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The protagonist is not a good person, and the dog's sneaky appearance for the sake of development is a bit too much. I really can't stand it, but I just want to see how exciting the plot will be after he reveals his true face, so I put up a flag and prepare to buy a book.

It remains to be seen whether the new Never Get Off will make it to the end.

It's really hard to read. The author's ideas are wild and unconstrained. One small action or thought leads to a large piece of content, most of which is irrelevant and self-perception information. The actual plot hasn't advanced much yet, it's just brushed off. I read Goldfinger for a long time and still didn't understand it. In short, the novel is very cumbersome and jumpy in thinking. There is a lot of background information and the author's imagination. The sense of immersion in the protagonist is very low. It is not recommended.

It's a bunch of nonsense. It's all nonsense. The author should make his words clear before he considers writing a novel.

It's really hard to read, it's all pig's feet ideas, understanding of the world and various characters, etc. There are not a few plots in it, 80% of the ideas or conjectures are mixed with about 20% of the plot. This is the first time I have seen this kind of novel 😥

There is no dialogue and no plot description. Written like a memoir. I think it's more like a thesis review than a fanfic.

The author has too many inner narrations for the protagonist. 90% Of the text is narration, explanation and analysis.

Let me just say a few words. When I started reading the first three chapters, the impression was actually quite good. In the large number of routine novels nowadays, the protagonist's personal thoughts are generally simplified and become a companion who serves for "enjoyment". An excellent novel must always pay more attention to the inner description of the protagonist, because this is directly related to the character creation. But the problem with this book is that there are too many psychological descriptions of the protagonist, and it goes from one extreme to the other compared to the novice novel above. Everyone is here to read the novel and read the story, not to read research papers on topics such as "Harry Potter's Class Analysis and Character Development". The occasional psychological description of the protagonist can give readers a better and deeper understanding of the plot and help shape the character, but too much psychological description will burden the reader. Too much psychological description is not the main problem. The problem is that there is no plot promotion suitable for psychological description. For example, the plot of the professor's questioning after Harry and Malfoy's conflict contains a lot of analysis of the motivation, logic and consequences of Harry's behavior.But what about the professor's results? Basically, it is not mentioned at all, not to mention the issue of perception. If you are a reader who reads quickly, you will see the next stage of discussion without even knowing the result. It forms a vicious circle. The more you watch the discussion, the more tired you become. The more tired you are, the more you want to skip the discussion and watch the plot. If you accidentally skip a rare plot part and enter the next round of discussion. In the end, I can only quit this book with my head spinning. So, what the author needs to consider now is to streamline the length of psychological activities, or to promptly add matching plots after long paragraphs of psychological activities, so as to prevent readers from losing the desire to read on. At the same time, the development of a plot must be written from beginning to end, otherwise it will be confusing

Personally, I feel that there is too much analysis in this book, and the plot is a bit slow, making it difficult to follow and read. It makes me a bit tired. I read in the comment section that the author is a eunuch author, give it a while and then read it again

666, I'm quietly starting a new book, and I don't know how long it will last.

I just saw the first three pictures and didn't want to read anymore. I have a lot of thoughts in my head and a lot of worries all day long. You're not tired when you write it and I'm exhausted when I see it.

There are too many associations, and the focus of the novel is on behavioral dialogue, resulting in the author writing too many useless narrations.

To me, the way this blockbuster psychological description and explanation is written is not annoying, it can even be said to be relaxing, which almost means that I don't need to use any brain. The author puts the protagonist's psychology on the surface, and you can understand the protagonist's psychological journey with just a glance, making the reading very smooth.

Writing a novel using the same technique as writing a diary is doomed to failure.

The character design of this protagonist is not good. It's just a piece of cake. If you want to see something more interesting, you can remove it.

There is too much nonsense. I think my understanding of the original characters is very deep, but in fact it is too shallow to qualify as a recreational novel.

Reading this book is like eating a big meat bun with only a tiny bit of meat filling

It seems that everyone has similar ideas There are too many useless descriptions I like to write the derivation of ideas in too detail, which makes me tired from reading After reading a large article, I made no progress at all. It was just a description of why I said "a certain sentence".

Ten old books, eight eunuchs, this world is so crazy

I really like it, I feel like I have found it... How can I put it, I feel like you can feel this when you read the book. The color of the book... Well, I don't know how to explain that feeling, but I quite like the feeling this book brings me, and I'm looking forward to the follow-up, so keep up the good work ^0＾~

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It looked very tiring and I couldn't hold on.

It's not very good as a novel. It has no plot and is not coherent.

Reading your book feels like reading the magic version of Shangyuque

There are too many personal items and the plot is very simple. Does the author want to add a paragraph after reading his article?

That's all, it's already updated to 860,000 words, I'll just take a look and don't cut it again 😅