Konoha Notes

It feels like all the measures taken by the protagonist are just patching things up in the ruins of the ninja world 😒😒 It's better to develop yourself directly, and then overthrow it and start over when you become stronger.

This book is different from Naruto fandom's Heavy Harem, Shuangwen, and Invincible books. It's not on the same track. So readers who want to read the harem cool novel in a hurry don't need to click on it, but readers who want to see a different Naruto fanfic can click on it. After all, most fan protagonists rely on their strength to conquer the world, but that is the Sage of Six Paths and Hashirama. The world was peaceful when these two were alive, but wouldn't it be chaotic after death? You see, a battle started not long after Hashirama died. Most Naruto fans follow the strategy of increasing their strength to the point where they can overturn the entire world and force peace on the world. This is indeed a path, because in the original work there are two people who can conquer the whole world. Even Nagato collects tailed beasts in order to gain the power to conquer the whole world and achieve peace. But this kind of peace is fragile. It is a peace based on the thoughts of a strong man. Then once this strong man dies, the peace may continue, but there is a high probability that the empire will fall apart later. After all, people will always fight for power, there will always be inequality, there will always be classes, there will always be differences, and there will always be careerists, then peace will always break down. So Madara has seen this clearly. From the melee between the ninja clan in the Warring States Period to the establishment of the ninja village later, the way ninjas accept tasks has not changed. That war is inevitable. So Madara chose the Eye of the Moon plan to let everyone enter a beautiful dream and achieve peace. Madara also plans to take the path of conquering the world with manpower, and it is also for the sake of peace, so what is wrong with this? After all, tragedy and pain have always existed in the ninja world. Even the childhoods of Naruto and Sasuke, the protagonists, were tragic and painful. There are many ninjas like Naruto and Sasuke, it can even be said that they are the majority, but in Boruto, the ninja world is peaceful. Because of the Fourth War, the anti-war sentiment in the five major ninja villages reached its highest level. Coupled with the sincere cooperation during the Fourth War, there was a cornerstone of peace. And a hellish point, the reason why the Ninja Village's emotions reached its peak anyway were enemies like Obito, Madara, Zetsu and Kaguya who could threaten the entire world. Even after the end of the Fourth War, Sasuke wanted to embark on this path and make himself an enemy of the world so that the Ninja Village could cooperate, but he was pulled back by Naruto. In the original work, the cooperation between the five major ninja villages was indispensable with Naruto as the connecting point. Because of Naruto's trust and strength, there were opportunities and platforms for dialogue. The positioning of the protagonist in this book is similar to that of Naruto in the original work, but the protagonist has a vision beyond the times and even knows the plot, so he can avoid most mistakes and make layouts. The protagonist of this game is not taking the path of conquering the world, but pursuing win-win cooperation. He begins to try to change the positioning of powerful ninjas, and even changes the world. This is already very good. Most Naruto fanfics reach the peak of their strength and start to crush the world, letting the world be how they want it to be, skipping those governance issues.

As the title says, it's rare to see such a well-written Naruto fanfic. The author's depiction of details is touching. I have read many Naruto fanfics, and most of their focus is on the protagonist's pursuit of power. This is true in contemporary online literature. But the problem is that if the subject of Naruto just falls into the cliché of fighting monsters and upgrading in fantasy novels, it will be difficult to write well. Most of the works about Naruto are very dependent on the original work and at the same time very "innovative". Reliance on the original work is reflected in the fact that the protagonist has an understanding of the plot of the original work, so it has advantages of one kind or another. The so-called "innovation" does not refer to those relatively reasonable or unreasonable secondary creations, but to random fabrications that describe the characters after being divorced from the plot. In many books, after the protagonist has changed the plot, and there is no reference to the original plot, the characterization of the original character has become so outrageous that people cannot bear to look at it. After leaving the original work, they no longer know how to write a book. But this book is different. Although the protagonist has also changed the plot, the people here are all fresh and vivid. You get the sense that this is what they should say, this is what they would do, this is what they would change if faced with a different situation than in the original. The Konoha and ninja world described by the author have souls. You feel like this is really another timeline of the ninja world, a timeline with Shuji, which is really nice. Good stories can move people. Just like "Naruto Shippuden", this "Konoha Notes" also moved me very much. It's so happy to see such a good story. All the remaining 33 monthly votes this month have been voted, consider it a little support for the author.

It's okay, I have my own ideas, it's not a typical pretentious and slap-in-the-face article

The writing is very detailed, but I feel that the information density is relatively low, and the content is uninspiring and bland... There is nothing very poisonous, and there is nothing very attractive.

