Great Flood Years

It's better than the one about ice and fire, but it still fits the description of long and boring. Long paragraphs are often filled with meaningless descriptions of scenery like a composition. The epic sense can be borrowed from high-quality translations. The Chinese translations of the Middle-earth series are considered to be the most epic ones. The official Warhammer 40k novels rely on its world view and foundation. Other translations are either too localized, such as A Song of Ice and Fire, or translated into a heaven-defying tone, like The Witcher and other unpopular novels. But don't copy them mechanically. You need to localize them to a certain extent and transform your online reading habits and preferences. You can take a look at the best ones in the fantasy zone ten years ago (quality rather than performance). The Saint of Nine Fish Aunt, The Last Dragon, which was sent to the female channel by mistake, and a five-character name written as DND (Sage and Girl were praised by many at the time, but it was mediocre compared to the former). After this batch, the fantasy zone has never been at this level again. And since the creation of Qidian, those who write POV perspective in the fantasy zone have not survived.

The second paragraph of the introduction is unnecessary. Falling leaves, gentle breeze, and falling quietly are a bit too elegant.

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The two paragraphs of the introduction are a bit short, and the number of words in the two paragraphs is a bit too many.

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Verhof

Irene

Matt

Victor

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Montagu

The previous writing is quite good, add a bookshelf and continue to follow it 😁

Piramon