Myriad Worlds: I Begin with The Outcast and Gain Divine Traits

Dude, there's something I'm not sure if I should say. Have you ever played Ghost Valley Eight Desolations?

The martial arts level in Under One Person feels a bit mediocre. The techniques and their underlying concepts are very profound, but the combat power feels quite weak. The destructive power is not as good as that of the TV series version of Storm Riders. The combat power in the world of Fengyun, a martial arts world, is stronger than that in Under One Person.

The author should unleash their imagination, for example, by developing techniques from anime, such as a superimposed sealing attack with a ki cannon. Otherwise, it will be bland and tasteless. To rise to the top, you have to do things like this.

It tastes bland and unappetizing, yet it's a pity to throw it away!

The plot conflict wasn't well-written; it was written in a very flat and straightforward manner.

It felt like playing a game where you only did the main quests, ignored the side quests, and skipped all the story. It was a complete waste of time.

It's poorly written, the plot is nonsensical, and the narrative feels disjointed.

The protagonist's cheat ability is ridiculously weak. He can only condense a term after mastering a cultivation technique to its peak, and then there are no term slots available. He's even worse off than some ordinary superhumans.

The original protagonist didn't cultivate properly and wasn't much behind Zhang Lingyu; he caught up in just over a month. Now, he's cultivated diligently for seven more years, yet he's still not as good as in the original story.

I don't understand it. I don't know what the author is trying to express. The protagonist is fragile (exposed to the Three Corpses) but is single-mindedly pursuing the Dao (will do anything for the sake of the entry), but he doesn't understand where his path is.