Gundam Seed's Final Destination

The fight scenes are very slow, and the protagonist is always on the road to being cheated or being cheated.

It's on the new book list. You may be the first to write a seed to be on the new book list.

It's all Lux. I really want Lux to be the heroine...

I hope the author will make a side story or something to describe the daily dog ​​food between Noel and Lux. I believe that as long as you work hard, you can eat dog food.

To put it bluntly, this is a "fan novel" with a total of 800 chapters, and the plot of Shui Yuan's work is no less than 600 chapters.

At this point in the plot, the protagonist's position is actually very clear. He is on the side of Lux's idea of ​​peace. However, due to a genetic disease in his body, his mentality is slightly broken. He occasionally has some negative thoughts about "pulling the whole world with him", but in the end he chose the path of "redemption". Now that the plot has reached this point, the next step should be to unlock the "shackles" on the protagonist, so that the protagonist can let his dreams fly freely. The main difference in this process is whether others "redeemed" the protagonist, or whether he "redeemed" himself. The impact of these two results is very different. But I feel that there is a high probability that Lux will "save" the protagonist. She not only needs the sword of the protagonist, but also wants to invest her emotions, which naturally requires process and influence. Otherwise, the protagonist will most likely still be alone, he doesn't owe anyone any favors, and he doesn't have any important bonds worth fighting for. After all, he is the most selfless and selfish person...

Either the protagonist is a psychopath, or the author simply can't remember what he wrote ten chapters ago. From personal thoughts to attitudes towards the same thing, there has never been a unified attitude. Now I have a positive attitude towards someone or a certain force, but the next time I see them, I have a different attitude. Especially the attitude towards the Junius 7 incident. How many times has this happened? Sometimes he is concerned about sadness, and sometimes he is indifferent. First, he said that he was very sad to know that everyone in the orphanage had died, and then he said that he had only known her for a month and had no feelings for her. When the colleague said it, he forced a smile and said he didn't care, and then said that he had no feelings. When he was snatching the Gundam and following the Archangel, he saw the nun's body and rushed out to pick it up and said how he was. Then the Earth United Attack Plant said that he was an outsider and he was indifferent after Junius 7 exploded. It doesn't matter to me whether you abuse the master or not. I can accept some minor flaws. After all, it's rare to see Seed's fans nowadays. But can you stop making the protagonist's attitude so ups and downs? If you don't have enough writing skills and a bad memory, just write an outline honestly. If not, take notes on what the protagonist's mentality should be at each stage and look at it while writing. If you are really too lazy to do this, just don't write anything related to psychological changes. Let the protagonist have a firm mentality and attitude until the end. (I have been reading more than 200 chapters and this problem has persisted. After writing more than 200 chapters, I don't believe that no one mentioned this problem. In the end, I just didn't change it and wrote it down.)

It is indeed a rare fan, I will come back and read it when I think of it. The reason why people can't follow it is not the writing style. It's about the plot. As long as the named characters are hostile to the protagonist, no one will die. Even if the author couldn't bear it anymore, he arranged for the machine to be blown up and the person survived. It was extremely frustrating to watch. It's okay if the protagonist is not Long Aotian, but there is no historical deviation caused by the arrival of the time traveler. There are hands who want the plot to develop according to the original story no matter what, which is the most uncomfortable point. This is reflected in the protagonist's outrageous incompetence. The protagonist is not incompetent, but he is extremely incompetent because of the arrangements made by these hands. So gave up. Now that I'm back and reading this book, there happens to be a chapter about Lux's marriage. I subscribe to this chapter and it's the end. 🙂🙂🙂

It's been a long time since I've seen such a rubbish protagonist. The author probably wrote it based on his own mood every day. No wonder the protagonist is so neurotic. Someone whose mood changes drastically every day cannot be called a normal person.

There are very few people writing Gundam fanfics nowadays, and they are worth encouraging anyway. However, there are some serious problems in this book that seriously affect reading: the writing is immature, the characters' dialogue language is philistine, and the protagonist's actions lack logic. These two points lead to the protagonist's lack of charisma. There are too many reprints of the original novel, and there are too many meaningless inner activities. There are too many characters in the side story, resulting in the characters being messy and stereotyped. The most important thing is: What is the meaning of the protagonist's existence? It is recommended that the author refer to "UC Cannon Fodder Records", "Gundam EXA", "Gundam Chassis Fire Line", and "The Life of a Very Satisfactory Gundam Pilot and Temporary Worker of the Space-Time Administration". These are about 2 million words, and they have strong control of writing. You can learn from these authors.

