Becoming an Immortal Alone? What Kind of Immortal Would I Become in the Demon Sect?

Let's start with the reading experience 1. Sluggish sentences are a big problem. It is very important for the author to read it several times after finishing writing to ensure that the logic of the article itself is smooth‼ ️ 2. The dialogue between characters is too empty, and most of them have no logic and are simply called nonsense. The design of character lines is very important. On the one hand, it intuitively expresses the current situation of the character. On the other hand, it reflects the characteristics of the character, that is, what kind of person speaks what kind of words. 3. Plot logic issues. For example, let's say the protagonist's team consists of 500 people. In the first wave of beasts, 300 people died, and the battle fatality rate reached 60%. If this kind of battle fatality rate has not yet collapsed, we can only say that everyone is a dead soldier. Since a soldier has such an organized level, how could he be yelled at by the Golden Retriever Lion King later? Also, the general surnamed Liu in the previous article views the original owner, coupled with the original owner's cultivation level that is comparable to a newly created account, it is a fw. It is impossible for him to become the heir of a big family. There are also those elders. One elder teased another elder about the death of his son. It was too cruel. Moreover, these elders are not strong enough. The third son of a dignified mainland-level family must be protected by someone with subversive level strength when he goes out. 4. In short, it is recommended to think more, read more and think more.

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