
Ultra: Open the Door, the Community Is Giving Leo a Flying Kick
奥特:开门啊,社区送雷欧飞踢
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 188k Words
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Myriad Worlds
- Updated
- 11mo ago
- Source
- Qidian
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92Chapters
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It feels like the writing is omniscient and omnipotent, and it is written in a self-righteous way. Please look at your behavior from the perspective of each supporting character. Very strange.
Typo
Like the title, author, there are typos in your introduction, so careless
There are obviously better ways to train, so why do you have to find Jigang Che to torture yourself? Isn't this just looking for trouble? Jigang Che is just to exercise courage and dodge ability. Just go to China to find the major masters. It's just looking for trouble.
Proficiency grows too quickly. What do you write next? Refresh skills? Doesn't the same type of skills have any bonus to proficiency?
How can I put it this way? As for this book, I have read the fourth chapter. Of these four chapters, the chapter without the protagonist in the first chapter is okay. It is neither good nor bad. As soon as the protagonist appears, it is as if he has not woken up. In the fourth chapter, the left brain even starts to attack the right brain. It feels like the author writes whatever comes to mind. He is still getting more skilled at the beginning. In the blink of an eye, the outstanding talent of the protagonist is revealed. There is no time in the middle and no explanation at the end. The whole book feels like I have not woken up.
Most Owen dramas are boring and dull, basically the same without any difference. The original Otv dramas basically have female protagonists, or the two female characters of Taro like the male protagonist, Fengyuan also has Baizi, Eddie also has two women who like him, Beidou also had a period of time with a female team member after Yuko left, which was not normal, Severn There is Anu, who is often knocked down by beauty traps, Eddie is called a philanderer by children, who do you like in the lyrics, Galaxy Auditorium Light and Qingmei's first pink bubble have come out, the Ultra fan filter is so thick that it is difficult to see, can you be objective, let alone the character is always the same as the original drama character, you have a little confidence and courage, can't you be normal?
There are too many typos and many unclear sentences. I really doubt it was written by a primary school student
Author, can you promise to finish it?
Now that I see an Ouwen book on the shelves, I feel scared. I dare not subscribe. Why? Because I am afraid of entering the palace. If you can guarantee it, I will subscribe again.
Looking forward to the muscular lion licking his teeth! Ahhhhhhhh!
I'm asking for a day off. It's already been 5 days. I'm a eunuch, right?