Douluo Starts with a Halberd

By the way, will the author ask for membership after this book is released? I hope it is free. The author of this novel is really good I hope it is free. I hope it is free. I hope it is free.

This novel is really good, I read it from Douyin 👍👍👍👍

The writing is mediocre and illogical. I was stunned when I saw the one-ring soul-killing king. The appraisal is completed. It's a brainless and cool article.

Don't say anything. Although it was said at the beginning of the first chapter, don't use your brain, but part of me thinks it's unreasonable, so just read it yourself. As we all know, most of the Douluo Continent has problems. What level is Tang San at this time? Just kill Soul Douluo. To put it simply, soul masters are really useless.

Isn't the protagonist looking for the Second Ice and Snow Emperor? They all have level 95 combat power and a ten-year-old killing god in the city of killing. It's really shameful that such a configuration doesn't give you the opportunity to compete with the ferocious ice and snow beasts. There is also the second martial spirit of Tianmeng Iceworm. As a heroine, Bai Chenxiang is really not as good as Zhu Zhuqing and Ning Rongrong. One has a figure and appearance and the other is top-notch Bai Fumei.

If it is named Douluo: Starting with a halberd. Then you will be popular

Author, you are really not suitable for writing novels. Now there are only two ways for you. One is to go home and farm, and the other is to drive screws. Other jobs. It still requires too much IQ for you

It's really hard to control for 30 seconds,

Can I still be cured if I misread the title of the book?🙂

Sorry, I made a mistake at first and read the last two words backwards 😃😃😃

What was written in the chapters before and after it was released? There are often inconsistencies. Ning Rongrong is in Shrek and not in Shrek. Zhu Zhuqing, the great soul master in the soul fighting arena, can match up with the soul sect. I really let my imagination run wild.

How did you come up with the idea of ​​having a 10,000-year-old soul ring as the second ring? The first 100,000 years is something that comes with the martial spirit, not something you absorb. The second spirit ring, if you still want one that lasts 10,000 years, can you hold on? You are too brainless. Don't tell me there is a war halberd. Even if there is an artifact, there must be some underlying logic, right? Even if it's fantasy, you have to have some underlying logic, right?

I would like to recommend a book. New book: "Douluo: I will repay Tang San severely after my second rebirth" has been released. A new writer has updated 100,000 words. Please give me some feedback and leave your valuable comments. Thank you very much! 🙂🙂🙂

The writing is very mediocre, and many words don't read smoothly. I have to complete the dialogue by myself while reading and thinking.

It's a bit high-speed and low-speed. After the killing city, the plot is a bit old-fashioned and childish. You are either invincible or stubborn. This guy pretends to be a pig and eats the tiger, but he still forces the pig to mix. It looks too childish.

The author writes well, please keep updating💪

The name Siji Sect is too unpleasant, so why not change it to Sixiang Sect. Four Symbols: Green Dragon (wood, thunder), White Tiger (gold), Suzaku (Fire), Xuanwu (Water) Although it is a bit far-fetched, bragging is not too much, right? Strength, damage, agility, and hardness are turned into a super low-end version of the Four Symbols, which is actually okay. If not, it is not good to use fairy grass to evolve the martial soul, and then induce the martial spirit to mutate into the characteristics of the four symbols by marrying a foreigner or recruiting a son-in-law. One day, the martial soul can be cultivated into a low-match four-image. In short, the name Siji Sect is really ugly. If you want to choose it, you should choose a strong name.

Please write more and check it after it is put on the shelf. There are many places where the sentences are not fluent and there are conflicts.

Keep up the good work, I hope you write better and better

I wish the author's talent in book writing and creation is like the endless flow of the Yangtze River. It is also the beginning. I would like to recommend the new fairy tale novel "The Beginning with an Ax of Punishment".

I've been changing it over and over again, but the writing doesn't make sense anymore, and it makes my head hurt when I read it. It's fun for people who don't have a brain, and I can read it even if I don't have a brain. But I really can't stand it anymore when I keep changing the text. The settings make my head hurt.