
Mortal I Have a Bottle of Stars and Seas
凡人之我有星海瓶
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 637k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 7mo ago
- Source
- Qidian
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Several handfuls. Erysipelas is here. According to your statement. The model worker had long been poisoned. What a goddamn god. The original work clearly only has drug resistance. By now it has become erysipelas. Write a fanfic and blindly change the settings. How strong your writing style makes readers pay for it. There will be ghosts only if you don't rush into the street
Goldfinger is fine, and the hint of a harem is also attractive to harem-type players like me, but can you please ask the author not to pretend to be aloof there, and accept it if you want to accept it, but don't write some ambiguous plots there to show off your innocence, and at the same time, you also accept girls. Why, do you want to be Tang San? Although the plot of opposing Han Li is a bit silly, it is also in line with Han Lao Mo's temperament. You can also fall in love with Han Lao Mo and kill each other. This kind of plot is worth watching! But if you are preparing for a harem, then have a good harem, write down your feelings, and don't act like a lunatic there! Don't keep making plots about bitterness and hatred, otherwise I will give up directly.
You have the Foundation Establishment Pill and are you still going to the forbidden area? Do you have to follow the plot? Isn't it a little more stable after you have a baby?
Is the comment section full of brushes?
First, you stepped on the elixirs of mortals, and then you, the 12th level of Qi Refining, only had two high-level magic weapons, and you, a poor guy with nothing else, still followed Han Paopao?
Carvings on shit
What fan authors like to do most is to carve pictures on shit, either to steal the opportunity of the protagonist or to steal the protagonist's woman. 💩I can't even eat it hot. At least it's something fresh. Look at people's scientific cultivation of immortality, heavenly spiritual treasures, and Amap. Even if they are shit, they are still hot.
It's a waste of an awesome plug-in. Anyone who has played it will know how much the Xinghai Bottle is real. There is no bottleneck in breaking through. You can get red with a waste elixir, and the red elixir has a 100% success rate.
A mountain and river order, a Xinghai bottle, in reality, it exceeds the standard as much as possible.
If you add some useless settings randomly, your golden finger will be mediocre.
This protagonist has a character that is both upright and upright.
Carvings on shit
Another renamed The Legend of Immortality, Han Li changed his name to Wang Li and Zhang Li might as well read the original work. Look at people's scientific cultivation of immortality, the spiritual treasures of the heavens, the Gaode map, and the portable world. One talks about the logic of practice, one talks about mythical magic weapons, one talks about the seamless connection of technology, and the other talks about laws with high intentions. Even if it's shit, it's still warm, unlike some novels that depict a pile of shit over and over again.
Erysipelas? , Randomly adding settings from ancient novels, and slipped away👋🏻
There are also novels set with erysipelas🤔
Because a woman won't be able to get far if she exposes her cheating abilities
He is invincible, and he is accepting Chen Qiaoqian again. A passerby who can't break through the pill formation in the original work, what's so good about accepting him? You don't understand the word Taoist companion, do you? He wants you to give him resources to receive a vase? Your Nascent Soul can be collected, but if you can't activate the big trick at this time, how can you become a Nascent Soul? You write about a mortal fan who is building a foundation in the human world. You don't have enough resources yourself, so you have to give it to a passerby from the original work? How about you accept Nangong Wan, or even Bai Yaoyi? An original passer-by who was building foundations until his death, and he was thrown into the street and closed down in the street can only be said to be
The author of the female video came here, why does she look so yandere?
I read that the author has written several mortal fanfics, and it's still great to go through all the pitfalls again. I just read a chapter about seducing and raping Senior Sister Chen. NB, writing fan stories about going to the Bloody Forbidden Land is just for fun, hahahahaha
Everyone, stop scolding. The author's three books combined are less than 300,000 words. What's there to say. Run
This Xinghai bottle?
Is this game the Xinghai Bottle? ? ? ?
1. Han Li persecutes the protagonist so much. The protagonist seems to have no idea. I feel that the author is a bit ignorant. 2. As the plug-in that is the foundation of his life, he has revealed it to others. It can be seen that the author has not had much experience in the workplace or officialdom in real life. 3. The full text is a bit forced to transition the plot to the protagonist. For example: at the entrance of the Bloody Forbidden Land, Li Huayuan accepts the protagonist as his disciple. What is the logic behind giving the protagonist the first four levels of Qingyuan Sword Art? In general, the author is simple in heart and lacks writing power. It's a good hook, but the author couldn't write it well.
Another Xinghai Vase, this is already the number one
The plug-in Xinghai Bottle is a bug-level plug-in for mortals. Especially for Qi training and foundation building, a few red pills will help you achieve perfection. Therefore, the writing is not strong enough and it is difficult to explain the logic clearly. If there is such a God-defying plug-in, why go to some dangerous places? You can break through by just relying on Xinghai Bottle. Wouldn't it be safer to wait until your level is high before going there? If you really want to write, you must put some restrictions on Xinghai Bottle so that you can have a reasonable explanation for downloading some copies.
Because of my book shortage, I read this book for the second time. After reading more than 20 chapters, I couldn't bear it anymore and felt sick and wanted to vomit🤢! I won't talk about the taste of AI – I can't write down the exciting part, it's just water. The plot and setting are frustrating.
He was just speechless. Mortals are not just harem novels. Old Demon Han was asking with all his heart, is one of those women truly in love? There are preconditions for everything. Those who write fan fiction are all over-brained. They seize every opportunity and women do it. This is chicken coop literature.
If you haven't tried it before, you can give it a try
Is the author a living person? Come out and bubble it up.
I'm tired of watching the harem, please recommend a fic without a heroine.
The text is all generated by AI and it doesn't look good. I couldn't even stand the first chapter. The text written by normal people still looks good, but the text written by a machine is strange and verbose.
Borrowing precious treasures to promote the new book Mortal: From the Black Evil Cult to Jiyin Island
Fellow Taoists are welcome to read and comment!
Not to mention randomly changing the settings, what a harem garbage!
I prefer the dog-licking old slave genre, and I like Han Li because of the anime. But seeing that you are more sincere, I decided to read your book. I have also been reading the original work recently, and I feel that the original Han Li is very different from the anime. 😐
Asking for help from fellow mortals
I remember there is another novel by Yi Nian Xiaoyao Goldfinger. Who has read it? Any recommendations?
Not bad, come on😊. I accidentally grabbed a sofa. I'm so happy that I'll give you a guaranteed monthly pass!