Apocalypse Survival Modpack

Have you ever been Steve? Forgot the rest

It's too gentle, and I feel that the protagonist is too temperless, even to the point of being a little aggrieved. Of course, this is just my feeling. The book itself is quite good.

Is the user named Supreme VIP in this comment area a chuan, a black man, or a real fan? He goes around saying that others can't understand the author's layout, which means that MC is a farming game and killing people every day is a pervert. Aren't the players who love to play empty islands and wake-ups explode? People sit on pots at home and come from heaven. Moreover, the speech was really too pure and I kept looking for someone to criticize the author. I even doubted whether this was the author's trumpeting, but from looking at it, it shouldn't be the case.

You'll be done with it after a few days of rest, right? You like not to put yourself in a box, right? You want to be tough, right? The next step is to delete your account and run away You'd better have something really wrong with your health, it would be better for everyone.

If you are an old fan of the previous book, you will know that it is written by a big brother and you don't need to try it out. Just add it to the bookshelf to read 🤓 and ask for feedback and refinement.

Author, can you please stop writing words like "Break it for me!" "Open it for me!" "Give me a lift!" It feels like seeing a domestic puppet show character in Game of Thrones

When the writing power is not enough, the world view is too big. The big settings of Blue and White Society and Xiling Empire are complete disasters if they cannot be mastered. The success of the previous Middle-earth book is actually due to the low magic and low martial arts. The intensity of the protagonist can be easily controlled, which means that the rhythm of the novel is in the hands of the author. The plot of this Empire part is The book was messed up. I was still farming in the first few chapters, and then I immediately entered the capital to dominate the world. After the destruction of the world, I posted outlines on a large scale. At this point, it was actually unfinished. The author disappeared for more than a month. In fact, looking back now, maybe it would have been a better choice to just cut the outline. Anyway, keep going, I hope the next one will be better.

Is it right to only have two chapters after holding it back for so long? Do you still have 20 chapters on your computer that will be posted later today? 😏😏😏

Many details are not as good as those described in the previous book, and the name is also suspected of being a piece of cake. Not as good as the previous one

It seems that I have found that the writing is too big and is confusing. I don't know how to write next. Each one of them is so awesome that I can't keep up with it. But I have one post here. Since they are all Steve's physiques, why not just start fighting against Doomsday? There is no need to join any creation-level circles here. What we need is to contain Doomsday. Anyway, Steve can't die and there is still the main world. The more people die, the more Doomsday will be recognized. It would be good to write about some interesting modules. How about Doomsday? How to write such a weird thing? After the recognition is completed, a doomsday is contained. When the protagonist cannot bear it anymore, he comes out of the doomsday vacuum circle to feel refreshed and make friends. After the break, he continues to recognize the doomsday. Steve does not need to join the circle at all, so when you write here, it feels like you are cutting off. If you jump out and write directly, the indescribable space will be much larger.