Rebirth: My Life Is Refreshed Every Day

Is it really a dream to buy lottery tickets? It's statistics, not probability theory.

100% Will collapse, this type of writing is difficult

Your starting point is to borrow money to be a dog licker. This behavior makes readers dislike it very much.

If it is written well, it will redeem life, but if it is not written well, it will be a different kind of simulation essay. In order to make you have a perfect life experience in the past, you will frequently reverse the cause and effect, and you will worry about it without doing anything. 🐶 I have read a few books that use mobile phones as the medium, and they are popular at the beginning and four in the middle. Ask the author if there is no (pen) as the media, the timeline is fixed cause and effect, then: For example: 🐶The main body of the result changes ## things, so that the main body of the cause changes and the time of the main body of the fruit is changed, and oneself is dead or behind bars, wouldn't it explode? It has become a paradox (🐶Online view of time, but if it is not the case, how can the effect be the cause? I can only rely on the author🐶) (Dense fog!!!)

But, the young male protagonist is impulsive, and the older male protagonist is also confused. Whether it is follow-up investment or pulling the heroine out of her original family, the most important thing for the young hero right now is the first pot of gold, right? No matter how high the price of the house or Bitcoin is, it will not improve the situation faced by the young male protagonist much, right? Oh, is it that the older male protagonist values ​​his own environment too much and neglects the younger male protagonist? Personally, I am quite curious about your setting. If the core is on a pen, what should I do if the ink runs out? Just continue? Or is this also a plot point? If the eldest hero wakes up and has no memory of the past, then the eldest hero and the eldest hero are two different people. What does the young male protagonist think about another person taking over his body in the future? Is this a contradiction?

I think it's pretty good. It's not toxic overall, and the author's writing skills are acceptable. The author should be careful not to combine the two timelines too tightly, otherwise the writing will easily collapse. Even if the main world serves as a photographic memory for the rebirth story, don't pay too much attention to the cause and effect of the two times. Judging from the current situation, the handling is pretty good

It's very beautiful, I hope the author can continue writing it

The protagonist's character and IQ are a bit questionable. If the background is that the protagonist cannot even pass the college entrance examination, it will be consistent with the current plot.

There are very few two-way rebirth novels that I can read. I hope the author can write better and better. You can tell that the author is overpowering the protagonist, but overall it's okay. I hope it can land smoothly

I don't know if the author is young or something. Men and women in love. One of the people has a very romantic mentality, or I can say that I learned the feeling from novels. Recommended to watch Roland Miller's Intimacy. This will provide a better understanding of the interaction between men and women

You don't plan to get together until their timelines overlap, right?

Looks good, please update 👍

Well written, but too little