League of Legends: This Mid Laner Is Too Loyal

I don't understand the author's point in writing about being drugged and playing with a high fever. Does he think this is still ten years ago? Wow, the protagonist won while sick! That's amazing! This whole thing is so outdated. The author is so engrossed in their own art that they can't pull themselves out, huh? It's gotten more and more disgusting the last few days I've seen it. I'm leaving now. You can keep indulging in your own art.

The story seemed promising at first, but then a major flaw emerged: the author forcibly suppressed the protagonist's fighting power and even had him sacrifice his future health to boost it. It felt like the author was indulging in a pretentious, overly sentimental tactic to annoy the readers, as it didn't contribute to the plot at all; it was purely meant to disgust.

It's already 2025, and LPL is still repaying the debt owed to IG in S8.

The biggest problem we're facing right now is that the authors really like to use skill names instead of QEWR, and the same goes for hero names. It feels like people are more accepting of their nicknames than their real names, and some of those names are so obvious that people don't even realize it at first glance.

Firstly, in terms of writing style, it fails to accurately depict the dynamics within the game, and the typos make it difficult to appreciate the story without looking at the author's illustrations. Secondly, the plot point of the protagonist playing a match while high on a fever is incomprehensible.

I don't know why the author started this book. It's possible that the authors are all Korean, not Chinese, or perhaps they are fans of Korean culture. Of course, this has nothing to do with the author. The point of reading novels is to enjoy them. But the writing was so frustrating. If you want to beat up LPI, there's definitely a market for that. But you seem so frustrated.

I was forced to abandon this story. The author's ban/pick strategy was too chaotic, focusing on banning and using whatever was available. The thought process was disorganized, and the writing was haphazard.

If it's written like this, the quarterfinals should be against IG, right? It's unlikely they were runners-up every year before their rebirth, and now they've been reborn to the quarterfinals. There's still the round of 16; a best-of-one series would take four chapters already. A whole cycle would take at least 30 chapters!

Before writing an esports novel, can you at least do some research on the professional players? They even got their IDs wrong! The plot started veering towards absurdity from the Intercontinental Cup onwards.

The romance scenes are so awkward, maybe you shouldn't write them at all; that woman is completely superfluous.