Douluo: Wuhun Jianmu, Am I a Fertile Creature?

The writing is pretty good, but the villain, God King Tang San, is a bit lame. He acts like a kid who has never seen the world and gets anxious when something unexpected happens.

The way the protagonist builds grudges with the Haotian Sect is really a bit... Well, I don't even know what to say. It just feels ridiculous. When I thought that this was Douluo, it made sense. After all, Dou Er had a Douluo who hugged a chicken leg and gnawed on it every day. Just like this. But I still have to say that there is no need to write Tang San's people in such a flat manner, with such villainous temperament.

It's not surprising to write about the protagonist of Time Travel Douluo who awakens any martial spirit. He insists on adding a background of collapsing iron to enter, and the god king Tang San is reborn. What else is there to read? What else is more exciting to write about? Tang San has been reborn with his selfish temperament and the protagonist Jian Jian gets a chance? So speechless

If you really want the protagonist to destroy Haotian, there are a lot of ways. For example, the protagonist followed the academy to hunt for souls and was almost killed by people from the Haotian Sect. This is all reasonable. The Haotian Sect is closed, so it also needs to hunt for soul rings. What can I say? There are 100 reasons. You have to choose a bunch of loopholes, not just one or two, but a bunch of loopholes.

The first is to suppress the level, and the second is to engage in the rebirth of the God King and reverse cheating. Let's talk about the first one first, lowering the level also lowers the intelligence. After lowering the level, everyone feels that it is normal. Although Douluo people's IQs are already low, they are not that low. We still know the normal level of talent and the upgrade speed. I absorbed a 600-year-old plant ring that was more than 200 years old. I upgraded it more than three levels on the spot and reached level 14 a month later. As a result, I relied on the power of abundance to not be afraid of injury and transformed the advanced meditation method into a practice method. He also added the setting of curing diseases and saving people, which is equivalent to mimicry environment can speed up training. With these, guess what level the protagonist will be in one year. The answer is level 17. With these tricks, his cultivation speed is barely better than Zhu Zhuqing's. That is to say, if the skill is not accelerated in the same environment, the protagonist's cultivation speed is not as fast as that of a seven-level advanced martial spirit. A god-level martial soul with an innate tenth level and a bunch of tricks can only upgrade to three levels in a year. Just like Xiao Wu, who eats, drinks and has fun every day and basically does not practice. With such speed, it can be said that once Xiao Wu practices seriously, he can get rid of the protagonist's exhaust fumes. However, no one in the whole family of the protagonist, including the protagonist, thinks there is a problem with it. There are so many things that even Xiao Wu, a top martial spirit, cannot compare to the innate tenth level, let alone Dou Er's super martial spirit, Mu En, whose innate tenth level rises to 4.5 Levels in one year. As for the later Dou Four The 12-year-old Soul King, there is no need for the protagonist to be embarrassed now. And in this situation where the protagonist has been reduced to rubbish, the author still continues to level up, feeling that he is not sure about absorbing the thousand-year plant soul ring. At level 17, he absorbed the 70,000-year-old soul bone from the ninth-ring soul beast that the protagonist's grandfather obtained just a few days ago. Let's finish talking about the remaining hidden things. The soul hiding power should be 223. Then I absorbed a 1,700-year-old plant soul beast. What's even more amazing is that after absorbing the soul ring, the level is 23. There is no more. The soul ring energy disappears out of thin air. In the past two hundred years, it would have been improved by three or almost four levels. But here, it has been more than a thousand years and it has not been improved by one level, but everyone thinks it is normal. Then the two god kings were reborn, cheating in the opposite direction, forcing the god king to be reborn and making Dou Er look at him as a traitor Tang San was reborn as Dou Yi, and then came a wave of epic level enhancements. Scan an area of one light year, After the reader said it, the author also said in the chapter that he was forced to find a reason. It is said that the protagonist cannot become stronger later and no one else can kill him. Just recover after the protagonist is defeated, The problem is to fight Er Nala Kua Tang San, level When I first started cultivating, there was a conflict of gods. Destruction, a veteran god king, allowed him to defeat him easily with one hand, and the Dragon God could defeat Destruction with one hand. And there are so many gods and god kings in the universe, the Supreme God King, which means that the protagonist's limit is only Tang San level. Moreover, it is in line with the author's idea to fight to the limit and break through the blood to counterattack. To put it bluntly, the author does not have the concept of fun in his mind, nor does he have the writing skills and the courage to write cool articles that are invincible, so he only suppresses the protagonist and cheats the other side, and then forcibly rationalizes his behavior.

You don't need to watch anymore when the God King is reborn, it's too toxic

Le, Lingshi = God King? ? ?

Even an ordinary Life Walker is enough to kill through this world.

