Harry Potter: Frillian, Be My Disciple

I would like to make a suggestion. It is best for this kind of time-travel novel to have an overworld, which is what we often call an anchor point. The reader can also know why the protagonist is moving forward. The magic system in King Furong can penetrate Hogwarts in a short time, but King Furong is still in its infant form. I don't know what the author's outline is, and it is relatively simple. I am worried that there will be nothing to write in the later period, or that I will just witness what is going to happen in the original plot. I believe this is not what everyone wants to see. What everyone wants to see is the butterfly effect of Harry in the life of King Fleur. They want to see a powerful Harry behave in Hogwarts, just like becoming the Dark Lord as mentioned in the introduction. What made Harry choose this path?

My biggest impression after reading it is not whether the writing is good or not, but whether the characters are OOC or not. What the hell is this system? Not to mention that the lifespan of a demon is only ninety years. It takes forty years to learn a trick. Hunting demons and taking away the lifespan of a demon only takes several decades. How much kickbacks do they get? Nine out of ten draws are enough

Is Harry going to follow the path of Lu Shao Zai and Naruto walking through the heavens? !

The magic in Frillian's world depends on imagination. Harry's imagination can only be said to understand everything. He might as well let Luna pass through it, maybe he can really create harassment 😜

I really want to lock the author in a dark room, and if he doesn't write novels, he won't give him food 😭

Made a new cover

There are some typos, not too bad, but I don't really like the number of female protagonists. I'll wait and see what happens next.

Resurrection, my author! !