My Whole Family Knows Each Other from Tieba

It is a book whose gimmick does not match its content. The gimmick is that four people who do not know each other reorganize their family, and the content is about urban rebirth and making money. It can be seen that the author, as a Zhongdao, has a good understanding of that era and some industries, his writing is fluent and logical, and his writing style is sophisticated; however, he is not very good at portraying the reorganized family members, and he is not willing to write about this aspect. Rating 6/10, not satisfactory. The title of the book was changed to "I was born again and started cleaning in 2008" to better fit the plot of the text.

Skip, this book is suitable for reading dozens of chapters. After it was released, it was too watery. In addition, it was deliberately written about male and female supporting characters with low IQ and jealousy. At least two-thirds of it is unnecessary to read.

Evaluation: The title & introduction are fraudulent Explanation: The beginning is very amazing, but later it seems like inspiration has dried up. Only the title has a clue, and the content is completely copied and pasted into urban writing that has become a routine. In addition, there are some elements of grandeur and age, but because the author seems to be too serious in nature, he always uses some overly professional or rhetorical words when showing off. Conclusion: It is very entertaining. In addition, the routines are cut and pasted repeatedly. The plot is reasonable but too fragmented, and readers cannot fully understand the characters or emotions. Personal opinion: To be honest, I might consider developing into light novels (Japanese style/romance novels), which are more to my taste than writing about business and war. "Writing about business wars seems to lack momentum, writing about emotions only leaves logic; writing about plots has no feeling, and writing about daily life only sees words." I don't see the author's intention of copying these routines. If it is just for money or the most basic writing practice, please continue to work hard. But if you want to write a novel seriously, I suggest you not to continue studying this routine. Over time, not only will you lose inspiration and the ability to develop plots, but you will also be unable to write delicate emotions and exquisite descriptions. "I hope there will be one more person in the world who can write well. I don't want one more writing machine or breathing AI." I love you, author ❤️

A bit interesting, not like a new author

The early stage was fun, but the later business part was too boring. It even feels like a different writer.

Although it starts with the gimmick that the whole family met in Tieba, it is actually a very solid period novel, with entrepreneurship as the main line, and love and daily life as supplements. The writing style is very humorous, relaxed and interesting throughout the day, and the characters are well created. It is worth reading.

After reading a circle of comments, it is not unreasonable for the author to be scolded. The book's title and introduction have attracted a group of readers, but the core content is about rebirth and entrepreneurship with pretense, which completely deviates from readers' expectations and makes readers with high expectations feel like they have been deceived. This method may gain some exposure, but it also makes the audience attracted by this book less accurate, which is why the comment area is like this.

Why are you still dragging your p high school classmate... Who is the high school gouba looking for a sense of presence in the orphans when he has nothing to do? He is really convinced, or is he a member of the same class looking for a sense of presence, and no longer surfs the Internet? No more traveling? No more arcade games? Aren't you going to visit the university town? Don't you want to play with your classmates? Don't play basketball? Don't you play board games? At that time, Yu-Gi-Oh! Was very popular, table tennis, basketball and football, there was always someone to play with. As a result, I ran to the orphans to look for presence, and kept pulling. I didn't say anything when you pulled before, but you are still pulling. What kind of fairy high school did my brother belong to? This kind of fairy class... I can't imagine the learning atmosphere there 🙂

It was okay at the beginning, but then it got weird for no reason. Especially from starting a business to going to college, I felt like it was just the opposite of Jiang Qin and Feng Nanshu. The emotional scenes were very blunt and inexplicably touching. Moreover, the identity of the male and female protagonists made me feel like Liu Xing and Xia Xue were in love.

I am an ex-Navy soldier, and I belong to SBZA. I was offered a lot of money for this book, but I didn't take it. I just came to join in the fun. The main reason is that the money was not enough. Although it was a few cents more than other books, the money was still not enough to make me betray my conscience.

I won't talk about the content. After reading 4 chapters, it's very ordinary, and the character setting is very boring and cliche! All kinds of logic don't make sense! The title of the book is perfect, everything else is close💩

It starts well, but the rest is so-so or even cliche. The post bar only exists in the title of the book I don't want to read it until I reach Chapter 22 (reasonable suspicion is that I bought it at the beginning, or it's a gimmick.)

It's either garbage or a big bang. It seems like a god at the moment.

1: It seems like it was written by two people. The part written before the start of school was pretty good, but the traces of imitation after the start of school were too heavy. 2: It is about reorganizing a family, and the existence of "parents" basically disappears in the future. It is more like finding a reason to skip the first pot of gold and directly use this reason to get the start-up capital. 3: It's okay to imitate writing, but later it completely loses its own thing and becomes devoid of the author's personal style, completely like an assembly line product. Suggestion 1: After writing to this level, the emotional scene is just like that. You can continue writing, but the setting of the heroine is too Feng Nanshu. Don't use that kind of development for the subsequent life experience. It is better to be simpler, just a simple orphan. After the death of his parents, he is taken care of by relatives. All expenses are paid by the trust left before. 2: Since it is a single heroine, don't write about those rotten peach blossoms. One by one, you come up to lick it, and one by one you reject it. Since there are not multiple heroines, don't write about these flowers and plants. 3: The role of "parents" is brought up. According to the previous writing method, there should be two emotional lines in this book, the protagonist and the heroine, and the "parents" of this contract. Of course, the perspective must be unfolded from the perspective of the protagonist. Instead of writing that line alone. 4: As for the career line, it seems that there are currently three lines, board games (milk tea), school network (e-commerce), and housekeeping (smart home). Now it seems that I am not sure. If you write a, you will lose b, and if you write b, you will lose c. The suggestion is to streamline it, first do a to drive bc, and finally integrate operations. The results are pretty good so far, but there are quite a lot of feedback on these issues in the comment area. If the data is not solved, there is a high probability that the data will be cut again. Of course, if it is indeed a studio, just pretend that I didn't say anything.