That's enough. Every author who writes about fertility is so full of praise. It also has side effects. Things like the Demonic Yin Body and Moon Madness have nothing to do with Feng Rao. For the shit-stirring thing that is being done by Qianliang, Fenggao must be blamed. If you don't understand the plot, don't write it blindly. The essence of Fengfeng is selflessness and altruism. Even if the hunting star god accidentally injures himself when he is chasing Fengfeng, Fengfeng will not be able to resist a mouthful of Fengfeng's milk. The essence of abundance is pure goodness. The most we can blame is that the blessing of abundance does not depend on the quality of the recipient, and a bunch of evil people have obtained the divine power of abundance. But if the blessing of abundance has side effects, I will be the first to spray it!

Pressure level? If you continue like this, you'll be a clown

Ordinary Xianzhou people sit in a small escape sheath. If they fall from space, they will only fall apart. If they are put together, they will be fine (Picture 1) The physical fitness of ordinary people in Star Iron can be compared. The Harmonic Pigeon can fly out of the atmosphere. The Harmonic Pigeon has at least the second cosmic speed, which is more than 30 times the speed of sound. This speed cannot hurt Star Iron Pu. Tongren (Picture 2) Moreover, Xianzhou also has various forbidden spells. With the self-responsive body, it can beat the bone marrow of other creatures and have the ability of other creatures (Picture 3). Even after being in the demonic body, it can still be resurrected

Did I come to see you play support? For the first soul skill, you gave me a full treatment. Do you know that the ultimate goal for a soul master is to attack by force? The powerful Titled Douluo is not of the power attack type. Not to mention the writing style. Discourage them from the start. Moreover, the main character's matrilineal inheritance martial spirit, Fiery Fire Lingyuan, is more suitable for Douluo than Jianmu. Jianmu's stuff is too high-end. What you wrote is too rubbish and doesn't fit the bill. After writing it in style. You have to suppress its combat power again. At the same time, you have to strengthen others. Prevent the writing from collapsing. Douluo has so many top-level or super martial spirits that are suitable for the protagonist. I just want to write something that is not in line with the Douluo system. Be non-mainstream. Look different😤

No matter what the strength is, it will be completely weakened in Douluo

It doesn't really matter if you have multiple female protagonists opening a harem or something, but don't always focus on the love line. Your love line doesn't say how well written it is, and pure love is the only thing worth reading about love lines. If you write a love line in a harem story with multiple female protagonists, you will only feel that you are a scumbag. It's good to write about the relationship between the first female lead today, and how good the relationship is between the second female lead and the male lead tomorrow. It will only make people think that neither the protagonist nor the protagonist is serious. What's more, what's the most important thing to read when reading this book? Is it because you want to accept women? It depends on what will happen when you Douluo Dalu and Fengfeng Jianmu collide. It depends on your imagination rather than on you accepting women. You have written this part well. No one cares whether you are a single heroine without a heroine or a harem.

Anyone who can see through it is either mentally retarded or stupid, poisonous

Shouldn't the appearance be closer?

Apart from the name, everything else has nothing to do with fertility, it's just about taking advantage of the heat.

Poseidon didn't choose Shui Yue'er or Shui Bing'er to inherit because he wanted to compete for faith. This is a bit unreasonable. He is not sure that Tang San's situation is like finding an heir who can compete with angels for faith, and there are several other people with the qualifications to become gods around his opponent. I remember, isn't he in a hurry to run away with the bucket?

After seeing so many evil soul master training methods, the protagonist should doubt Tang San. If you observe more, you might guess it. I remember that Tang San often had plot characters appear in places that were not part of the original plot to raise questions.

This is not Dou Yiren, but the reborn God King. . .

Hello everyone, I am the flying firefly who fights the fire. I am very happy that you can read my book. I am here to thank you all. But I still want to say something to you here. As a new author, this book can be said to be a work of my temporary interest. It is really based on my passion. There is no outline or detailed outline, so I may have stepped on some bad points or something, I'm sorry! For example, regarding the heroine, the reasonableness of the plot arrangement, or even some very basic settings, etc., You can scold me if you should, without leaving a comment. After all, I have been a reader for many years, and I sometimes find faults when reading other people's books. So I understand everyone's mood. To be honest, I only knew the plot one day ahead of everyone else. My original purpose for this book was just to accumulate some experience so as to lay a solid foundation for the next book. There are some places that you won't understand unless you read it again. I don't know how many words I will finish this book, maybe 400,000, maybe 600,000, but I will try my best to finish the first book. Because as the number of comments increases, I won't read them one by one like when I first opened the book. So write a comment here. Thank you to the readers of various websites who have continued to subscribe. Thank you for sending recommendation tickets and monthly tickets. Thank you! Thanks! Thanks! Say important things three times! You are my biggest motivation to keep writing! Thank you!

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