Peninsula: It All Begins with Architecture 101

Only two 🙂 kidney failure?

The protagonist's oral extortion was as frightening as being caught drunk driving by Sunny, so it's hard to comment. Later, Sunny kicked her nose and face, but she didn't fight back at all. Is she your father?

Two are better, but the harem is not interesting.

I'll order all of Cui Xueli. No sooner said than done

Add some characters, the writing is pretty good but there isn't much traffic.

Stop the water, okay? Write less about the details of filming.

The protagonist's main line is not clear enough: Whether it is a Korean entertainment that focuses on career or romance, it needs a main line around which to develop the plot. For example: Become an actor in your career, or be a playboy type who constantly conquers those popular idol actors. The setting given by the author is rebirth. Then when you are reborn, don't you have any plans for your future? Whether you are following the old path and eating soft rice, or now you have the opportunity to enter the film and television industry and eating soft rice. Writing it now gives me the feeling of hitting a hammer here and there. It's very messy, and writing film and television works definitely requires some detailed descriptions (highlight moments during filming, evaluation of the audience's performance at the end of the movie). These can well anchor the protagonist's progress in fighting monsters.

The writing is a bit too out-of-the-box. Every character is. It feels like everyone has similar personalities. Even if the name is changed, it's still the same

Who did I see? Has our president finally been overturned?

If there are more heroines, then there will be more heroines. There is no need to only let two people be the heroines.