Douluo Dalu: The Body Martial Soul, Conquering the World Starting with the Pope

Qian Renxue is level 29 at age 10? Aren't you Chunyun? He was born at level 20.

Ice Jade Emperor Scorpion?! It should be Blue Silver Emperor, or at least a plant-type spirit. Wouldn't Thunderous Hell Vine be better? Thunder God bloodline.

The anti-Tang San faction actually sets up the protagonist as Tang San's twin, is that patricide? It feels like my values ​​have collapsed.

This author's thought process is truly bizarre. They can't write without the Tang family. The original story clearly didn't include you, yet you insisted on adding the character of being Tang Hao's son, a figure of deep resentment. It's clearly a product of the Blue Silver Emperor and the Clear Sky Hammer, yet you insisted on adding a separate entity. What, did Tang Hao cheat on you?

This is better than Bibi Dong's smile, Yu Xiaogang.

You've still managed to portray the common problem of being controlled by others. You'd better solve Tang Hao's problem. Otherwise, you'll discourage a lot of people. You start with a satisfying beginning and then suddenly turn it into a frustrating story. I don't understand what you were thinking. If you want to recruit someone, just tell them so they can give you some experience before you enter the Dung Beetle Academy.

Dugu Bo, Ning Fengzhi, Chen Xin, Gu Rong, and Tang Hao—five people in total—forcibly took the protagonist away from the Spirit Hall, yet the Hall of Worship remained completely silent. This is just as mindless as the original story where Tang Hao destroyed the angel statue during the Spirit Master Competition and the Hall of Worship remained silent.

The Dark Gold Terrorclaw Bear's fourth soul skill is copying; how bizarre!

How did your Ice Jade Emperor Scorpion mutate?

Although I haven't finished reading it yet, I feel it's very good. I hope you can write more and add more plot points that weren't in the original work. Keep it up!