The World of Naruto in Byakugan

Hinata, it's still a matter of separation, it's difficult to write How to make the Zong family die, and the separation is intact without being suspected is a problem Whether Hinata can stay or not is also a problem

Better than the previous book

This is impossible, that is impossible. I read the novel, if I still work as a slave step by step. Then what novels should I read? If your master treats you well, you should thank them. Enko personally rushed into his factory with a shotgun. How is steel made? The protagonist's indomitable spirit. According to the current situation, if a woman treats you well, you should kneel on the ground and think that other people are good people.

It's quite good-looking, but it's too focused on the setting. Naruto's entire world view is a mess, and it's not good to force certain details. But every time I think about the setting that Kishimoto came up with in his head, was frantically analyzed and studied by the author, and turned into serious nonsense, I want to laugh 😄

How could the Hyuga clan, or a separate clan, become Hokage? ! This is more magical than Uchiha becoming Hokage!

It's a good thing to pluck out a caged bird and roll its eyes, but it's not a good thing to treat fellow members of the same race like dogs. I think it's better to abolish the abuse and separate the clan families and stamp them together

How should I put it, I feel that the protagonist is too fast, he can develop ninjutsu casually, and he can research what he wants casually. The setting time is too short, it's a bit like reading a cool article, all your wishes come true

This Jibo style is yours at first glance. Compared with working from beginning to end, I don't know why but I just want to play Ci Bao. The protagonist of this book has a faint sense of madness, and the more I read, the crazier it becomes. In the end, the villain actually gave me a sense of high intelligence, which is outrageous. There was a little more drama at the beginning, but it started again later, either in the middle of a fight or on the way to a fight. The protagonist improves a little bit every time he fights, and with each fight, the main plot of the drama is almost unchanged, and the protagonist is almost six levels. At this level, it seems that literature and drama are not so important. My extraordinary brain tells me to use extraordinary force. It seems a bit ridiculous to engage in politics with this kind of force. It seems awkward no matter how I write it, so I just stopped writing and started fighting. So Cibao obviously didn't do anything, and it was over in a hurry after more than a dozen fights. I have to say that the fight is really fun to watch, but what about the harem that you promised, Tsunade, Hinata, Sakura, and Ino? ? ?

Author, did you forget something at the end of your last book? People from the ninja world are still hanging on the trees.

My feeling is that the heroine has too few roles. If you are an ordinary heroine, it doesn't matter. But Hinata Natsu calculated the protagonist at the beginning and made him awaken. I felt that the writing was really good, with unique characteristics and character. But you told me that the only function of her character is to awaken the protagonist, then I would just feel numb🙂

It fits my perception of the Hyuga clan. The strongest clan doesn't even have super-kage-level combat power when it comes to Six Paths Madara. It's a bit funny 🤔

Rebirth is not in vain unless the Hyuga clan kills all the clan members, then it will be frustrating to spend the rest of your life watching nothing.

The writing is very good, not cheating is a good thing, and the lack of system and panel is even more praised. The mortal genre should focus on research, trick games, and battles of wits and courage. Although it is not easy to write, the author must never give up, firmly believe in the path he wants to take, and then continue. Personally, I hope there will be a single heroine. Xia is fine. It's okay not to have feelings now. In the future, through some events, you can slowly change your thoughts on the psychological journey, as well as friendship, hatred, etc. In fact, it's quite good. It depends on your writing style. In the past three or four years, there have been almost no good drafts of Naruto fan fiction. Authors must believe in themselves. According to this writing method, there will be a place for you in fan fiction. It doesn't matter if you write slowly, the quality is more important.

I vaguely remember that the author posted a single chapter about life and said that he would write books seriously from now on.

I have seen quite a few eunuchs, and the author is also a top eunuch. I still need to subscribe to Outline Dungeon, tsk tsk.

You said you couldn't stand it anymore after working overtime and staying up late to write a novel. Why don't you just write a eunuch chapter and tell others about it and that's it? You had to fight for the outline shield, and then you were chased and scolded in the book club group, and then you broke through the defense alone and disbanded the book club group. You did it twice

The protagonist of this series is as crazy as the various crazy characters in the original book. However, the original character was not successful, while the protagonist of this book is successful.

Didn't we agree on a harem? Why can't we see any splashes at all? ! !

The fantasy before being killed by a caged bird

In fact, I feel that this book is not as good as the real story. What attracted me to read is that the heroine is well portrayed but the heroine's role is less.

If you want to accuse a mortal of being a loser, just start reading from Chapter 79. I have already said that there are a lot of foreshadowings in the front, and it almost shows that the genius is written on the face. Zero tail was also arranged very early, so it cannot be a mortal loser. At that time, some people criticized me 😅 The post that said that if you don't cheat, you will die, the post has 160 likes, and there are too many cloud readers.

The protagonist's strength in the early and mid-term can already be pushed horizontally, and if he just breaks the rhythm, you are worse than Shuilong in this aspect.

Keeping books and keeping them is coming to an end. I looked at the comments section and it's eunuch. Fortunately, I still have more than 50 pictures that I haven't subscribed to.

When I look at the author's writing, sometimes I use too much force and fall into low-value complexity. The control is not natural and loose enough, and it consumes a lot of energy on the part of the author. High consumption and low returns can easily lead to negative psychology; negative psychology is more positive than optimism, which will affect the physical condition; physical weakness can easily lead to negative psychology; negativity can easily make people do confusing operations that consume large amounts of money and have low returns, regardless of severity. As long as you have this awareness, you can break this negative cycle no matter where you start, and try to turn the flywheel of positive returns. Only by managing your physical and mental health well can you do a good job. You can't have more medical expenses than your salary, go to work at a loss, or run a business at a loss.

I feel like the author is at his peak when writing Naruto fan fiction, Uchiha Ci.

24 Cards after double, come on

I have no more recruits. Why is the group gone?

It's hard to stretch, doesn't it mean to write well?

Why did I just finish it after a hundred chapters?

The rhythm is messy. It's not fast in the first place, but I keep the pace of the novel so tight all day long. Didn't I plan an outline? Then I wrote a bunch of professional terms and put them in my book bag. The problem is that the sword comes out.