn't that just asking for trouble? Jigangche is just for training courage and dodging ability. Why not just go to China and find the grandmasters? Why bother to torture yourself?

As the title says, author, there are even typos in your bio, how could you be so meticulous?

The skill proficiency is increasing too quickly. How are you going to write the rest? Refresh skills? Don't similar skills provide a proficiency bonus?

Well, to be honest, I've read up to the fourth chapter of this book. Of these four chapters, only the first chapter, which doesn't have the protagonist, is okay—neither good nor bad. The protagonist seems like he hasn't woken up yet when he first appears, and by the fourth chapter, it's even started with the left brain attacking the right brain.

Most Ultraman fanfiction is boring and tedious, basically all the same and without any difference. The original Ultraman TV series almost always has a female lead, or Taro has two female characters who like the male lead. Gen also has Momoko, and Ace has two women who like him. Hokuto had an abnormal relationship with a female teammate for a while after Yuko left.

I've taken one day off, and now it's been five days already. I'm practically a eunuch.

I can't wait to see that muscular lion with its teeth and claws! Ahhhhhh!

Now I get nervous whenever I see an Owen book on the shelves; I don't dare subscribe. Why? Because I'm afraid of getting caught up in scandals. Can you guarantee I'll subscribe?

There are too many typos and many incoherent sentences. I really suspect it was written by an elementary school student.