I'm the Dao Seed of the Human Race, Possessed by a Great Demon System?

I don't know if it's the author's second grade or the protagonist's second grade. This kind of family conflict is the most annoying way to write. After all, for a family to develop, family rules are the most important thing.

Why does this look so like eternal life?

It feels like I haven't moved on from the last book. The plot setting is so isolated. It keeps adding characters, conflicts, and new maps. The pace is too fast. I feel that one of them is enough for a normal protagonist. As a protagonist, you can't wait to have one chapter. The one with "Eternal Life" is enough and can be used all the time. Why are you still opening other books? Why go out and wander around? If you have this talent, you can go to the mountains and practice for half a year until you reach consummation before the immortals. With such a description, I think the protagonist is a waste. Secondly, he doesn't know how to advance or retreat, he is always advancing, and he goes out to cause trouble before his resources and talents are digested. It is completely unnecessary. A very good setting among mortals is that state overrides everything. Regardless of whether you are perfect in front of you, as your state increases, it will increase exponentially, and you just can't defeat me. There is something wrong with always laying the foundation perfectly, not to mention the fact that the Taoist and Buddhist scriptures in reality also have the same point on how to cultivate the Qi channels. Once it is understood, it will be fine. Perfection itself is a false proposition, because the world is not perfect.

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It smells like immortality, and the smell and plot are too similar.

An immature protagonist. . . . . Silly. . . .

After reading more than a dozen chapters, I didn't feel very good. First of all, there are obstacles to the progress of the protagonist. The arrangement is relatively rigid and cliché, as if you know all the details of the villain as soon as you see him. Secondly, the plot is also bluntly advanced. Although it is reasonable to target the protagonist's sister, it feels like something is stuck in the throat when eating. Then there is the change of the protagonist, which is rather inexplicable. It's a person who traveled through time in the 21st century. His inner core has changed within just one day. Why? Not enough foreshadowing. And especially when he uses his golden finger, he feels like he is the author's biological son. It all depends on the author and cannot be scrutinized. Then there is the issue of supporting roles. The one that I feel is more serious at the moment is the character of Lu Qingxue. Her care for Lu Zhaoyue shows a kind of unclear and self-righteous background. Her personal maid can actually let her deceive him, and she is also a woman who loves her "cousin"? I feel like the villains in this article are all copycats from the previous villains in Long Ao Tianwen, without any of their own characteristics. I really didn't enjoy the slap-in-the-face routine at all, I just thought the villain was stupid and deserved it. Can't taste any comfort.

Nothing special! There is so much written in this genre!