JO Taro's Demon Slayer Journey

Provincial flow: In the third part of Super Explosive House King, Hei Cheng failed to elbow Super Explosive House Muzan. Peak Platinum allowed Muzan to kill Nezuko and run away alive with the Nichirin Sword. (Note: The top six boxes have been picked up long ago, and Tarkas and Diamond Rock Pan cannot be picked out)

Apart from some errors in punctuation, I didn't find any major faults. Did you save the manuscript and publish it? There are so many chapters in one day. If you have time, can you help me read my book? I can't find the problem myself and I need others to criticize me severely. I also wish you can sign the contract as soon as possible.

Platinum Star is useless, it doesn't have Jotaro's characteristics, and the blood ghost technique can't stay in the sun. The Nichirin Sword might as well be made into a finger tiger. Relic Sakonji clearly didn't know that ghosts existed before, so he was already poisoned to death.

Does this mean that this Jotaro can be an OVA-strength Jotaro? Because the system is different, other versions of Platinum Star are indeed not that powerful. As for the breathing technique like ripples, dealing with physical contact like Wuhan, which melts when touched, is indeed indiscriminate killing. But if the range is longer, it can be said that it is difficult to hit.