So far, I personally find things in this article uncomfortable. 1. The protagonist's strength and reputation do not match. The protagonist has been passively defeated in the battle, and there are very few cases where complete victory is smooth sailing. The author extensively describes the importance of the protagonist and the terrifying strength of the protagonist in the daily chapters, but he is immediately defeated in the battle. I don't know if the author has discovered it. Personally speaking, the daily chapters are better written than the battle chapters. Some of them are even funny. At least they are very comfortable to read. 2. The enemy's immortality and enhancement. Not much to say about the immortality. I am always shot down but never die. The next time I come back, the people watching will be very depressed. Enhancement means that those enhanced people are getting stronger. If they just accumulate experience through war, it is nothing. Actually, because the protagonist evolves and passively improves the enemy enhanced people's strength through genes. Is this considered a win? Continue to fight the protagonist after passive enhancement? Very depressed. The author has already created a lot of original plots, and he can also create a few other powerful pilots. The enemies don't need to be immortal. After all, the butterfly effect of the protagonist is quite big. The author sets the male protagonist to be level 99. Is it difficult to fight enemies at level 80 or above? 3. Can't figure out the protagonist's ultimate goal. Alive? Peace? Or start a war? It feels like the protagonist is a little adrift. 4. Does the protagonist have any memory of the original plot? I don't know if I missed it. The original setting seems to be that people don't know the plot, but in the article, it seems that they know the direction of the world and often say some famous lines. So do you know?

Author, let me do the math for you. You code one word per second, which is 3600 per hour. There are 24 hours in a day. You sleep for six hours, eat for one hour, wash for an hour, and give you another hour for ideation. With 15 hours left, you can code 54,000 words, a chapter of 2,000 words, almost 27 chapters, but you only updated 1 chapter.

This novel has two awkward characters. It forces the plot to be based on the original work, and turns away and then turns back. Fan fiction should write its own stuff based on the background of the original work. This is a little bit of a twist on the original work.

Lux

At first, I felt that there were only so many characters with names, so I had to force myself not to die... Or I would die if I didn't. The protagonist was beaten and tortured every day, so it was okay to watch. It was also in line with the protagonist's experience being designed by many parties. Each character said lines such as "die to me" countless times, and then refused to die or something like that. It was assumed that the author was not strong enough and couldn't think of other lines. But gradually... I got really tired of it. They were a bunch of bastards from the side stories. They all had names at best. Most of them were executioners with average looks and disgusting personalities. They obviously couldn't beat the protagonist on paper, but they could always jump in the protagonist's face due to various reasons such as numerical superiority, machine advantage, and tactical advantage. I'm really tired of this constant cycle of jumping faces

The recent plots are becoming more and more unsightly. 1. The protagonist has traveled through time. It does not mean that the protagonist wants to crush anime characters, but he cannot become a tool person. Let me ask who has traveled through time in anime and wants to become a pure tool person. 2. The protagonist's gene has been solved. If he wants peace but is defeated in Zac's army, he is clearly called a hero and can develop his own power. If you don't resist, don't take responsibility, don't accept, and just wait for Lux's orders in Zac's Army, then you might as well just stay by Lux's side. Why go to Zac's Army? You don't need a brain to read this novel.

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Brother, you should come back and continue writing Gundam. You can really write a Gundam fanfic, but the rest is hard to describe. Come back to the track you can write on

When will Gossamer Yellow Hair come back? I want to see Lux and the protagonist merge into Gossamer Yellow Hair! !

How to put it... Anyone who can understand and read this book is very familiar with seeds So the author tried to reduce the background description of who is who .. Then the problem is, I don't know any of the people in the side story I ordered hundreds of chapters, but after I got to Akatsuki, I couldn't figure out what was going on Farewell

Hey, wasn't this seed fanfic finished long ago? Why was it suddenly updated again? But after reading it today, the author only updated it until April. When will the follow-up plan be updated? Please finish writing the theatrical version 🙏🙏

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This novel gave me a sense of déjà vu like playing a game with an overly dramatic plot. The protagonist is a villain, who pops up and acts as the boss in each level to increase the difficulty of the level. However, due to some reasons of his own, he is not a pure villain, so there will be game mechanisms for dialogue and persuasion from time to time. Sometimes he will become a teammate and show up to help for a few game rounds before leaving.

The iron wings split the star frost across the sky, and the causal blade cut down the illusion. Thousands of armies are dressed in white and blood in front of the formation, Nirvana will finally be pure light!

So are there any new books? I also want to read Gundam

Can't you finish writing the theatrical version in one go😅

The relationship development with Lux is understandable, but it would be better if it was more intense. Lux's participation in the whole novel is too little. If the main character's illness and Lux's relationship were described in more detail, it would be to my liking. It's a pity that there are no other types of books on the market.

I even went to finish up the side stories. My mind was originally clear, but before I finished it, it turned into mush.

So have you finished writing the copy? Didn't you say you wanted to finish writing it?

Did the author forget his account number? Come back and finish writing. I haven't even finished half of the movie yet.