Mortal: I, Li Feiyu, Draw Cards to Become an Immortal

This book is very comfortable to read. I have seen 99 chapters so far. There's nothing poisonous about it. The protagonist's hooks are very reasonable and smooth. The protagonist's ideas are also very clear. The author did not deliberately design conflict points for the sake of the plot. The protagonist's growth model closely revolves around Golden Finger. The first stage is mainly about martial arts, growing up step by step in mortal society, and transitioning into an immortal cultivator. The second stage is to focus on the four arts of cultivating immortals, highlighting the value in the cultivating society, focusing on stability, and gradually growing. The IQ is online, the killing is decisive, the rhythm is clear, and there is no emotional drama. The best among fan books.

Even such basic requirements cannot be met. No one can read this book

Just looking at this directory, I have no desire to click on it. When I scroll to the bottom, it is still writing about Yu Tongzi. I don't understand what is there to write about in the world. Can't I just brush it off? I want to see real mortals, why don't I go see the original Xianxia? Writing fan fiction is all about having fun, and if you bother with this grinding, you deserve no grades! ! !

It shouldn't be extraction, it should be called copying. I just can't figure out why the four spiritual roots are copied? If I were there, I would look for the Heavenly Spiritual Root and the Double Spiritual Root! It was also said that he was recruiting Han Li's younger brother. Anyway, I saw so many fans saying this before and then directly licking the hook. I saw that there is a seventh level of Qi refining on that panel. Can the cultivation level be copied? If I could directly enter the Bloody Forbidden Land, play with Nangong Wan and copy the Jindan cultivation. I am the Jindan ancestor. After I go out, I will visit the Yuanying Mountain gate and copy the cultivation. I am the Yuanying old monster. When I get to Kunwu Mountain behind, I will directly copy the Mahayana ancestor, and then ascend to the spiritual world to finish!

My IQ is not online at all, so I just looked at the original work and decoded the details, and then added some martial arts elements. If I have better spiritual roots and resources in the early stage, I will just use Han Paopao to build them as hard as I can, and just do calculations. How can I get more and better? Everyone knows, right?

It's a rubbish book. I wrote a fanfic. I still have more than 50 of them. The Qixuanmen is speechless. It even has plug-ins.

Everyone comes to see the cultivators. Are you going to write a hundred chapters about the Mortal Martial Sect? Write about Qixuanmen quickly so that everyone can read it, otherwise you will have to skip or jump to read it.

It is difficult for those who have never taken the Foundation Establishment Pill to reach the 13th level of Qi refining. The 12th level is basically the top. At the 10th level, you can try taking the Foundation Establishment Pill to build the foundation. But everywhere in the article it is mentioned that taking Foundation Building Pills on the 13th floor is really unnecessary.

Are you drawing a card or copying it?

This author's updates have been too unstable since it was put on the shelves.

I have been in Qixuanmen for too long and have written too much.

Really, this is the first time I see a fan of Mortal Cultivation of Immortality who has more than 40 chapters and is still hanging around in the Qixuan Sect.

I have finally entered the fairy world. I would like to give the author some advice to write in a more enjoyable direction. The plot should not be too clumsy like the previous dozens of chapters. How can I write invincible if there is such a hook?

A complete introduction to the panel. You do this card-drawing cheat. Not even a panel. They don't seem to understand the protagonist's abilities

You already have five spiritual roots, but you still want to give away the Immortal Ascension Order? You don't think about how to use the golden finger to improve your spiritual root qualifications as quickly as possible, use the forbidden land to obtain more resources, and successfully build the foundation. You only think about begging Han Li to give you some resources without any thoughts of your own. .

,

I keep smoking and then stop smoking. Why don't I use my golden finger?

Eunuch 😥

Taoist friends are welcome to read and comment!

The protagonist has good spiritual roots, so why does he have to learn the Qingyuan Sword Technique? This is not the only kind of technique that has a lot of mana.

Is it useful if the protagonist is already a genius and still fears being conspicuous?

It will be updated as soon as it is released 😡

There are too many martial arts plots, and readers are not very interested.