I feel that there is indeed a probability that it is the beginning of the purchase from Legend. Otherwise, the contrast would not be so big. Does anyone know about this?

The beginning is very interesting. This kind of plot where a family is immediately formed after a casual chat on a post forum, and then "forced" to live together is very fresh and interesting. A bit like a sitcom? What I am vaguely looking forward to while reading is that the protagonist's mature, stable and young soul will be reborn, and these three family members, each with their own difficulties and shortcomings, will support and help each other, grow together, and finally heal the protagonist's regrets - such a story. During this period, you can insert a short story about each family member. The more I read, the more disappointed I became. It has become a cliche old story about Long Aotian being reborn in the city and becoming a business tycoon. Eh.

Hey, I still have the same opinion. If you focus on the four people, work hard to shape their characters, and take the career line by the way, even if you just make one or two of them extremely realistic and outstanding, it will be enough to make you book. If all four characters are extremely outstanding, platinum investment is not a problem. If on this basis, there are no flaws, the career line or other lines are integrated, and the details are polished to avoid occasional tics and low-level plots, then I really don't dare to think how far this book can go. But it is a pity that for now, this is a book synopsis fraud. Most of the manuscripts are submitted by old authors who have changed their vests or are outsiders. The previous book title synopsis and content can be said to be separated. So I guess the number of follow-up posts has been decreasing, because there are fewer comments at the end that are visible to the naked eye.

If you want to write about starting a business, then start a business well; if you want to write about campus love, then write about campus love; if you want to write about falling in love and starting a business at the same time, it's all fine. I don't understand why you are spending your activity room experience coupons all day long. Things worth tens of dollars are just like Nasdaq. You write every day. Recently, the chapter even brought in a classmate from the dormitory next door to come back and ask for 50 tickets for 100 yuan. Why are you making trouble here?

It was good to write about the daily life of a family of four, but as I continued to write, I focused on starting a business. Later, the main characters' roles were all gone and it became a one-man show, which has nothing to do with the title. It is true that I have picked up the sesame seeds and lost the watermelon.

How much did you spend on the beginning of this book?

As mentioned earlier, my younger sister posted family photos to Space, and then set up a big group of people in the class, just to ensure that they hit their high school class president... Later, everyone thought that the protagonist was a pretty boy who was being taken advantage of by his younger sister's boyfriend. Moreover, this routine has become a starting move and must be mentioned in every chapter. In the latest chapter, there is an entire chapter dedicated to this. Really frustrating. Overall, where is the innovation in this novel, where does everyone want to read it, and where is the logic. It's someone who doesn't understand. Especially since most people watching this are paying attention to your business? And with your status, you can start a business and have a study room... Okay.

No, buddy, what does the title of your book, the introduction, have to do with the actual content?

Typical person who takes advantage of a good idea and writes a piece of shocking shit may end up being a eunuch.

The author's level dropped off a cliff around chapter 14 and 15, and his personality began to distort at least in chapter 16. Maybe the new author can't grasp it? But the first ten or so chapters are really not at the level of a new author. I can only say Nan Mu

No, it doesn't matter if you write about urban writing, you write about entrepreneurship, you write about being pretentious and slap in the face, it's not that I can't read it, but you copy large sections of encyclopedia content from search engines to the number of words, and use me as a scapegoat for those who follow you?

Damn it, bro. If you haven't seen it, just read the previous one. After you went to college and started a business, except for your daughter, how many interactions did you have with that family? There are a lot of people in the back who are starting businesses in college and slapping other students in the face. Am I here to see this? I wanted to see the four people interacting as a family, not just the son slapping other classmates in the face.

I just got a start and then reborn as a pretense article about starting a business on campus! Running account belongs to yes! It's not sweet, tasteless and a little uncomfortable! The male protagonist often even deliberately stabs the female protagonist just to show off! I gave up after reading 100 chapters.

... I came from the Round Table, which talked about 7 chapters. I thought it was very good, but when I read the comments, they all said it was bad. Let's give it a try... Let's read a few chapters before talking...

It feels like it has deviated from the main plot and is seriously inconsistent with the title of the book. Cheap Dad hasn't appeared in a long time and I almost forgot about him. Cheap Mom and the heroine haven't appeared in a long time either.

I've read about 20 chapters, and I've written the pretentious slap-in-the-face routine of getting in a luxury car back and forth 4.5 Times.