The writing is indeed good... But the author seems to regard ninjas as policemen, and ninjas are killers. Why are there so many twists and turns? Do you think you are Conan 🥱

The writing is very good, the wording is also very rigorous, and the deduction is reasonable. You can read it with your head. I was shocked when I saw someone in the comment area saying that the ferret was washed. Damn, it was written about the C-nin weasel, not the weasel in the later period. Using the sword of the previous dynasty to kill the officials of this dynasty is really unbelievable. It is a good grass level. I almost missed it.

The number of words is enough to kill all the previous Naruto fans.

As my favorite Naruto fanfic at the moment 😍, I have been using AI to run pictures recently, and I have managed to come up with a few usable pictures. I sent them out for everyone to give me some opinions 😌 First of all, the first version 🪖 As a first edition, the appearance actually does not match the description in the text, or in other words, except for the black eyes, the book does not give much description of the appearance. Therefore, it was given a black and dark green coat based on Shippuden Naruto. In order to make it different from Naruto, the collar was unbuttoned to reveal the mesh shirt inside. 🙂 The next thing is the hands. I have tried fingerless gloves, straps, wrist guards and other shapes. The most stable one is the fingerless bandage. There is also a thigh strap type ninja bag that comes as standard. Other than that, there are not many highlights. I have to say that this picture has high applicability The second version. To be honest, this style of painting is my personal favorite and is closest to hand-drawn comics. This version adds a ninja vest, and the underwear is changed to a black tights. In order to give it a special feature, a half-sleeved turtleneck jacket is added. In addition, fingerless gloves are added to the right hand The most important thing is the demeanor. In this version, a smile and a lazy demeanor are added, but the result is not ideal The subsequent styling changes mainly focus on the color matching and the windbreaker. This version is also good, but The hair color is light, which doesn't fit my personal imagination, so... I don't know how to stably generate this version of the hooded windbreaker, otherwise it would be perfect. Anyway, this is an advanced version of the previous picture, and then there is This is the final calm boy's face, and the subsequent generated version is a reliable adult version, but I always have a sense of déjà vu In fact, I quite like this version. , But it always feels like someone, don't believe there is another version I am really not Senju Minato (hahahahahahahaha) In addition, there is a version without a windbreaker (yes, the prompt I gave is not a god robe but a half-sleeved high-collar windbreaker. I originally wanted to refer to the red bean one) The biggest problem with AI-generated pictures is that it is unstable. Another is that it is difficult to give the desired characteristics. After all, AI It's not my own brain and hands. I hope you can give me some advice, or you can suggest some suitable appearance decorations that are in the original work and I will sew them on Another scrap Xiu Xiu Si hahaha what the hell OK, the upper limit of 10 pictures is full, that's it If the author can see it, he can write a description of the protagonist's image, as detailed as possible, I will go back and continue to update 😁

Finally, I have a Naruto fanfic that suits my taste. Naruto is a hot-blooded manga. As the protagonist, Naruto has been seeking peace in the struggle, looking for ways to resolve the conflicts between the opposing parties. But now, at least nine out of ten Naruto fanfics are all about political struggles and various conspiracy theories. They have no shadow of the original Naruto at all. They are just childish stories written in Naruto's skin and using what they think are correct Machiavellian theories. In my opinion, the self-righteous Machiavellianism of these authors in their twenties and thirties is probably inferior to that of the village party secretary of their own village. And this book, like the original, actively seeks peace in struggle and finds ways to coexist in the confrontation between ourselves and the enemy. At least those conspiracy theories and childish political struggles are gone.

"Whitewashing" refers to the process in the ACGN subculture of turning characters originally set as villains or negative characters into positive characters or gaining sympathy from the audience through the advancement and revelation of the plot. When you say that the author is whitewashing, please first clarify the definition of whitewashing. The author's Itachi is currently in a stage before the genocide. At this time, Itachi has developed a dislike for the Uchiha clan because of the twisted values ​​​​of the Uchiha clan, and is still looking for a solution to the conflict between the village and the family. The genocide has not happened, and Itachi has not even thought about it at this time. To create fan works on this basis is to intervene and modify the subsequent overall plot. If the subsequent incident of the Itachi genocide did not happen, and the so-called black history did not occur, how could it be cleared up? In previous Naruto fan fiction, whitewashing in the serious sense was nothing more than three techniques: 1. Change the murderer, for example, it was Danzo or Kenji who really did the killing, not Itachi 2. Shape Itachi's behavior into a forced one As a last resort, for example, Danzo used Sasuke's life as a threat to force Itachi to exterminate the clan 3. Cleanse Itachi from the motive and substitute himself into the Hokage's value system The above is about what many people say, the view of whitewashing Itachi is not tenable. Secondly, there are many advantages of this book 1. There is no system. Although the Mudun plug-in is enabled, it is reasonable and the growth system and process are logical. It is very comfortable to read 2. The writing is very smooth, the writing is good, and it is good for people. The characters are well depicted 3. The description of the tasks is good, and the world view structure is very rich Overall, it is very comfortable to watch There are also shortcomings. The overall pace is slow and not very refreshing. It is suitable for watching, but it will be a little uncomfortable to follow. Also, the subsequent annihilation of the Uchiha clan depends on how the author handles it. It is easy to get into trouble here. There are many fan works that either may really fall into the situation of whitewashing ferrets, or they want to solve this problem from a more grand level. However, some of them are not strong enough in writing and fail to write on their own. Some of them have insufficient vision and pattern, and their methods are too childish and ridiculous. Hopefully this book can avoid that.

