
Douluo: Heavenly Forged Thunder Hammer, I, Hammer God Thor
斗罗:天铸雷锤,我,锤神索尔
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 77k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Qidian
Stats
0Monthly votes
330Recommends
78Fans
37Chapters
Tags
Synopsis
Reader comments
Readers also read
Conquer the Comic World Starting from Bone King
New Age Melancholic Warrior
Douluo Jueshi: I, the Last Natural Disaster
Become a Serious Person Starting from Hokage
If You Are Already an Adventurer, Who Should Work Hard on Your Own?
Douluo: Experience the Parallel World and Shock the Whole Continent
Douluo: Daily Settlement, Starting with Slime!
The Artist Begins in Prison
Traveling at the Same Time: Great Love to the Heavens
Douluo: Travel Through Slimes and Evolve Infinitely
Douluo: Noumenon Sect Travels Through Douyi and Is Ten Thousand Years Ahead
Douluo: from Internal Boxing to Fa Tian Xiang Di
Douluo: Wuhun Infinity Glove, I Play with the World
I hope there will be an EMH version of Thor
This novel is written like some games nowadays. The protagonist is not like the protagonist. There are a lot of system bugs. I don't think much about rectification and optimization. I just think about making money.
It's a pity that the starting point cannot be scored. Otherwise, if I just give it one point, there will be a lot of bugs. And it's not just called strengthening, but since you wrote it based on someone else's Douluo Continent, you should respect some of their basic settings. At level 20, two parts can be transformed into a dragon. When Yu Tianheng reaches level 40 and participates in the Soul Master Competition, both the dragon wings and legs can be transformed into a dragon. They say they are just strengthening him a little bit, but in fact they are just giving him a higher standard. Others are strengthening him a little bit so that he can absorb a soul bone and gain one more soul skill. What you have here is just two more complete soul skills, the soul skill plus a flying ability.
The protagonist is gifted with a powerful martial spirit to reach the Millennium and Two Rings. Yu Tianheng can transform into a double dragon arm without doing anything. According to your way of writing, why don't you just change the protagonist?
The Blue Electric Tyrannosaurus spirit in the original book was originally set to be able to melt after level 30. Here, at level 20, both arms have transformed into dragons. The protagonist's first soul skill has been changed once. You don't want to add some creativity and optimization to the protagonist, but you are more attentive to the supporting role. Then why do you want to learn from this protagonist? What else is there for?
Do you have any reference to Thor in Valkyrie at the End of the World?
About typos
This is not a few times. From the time Ye Lingling appeared, it has always been Ye Lenglen. In these two chapters, we started to see Ye Lingling, but there is still a lot of Lenglen... Can the author pay more attention to this aspect? This really affects the reading experience.