Let the Valkyrie Offer Her Loyalty

Wo Ri, he is a genius if he can play more than 20 chapters in the opening plot.

At the very least, after gaining a certain amount of strength and confidence, he should be more or less confident. At least when the difficulty of the opening dungeon is so high, you can't be too timid and have to be assertive. Being unconfident will only show that the author does not know how to adapt when setting obstacles for the protagonist. Of course, it's not that the author hasn't made efforts in this area, but he just said that it still needs to be strengthened.

It's difficult, just do it if you want to, don't come back to write this one again after failing to achieve results in the new book 😁😁😁

Opened a new book again? It won't happen "again" again, right?

The setting is good. The main thing that readers can see is the emotional development with Valkyrie. Your plot is often ten chapters long and slow, so how can anyone follow it? Your development is similar to that of Youzhu next door. The plot is slower and incoherent, and there is no desire to follow it 🙂

Is there any problem with male heroic spirits appearing? This question is difficult to comment on.

This kind of novel is all about interacting with female characters. It's such a bland plot, and I only had time to read dozens of chapters in one go, so I just threw it on the bookshelf and put it on my bookshelf for more than ten days before reading again. The author should try his best to write the characters as brilliantly as possible. This is the highlight.

Didn't you go on business?

Is this really about raising books, or is my collection too watery and full of robots? The normal reading ratio is 5:1, but I can do it to 20:1, which is still okay. I'm scared of what you're doing.