The Crown Prince of the Dream of the Red Chamber

The prince and the maid's father cooperate in business. The prince takes the third floor 666

The protagonist wants to make Yuanchun the crown prince

The logic doesn't make sense. Even if the emperor hates the prince, he can't agree to the Jia daughter who has a stain on her family to be the princess. In ancient times, the prince was a country that could not tolerate any stain. Jia He colluded with foreigners to sell salt and iron, and Wang Xifeng took over the litigation and usury. In these original works, the royal family was aware of it, and it was also the reason why the Jia family was ransacked.

Chapter 17, when Dai Quan appears, it is enough to describe what kind of person Dai Quan is based on what the protagonist has learned about Dai Quan after staying in the palace for so many years. Why draw the readers back to the world of the original work? 😅😅😅 Even though Qin Keqing is here, when writing fan fiction, you should reduce the connection with the original work, only borrow the settings of the original work, and make the world of this book an independent world, so that you can have a sense of immersion. Why must we use this kind of "original story about that person and that thing" to describe it? Although I have written fan fiction, I still have to bring the readers back to the original world, which makes the readers very confused 😒 and has no sense of immersion

This author doesn't have any serious novels 😡 The most hateful thing is that I am following every one of his books

From the first chapter, we can tell that it is full of female pornography and contains too much invalid information. When exercising, I wear loose and comfortable clothes. You describe wearing court clothes when exercising. Would you wear an evening dress to the gym? The evaluation is that it is flashy and the writing is too weak. The sea, you are all water

The good-for-nothing prince himself took the initiative to file a report and apply for the appointment of Yuanchun as the crown prince. No matter what you think in your heart, you, a prince with no real power, can't speak out. I'll poison you to death.

It is known that modern emperors want to overthrow the four major families. You, the crown prince, at least in name only, want a woman from the Jia family to be the crown prince? Are you serious? Besides, didn't she enter the palace? The woman who enters the palace is at least nominally your father's woman, so write that?

It's better to just write about the emperor. It's like the book about the rebellion where I realized it was the Red Mansion. I wrote about the garden opera and then mixed in some court affairs.

Just wait for the eunuch. If the data is not good, just wait for the eunuch.