Supernatural Infiltration

Just like the title, I feel that the writing is very streamlined and full of management. I finished reading the second dungeon. Some of the traps are very shallow. I still don't know what the cost of using supernatural items is. I feel that they are props with no negative effects. Is it at the cost of fate? It is not clearly written. The role of the prop is still hidden due to the fate. I won't comment on this for now. When describing a scene, the author likes to say what (the character) sees. What about feelings? What about the atmosphere? What about the smell? What about temperature? The author should not be too literal when it comes to exaggerating emotional points. Some scenes can be omitted appropriately, and some (head-on critical attack) scenes can be focused on describing. I hope the author will continue to work hard, come on!

Yes, the essence of the infinite supernatural flow is asymmetric confrontation, that is: people are always weaker, and ghosts cannot communicate with people normally. As long as you write according to this law, there will be supernatural beings who come to read it.

2025.9.1 Downgraded to Liangcao. The main problem is that the reality part is too ordinary and uninteresting. The copy is much more exciting than the reality. Perhaps the author should adjust the ratio of reality and copy to about 1:5 which is more appropriate. In addition, joining the officialdom may be a failure. Joining the officialdom forces the protagonist to shoulder the task of dealing with the weirdness of reality, which greatly increases the proportion of reality. Perhaps it would be better to stay out of the way and focus on the dungeon part, but it can't be changed now. —————————————————— 2025.8.23 Ice grass, highly recommended! No system or even plug-ins! Finally I found an orthodox horror book, instead of a high-level martial arts cultivator dressed in horror... I almost vomited at that kind of thing🤮 The author made a very good choice - the strange invasion is divided into two parts: the dungeon and the reality. Although after clearing the dungeon, you can get ghost weapons that increase your combat power, but! Ghost weapons can only be used in reality to solve strange invasions in reality. After entering the dungeon, you can only rely on the protagonist's own will, courage and wisdom to pass the level. A very good setting, which divides the whole book into two lines. Outside the dungeon, you can improve your combat power to fight ghosts, and inside the dungeon, you can rely on courage and wisdom to defeat the horror. It not only improves your combat power, but also ensures a sense of terror. It has the best of both worlds. One more time, the author actually didn't give the protagonist any hooks, which is really commendable in this Internet literature circle where there are so many hooks everywhere.

Newcomers are welcome to eat, and those who are hungry will vote for each other.

This is a very interesting novel with a weird theme. I highly recommend it.

It's a pretty good refueling product, with the smell of a gentle persuasive person. I feel like the current plot is one of the few good ones in the suspense circle right now.

Author, who are you? The Guinness record is for typing 807 letters per minute. Calculating that each Chinese character requires six letters, you can type about 134 words per second. Since you are not a holder, we will calculate it as 100 words per second According to WHO standards, a person's healthy sleep time is eight hours, and you need about 100 words per second to eat every day. Spend two hours, another 20 minutes to go to the toilet, 40 minutes to wash up, one hour to exercise, two hours to express inspiration, and then strip away another hour of dazed fishing. You should have nine hours to type, and you should produce 435,780 words. Calculated based on 2,000 words per chapter, there should be 217 chapters, but you only put so much content every day, how come? Honestly, is it a deduction?

Is there a book club? The writing is very good.

It's just that the supporting characters died one by one.

If you prefer traditional supernatural novels, you can take a look. It has a very ancient supernatural flavor, no messy immortal cultivators, no mentally ill protagonists, and no undead knights (emphasis added). This is my favorite novel! However, the writing style does have the immaturity of a new author, which cannot be avoided. In short, I hope the author can continue writing. There are indeed not many such articles nowadays. Then I would like to give some suggestions to the author. I will apply the theory of Chekhov's Gun here. If a gun appears in the first act, it should pull the bolt in the second act and fire it in the third act. As for supernatural novels, it is not too late for the gun that appears in the first act to be pulled in the fourth or fifth act, or fired in the ninth, tenth or even final act. As long as it is fired, it can be recovered. But the author's use of guns, that is, foreshadowing, always gives people a very urgent feeling. He often looks for a gun in the first scene and then pulls the bolt and fires it in one go. In fact, it feels to me that supernatural writing very much needs foreshadowing and delayed triggering.

It's not a lot, but it's a small encouragement. I wish the author may become a god as soon as possible

If we maintain this level, we might be able to order a few hundred orders.

I don't understand the purpose of the ghost weapon. It will crash at any time if I can't use it in the dungeon. In reality, I will be caught if I use it, and it can't extend my life. I feel that the writing is very useless. But the article also states that everyone attaches great importance to ghost weapons, which I really don't understand.

If you write too much about reality, you will inevitably hit the street. Your subject matter is initially attractive for copywriting.

I've finished reading the copy of Ghost Stories. From the second half of this copy, the level suddenly became higher and the writing became smoother. I felt quite comfortable reading it. The previous chapters made me sleepy, so I planned to abandon the book after reading this. Now it has been upgraded to food and grass, looking forward to the follow-up

Why do I see a notification saying this book is finished?

Currently I see this copy of Tian Deng. It's really scary, because the improvements obtained by veteran players cannot be used in the dungeon, and can only be used in real-life pvp battles. The clue cards are very Riddler. The ghosts in the dungeon are unmatched by players in terms of information and killing methods. It is a super asymmetric confrontation. I feel that to survive in the dungeon, you need both good luck and clue cards. The third thing is execution, and brain is the least important. Because the tasks given by the NPCs in it are just for sanding players. There are many traps that I have no idea how to solve. I can only watch who is unlucky and who becomes a line-filler. The source of the clues is not strongly related to the NPC tasks, that is, they appear very randomly and fly everywhere.

It's so good-looking, so good-looking. I finally found a supernatural being that I can see. Brothers, hurry up, hurry up, hurry up. This is really scary when I watch it at night, especially when it depicts the scene of death.

If you keep raising it, it will suddenly be over 😰.

Without 200 average, there would be no intelligent push. Without push, the average would not be able to increase, and it would be trapped in an infinite loop 🙂

Can any of you guys recommend me, Infinite Supernatural, similar to this one? I don't want to look at the system, and if it's about ghosts, it's not weird. I've read The House, River, and Horror Nightmare. It's like watching pure supernatural stories. It's so hard to find.

It's very good, but there are some sudden cuts and a lot of holes left unfilled. Also, in the second copy, the author got too excited at the end or the early setting was a little different, misleading the readers. To become a ghost, do you have to meet the dead setting first? The people in the hospital should not be dead, so it should be the obsession of the source ghost. However, the writing feels like a second ghost. The hospital is also an independent place, and the world of ghosts can also be connected. I didn't explain it before and didn't add anything later. If possible, it would be better to optimize the beginning part. Either do not write all the settings and put them in the story, or explain the explanation clearly. Although the settings should not be too different from the same type, the beginning of the article should be attractive. This beginning is too different from the rest, and the plot block is almost invisible. Overall it is very good and I am looking forward to the author's next book.

Why are there always non-governmental organizations that can equal the state machinery? Can guns not kill people even if they can't kill ghosts?