The writing is very good, but I always feel that I can read it or not, and I don't have the desire to keep reading.

Author, please don't write about the protagonist's love story. Wenqing has faded away from the birds in Naruto. . . If you want to marry, hurry up and spend your writing energy on other plots.

When will you be with Tsunade?

In fact, the writing is good, but the plot is designed to make people feel uncomfortable. It is basically a pig's foot discovering a problem and then doing useless work. Things happen and are solved. It's okay not to tell this thing in advance, but you have to tell the whole thing from God's perspective, and let the readers watch this thing happen later. You know, it's uncomfortable for people to watch. You don't need to write it in advance to foreshadow it. It's not good to write it straightforwardly without solving the problem. It's also too bland, and there must be no ups and downs, but this is a small problem.

Can you please stop making the interaction between the protagonist and Tsunade so ambiguous? Isn't it uncomfortable? Tsunade is old enough to be the protagonist's mother. In this article, you let Tsunade, who is around 40, behave like this with an underage protagonist. Why on earth?

This book should be considered unfinished, right? From the perspective of Naruto fans, there is a lot that has not been explained, and it makes no sense purely from the perspective of the story of the novel. There is no follow-up to the daily content that takes up a lot of space, and the original characters that are focused on are not expressed, and it becomes pure water content. 🙂

I don't know when it started to become endless daily water. If I have to say it, the plot has been exactly the same since the Joint Chunin Examination, with the same people and the same things. It feels like the whole world is just the author's ramblings.

It seems a little bit literary, not as good-looking as the first half. There are less fights.

First of all I think Tsunade is inappropriate. The age gap is large and close relatives are not a key factor. The main reason is that they are not described as lovers, but as siblings. Among them, there is also a dialogue where Tsunade teases the protagonist about his relationship with other women. I would personally feel weird if she became the heroine later. Secondly, I don't think Terumi Mei is suitable to be the heroine. Because she is targeting the Mizukage. If she wants to be a girlfriend at this stage, it is important to have a long-distance relationship with the protagonist. The most important thing is that the Mizukage and the top management of Konoha are lovers. I think the Kingdom of Water is unacceptable. I think Terumi Mei should put the Kingdom of Water in a more important position than love. Unless the ninja world is completely at peace in the end, the heroine will be chosen. Then, Hongdou's words are mainly because the author's description is a bit lacking now, otherwise I think she is also a suitable choice for the hostess. Finally, it is obvious that I think the most suitable heroine should be Samyi. Judging from the author's writing, she is undoubtedly the most suitable. Her falling in love with the protagonist will not be opposed by the Kingdom of Thunder.

After reading it personally, I feel that this book is more like a historical text🤔? The whole book focuses more on politics, diplomacy, and military affairs. The usual plots of daily life, adventures, and missions serve as the spice of the book. The story of the whole book is interspersed with various plots to redeem "uneasy feelings". It is quite special among the fans I have read? I don't know what book friends think. I personally haven't read many light novels, but I have read a lot of historical novels. Maybe a large number of light novel fans are like this?

The previous writing was really exciting, but the content of these dozens of chapters has become very dull recently, and I don't know what I'm talking about. Are there any friends who feel the same as me, or do you think they didn't get the author's point?

Except for the 30 chapters of overly long and drawn-out fighting plots in the first 50 chapters, this book is enough to make me not read other Naruto fan fiction in the future. It's not that I don't like reading it, but I can't accept it in other ways. It's like Douluo or the first three young masters of the Tang family. It's the same as Dou Po, Seeking Demons, Covering the Sky, and Eternal Life. After reading this book, and then reading other Naruto fan fiction, I will always subconsciously compare it, and the inferior ones will make people feel childish.

What was the previous book? Want to see

No? Is this the end? I feel like there are a lot of things that haven't been mentioned, like Orochimaru, Madara, etc.

I just found out today that it is finished. Who is the heroine in the end? Samui or Tsunade? Please let me know if you have read it 🙏

It's over. After reading this one, I can't stand reading other Naruto novels anymore. Author, please forgive me for not having read your novel 😭😭

When will the new book be released? How about a book on Death?

Haven't you finished writing this? I have a lot of tail left. If I stick to it for another month, I feel like I can at least write 30-40 chapters. Let's explain it clearly before we go 😢

This is the only one that has this length of fandom area, maintains this quality, and can still finish it.