In the Depths of Despair

After reading a few chapters, I felt that it was actually quite interesting, but I don't know why but it just felt so weird. After reading the whole book, I obviously found it quite interesting, but it just felt uncomfortable to read. I feel like there may be too much description in some places. It just feels like I have been describing a shocked expression for several pages in a row. (Of course, I am exaggerating.) How can I put it? After reading a few chapters in a row, I feel that nothing else has been written, and I have been writing about the shock of the protagonist. It is like watching a TV series for ten minutes, and the main sentence is shocked for nine minutes.

34-45, These ten chapters have been completely rewritten. The plot is completely different and more exciting. It continues the fear and despair before and after. Everyone who has already read it can give it a chance to watch it again. Just think that something weird happened in reality and the past has been changed. If you think the rewrite looks good, please give me a reward. I am really burning out. I have written an extra 20,000 words in the past few days. It is really not easy!

The idea is good, but the writing is so bad that it's over. Comprehensive evaluation given💩

The official should have concealed it from the beginning. Even if this kind of weird event that can be recorded in writing can be forgotten, as long as no traces can be 100% erased, the official will know about it sooner or later. When Chinese people encounter such a major incident, their first thought is to call the police. When the police arrive, they immediately ask questions and record the incident. It is recorded in the record and will be forgotten once or twice, but the record is still there. As long as it is dug out, the matter will be serious. The city will pay attention to it, the province will follow up, and the central government will look at this. . .

Dear author, since there is definitely no heroine, don't describe too much about women, especially the kind that describes how beautiful a woman is, let alone the story about a woman having an affair/secret love/feeling with the protagonist, etc. It's better to have a supporting role. Don't write too much about couples. If you write about a book without a heroine, just write the protagonist and the plot and that's it. In my opinion, you can read books without a heroine, but as long as there is a plot related to the plot I mentioned above, it's just a piece of cake that doesn't stink but is more disgusting. I'll add the bookshelf first, and I'll come back when I have a million words. Finally, I hope your work will become popular! PS: The above is only my personal opinion, and it only represents me. Some people should not use your opinions to refute me. If you refute me, I am right.

The first few chapters are just like the introduction, using people to turn into dogs to point out that there is something wrong with the world. The following chapters also use some details to describe the impact of ghosts (curses?) On the protagonist. The first part is attractive enough, but what you write afterward is just boring. You spend dozens of chapters describing how the protagonist is doing and looking for solutions everywhere. By chapter 40 or 50, you are still writing about the influence of ghosts on the protagonist and how the protagonist finds solutions. I skipped the whole thing after reading the rest. It took me a long time to write to give the protagonist a little hope, and the method found may not be effective. Come on, how can anyone write online articles now? After a long time of writing, the protagonist still has not improved at all. It made me want to watch something scary, but there wasn't much behind it. Watching the main character was so satisfying that I was pressed for dozens of chapters, but I didn't feel good again.

If ghosts appear so frequently, wouldn't humans have become extinct long ago?

In fact, this story implies that capital alienates people, so ghosts cannot be eliminated.

The author is really creative, but the writing style is quite rusty, and he deliberately tries to remove emotions. I really frowned from time to time while reading, and memes are invisible. To highlight the invisible influence, it is better to use a contrast method. For example, in the early stage, the protagonist creates a kind and fair image, and then is affected, and the behavior and thinking deviate from the original image. It may be better to shape it in this way. Generally speaking, book lovers who lack horror novels can read this book.

Well written, it is a real horror novel, not a fantasy novel disguised as horror.