Konoha Notes

The writing is very detailed, but I feel that the information density is relatively low, and the content is uninspiring and bland... There is nothing very poisonous, and there is nothing very attractive.

The writing is indeed good... But the author seems to regard ninjas as policemen, and ninjas are killers. Why are there so many twists and turns? Do you think you are Conan 🥱

The writing is very good, the wording is also very rigorous, and the deduction is reasonable. You can read it with your head. I was shocked when I saw someone in the comment area saying that the ferret was washed. Damn, it was written about the C-nin weasel, not the weasel in the later period. Using the sword of the previous dynasty to kill the officials of this dynasty is really unbelievable. It is a good grass level. I almost missed it.

The number of words is enough to kill all the previous Naruto fans.

As my favorite Naruto fanfic at the moment 😍, I have been using AI to run pictures recently, and I have managed to come up with a few usable pictures. I sent them out for everyone to give me some opinions 😌 First of all, the first version 🪖 As a first edition, the appearance actually does not match the description in the text, or in other words, except for the black eyes, the book does not give much description of the appearance. Therefore, it was given a black and dark green coat based on Shippuden Naruto. In order to make it different from Naruto, the collar was unbuttoned to reveal the mesh shirt inside. 🙂 The next thing is the hands. I have tried fingerless gloves, straps, wrist guards and other shapes. The most stable one is the fingerless bandage. There is also a thigh strap type ninja bag that comes as standard. Other than that, there are not many highlights. I have to say that this picture has high applicability The second version. To be honest, this style of painting is my personal favorite and is closest to hand-drawn comics. This version adds a ninja vest, and the underwear is changed to a black tights. In order to give it a special feature, a half-sleeved turtleneck jacket is added. In addition, fingerless gloves are added to the right hand The most important thing is the demeanor. In this version, a smile and a lazy demeanor are added, but the result is not ideal The subsequent styling changes mainly focus on the color matching and the windbreaker. This version is also good, but The hair color is light, which doesn't fit my personal imagination, so... I don't know how to stably generate this version of the hooded windbreaker, otherwise it would be perfect. Anyway, this is an advanced version of the previous picture, and then there is This is the final calm boy's face, and the subsequent generated version is a reliable adult version, but I always have a sense of déjà vu In fact, I quite like this version. , But it always feels like someone, don't believe there is another version I am really not Senju Minato (hahahahahahahaha) In addition, there is a version without a windbreaker (yes, the prompt I gave is not a god robe but a half-sleeved high-collar windbreaker. I originally wanted to refer to the red bean one) The biggest problem with AI-generated pictures is that it is unstable. Another is that it is difficult to give the desired characteristics. After all, AI It's not my own brain and hands. I hope you can give me some advice, or you can suggest some suitable appearance decorations that are in the original work and I will sew them on Another scrap Xiu Xiu Si hahaha what the hell OK, the upper limit of 10 pictures is full, that's it If the author can see it, he can write a description of the protagonist's image, as detailed as possible, I will go back and continue to update 😁

Finally, I have a Naruto fanfic that suits my taste. Naruto is a hot-blooded manga. As the protagonist, Naruto has been seeking peace in the struggle, looking for ways to resolve the conflicts between the opposing parties. But now, at least nine out of ten Naruto fanfics are all about political struggles and various conspiracy theories. They have no shadow of the original Naruto at all. They are just childish stories written in Naruto's skin and using what they think are correct Machiavellian theories. In my opinion, the self-righteous Machiavellianism of these authors in their twenties and thirties is probably inferior to that of the village party secretary of their own village. And this book, like the original, actively seeks peace in struggle and finds ways to coexist in the confrontation between ourselves and the enemy. At least those conspiracy theories and childish political struggles are gone.

"Whitewashing" refers to the process in the ACGN subculture of turning characters originally set as villains or negative characters into positive characters or gaining sympathy from the audience through the advancement and revelation of the plot. When you say that the author is whitewashing, please first clarify the definition of whitewashing. The author's Itachi is currently in a stage before the genocide. At this time, Itachi has developed a dislike for the Uchiha clan because of the twisted values ​​​​of the Uchiha clan, and is still looking for a solution to the conflict between the village and the family. The genocide has not happened, and Itachi has not even thought about it at this time. To create fan works on this basis is to intervene and modify the subsequent overall plot. If the subsequent incident of the Itachi genocide did not happen, and the so-called black history did not occur, how could it be cleared up? In previous Naruto fan fiction, whitewashing in the serious sense was nothing more than three techniques: 1. Change the murderer, for example, it was Danzo or Kenji who really did the killing, not Itachi 2. Shape Itachi's behavior into a forced one As a last resort, for example, Danzo used Sasuke's life as a threat to force Itachi to exterminate the clan 3. Cleanse Itachi from the motive and substitute himself into the Hokage's value system The above is about what many people say, the view of whitewashing Itachi is not tenable. Secondly, there are many advantages of this book 1. There is no system. Although the Mudun plug-in is enabled, it is reasonable and the growth system and process are logical. It is very comfortable to read 2. The writing is very smooth, the writing is good, and it is good for people. The characters are well depicted 3. The description of the tasks is good, and the world view structure is very rich Overall, it is very comfortable to watch There are also shortcomings. The overall pace is slow and not very refreshing. It is suitable for watching, but it will be a little uncomfortable to follow. Also, the subsequent annihilation of the Uchiha clan depends on how the author handles it. It is easy to get into trouble here. There are many fan works that either may really fall into the situation of whitewashing ferrets, or they want to solve this problem from a more grand level. However, some of them are not strong enough in writing and fail to write on their own. Some of them have insufficient vision and pattern, and their methods are too childish and ridiculous. Hopefully this book can avoid that.

The writing is very good, but I always feel that I can read it or not, and I don't have the desire to keep reading.

Author, please don't write about the protagonist's love story. Wenqing has faded away from the birds in Naruto. . . If you want to marry, hurry up and spend your writing energy on other plots.

When will you be with Tsunade?