
Spirit Zombie Fairy
灵僵仙
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 65k Words
- Genre
- Cultivation
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Cultivation Civilization
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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32Chapters
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The creative writing is good, but the writing style and life experience are not as good as each other. It is probably a very young author who needs to improve. In various senses, it is not only the writing style, but also the life experience.
The writing is too bland and not exciting enough. Just killing the two supporting characters in the first few chapters could have been written more enjoyable. You can look at "Water Monkey" and "Gou in the Martial Arts World". The general environment is depressing and there are weak crises, but there is also a strong crisis at the moment. In "Water Monkey" there is a character who looks like a gangster, staring at the protagonist and wanting his boat. "Gou in the Martial Arts World" also has a gangster leader who comes to collect money. Then the protagonists of these two books both awakened the golden finger, and after their strength increased, they directly killed the gangster. You can also learn to do this in your book. You might as well change it to the two supporting characters at the beginning to suppress your protagonist, watch the protagonist die and take away his body, or prepare to frame the protagonist in various ways, and then the protagonist uses the golden finger to upgrade and kill them both directly. Killing in this way is meaningful and satisfying. As for your original explanation that it is to increase the degree of danger and prevent others from coming, I can only say that at most it is a logical recognition and increases substitution, but mere substitution has a hammer! I read books to enjoy myself!
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