A Cultivator Who Started as a Woodcutter

I don't understand. The competition between the two pharmacies or the misunderstanding seems to have nothing to do with the protagonist, right? Besides, do you, a woodcutter who has been in town for such a short time, have the authority to mediate this matter? It's so annoying to read so many chapters just for this matter

I think this chapter should be changed to show two apprentices using brute force to decompose beef. Not only did they break the knife, but they also chopped the beef bones into pieces. Just as the two men were working hard on a cow's hind leg, the protagonist went up to give instructions. At this time, Butcher Zhang in the backyard listened to the two previous There was something wrong with the sound of someone chopping meat, and he walked forward quickly, cursing: You two brats, what are you doing? Not only did you chop my knife into pieces, but you also chopped the bones into pieces and mixed them into the meat. How can I sell this meat..." Before he could finish his words, he saw Under the guidance of a young man, two apprentices easily removed a cow's hind leg that required all his strength to remove. When he got closer, he discovered that the young man was a woodcutter who often delivered firewood to the teahouse next door. I am writing this. I feel that the author's logic here is a bit wrong. An old butcher will not cut the knife when chopping meat. He just feels that today's cow is old and it is particularly difficult to remove it easily. Only a novice will not know where to chop the knife. Moreover, random chopping will cause the bones to be chopped into pieces without removing the meat, and the broken bones will be embedded in the meat. I think it makes more sense to write the logic like this. The master is busy in the back and let the two apprentices chop the meat in the front. Today is an old man, two people. The progress was a bit slow. I was afraid that the master would come out and scold the two people for their slow chop, so I used brute force. The master knew that the chop was wrong as soon as he heard it. He opened the door curtain and saw that the two apprentices easily removed the hind legs under the guidance of the protagonist. It was easier than he (Butcher Zhang) usually removed the legs. There are many, so that the level of skill can be written. The protagonist is higher, followed by Butcher Zhang. The two apprentices are the best, but under the guidance of the protagonist, the skills of the two apprentices temporarily surpassed Butcher Zhang. I feel that it is more logical to write it this way. It is the apprentices who are chopping bones. The knife pops out of the hole. The protagonist is new to the road, and his observation is subtle. Two casual instructions can make the two apprentices' skills surpass the master's for a short time. This is just a suggestion based on what I thought of when reading the article. It is for reference only.

The story is not ups and downs enough, and the story is flat. Jumping directly to any chapter will not affect you.

The first chapter is a bit toxic. The author said that the protagonist's teacher taught for a few days when he was a child, but he didn't study seriously. How could he recognize all the words on the scroll?

Suddenly a new thing pops up. I don't even write where it comes from or how I discovered it. It just pops up suddenly. I was digging grass in Qixia Town just now, but suddenly the monk spiritual stone came out to look at it. When I read it, I thought some chapters were blocked. I also looked at the table of contents and found that there were none.

When I was a kid, I read a book called "Thatched House", which had a similar flavor.

Microscopic view -> Entraining Qi -> Condensing Yuan -> Building embryo -> Forming elixir -> Yun Shen

The writing is so good, I really want to have this kind of gentle and simple writing style

The author's writing style is very good, but to be honest, it is too plain and boring. The biggest feeling I got from reading this book is that it is a very straight horizontal line with a good look and feel (writing style + points), without any twists and turns. As for what some people in the comment area said about slow-burning, others are slow-burning. There are a few books in Qidian that use this slow-burning method.

It feels a bit like reading prose. Compared with other novels, it reads more smoothly and comfortably.

I haven't started reading it yet, but the author said there are no golden fingers or adventures. But judging from this introduction, your qualifications are superb, right? At least in terms of understanding, you are full of them...

If the beginning is too bland and boring, the book will not do well.

What everyone calls nitpicking is that the writing is pretty good, and I hope that the details can be improved and that I can see better writing. If you really think you're not good enough, you won't even talk nonsense and just leave.

One problem, time rhythm. Many of them are talking about autumn in the previous chapter, then immediately jump to spring in the next chapter, and winter again in the next chapter. What's more, the beginning of one chapter is still spring, but it turns out to be autumn and winter. The time span of such a long list is mixed with your feelings. In fact, it does not have the feeling of not knowing the years in the mountains. It has really become a long list. There are 365 days in a year. There are no same days in the mountains. You can understand it every day. Do you need to use the year as the unit? After reading more than twenty chapters, almost ten years have passed, and I have no sense of reality. I only feel absurd and stupid: it has been several years, but why is it still a simple sentence in the book, with no extension and no own general feeling, or not enough. After reading the book for several years, it has not been internalized as my own. So time rhythm is a big problem. Once you notice this, you can't watch it. Moreover, in such a difficult environment, it is a miracle that Uncle Chen survived for several years.

It's really quite daily. There's no trouble in the first 50 chapters. It's okay to generate electricity for love, but it's not even fun to get results. Come on 🤭🤭🤭

I have only listened to five chapters, and I have something to say First of all, the author always ends with the word "LE" in the first one or two chapters, which makes it uncomfortable to listen Then, in the comment area, the author agrees that this book is on the path of studying things to achieve knowledge, but I feel that without first learning the systematic methodology and its supporting symbolic representation, a person's investigation of things to achieve knowledge is basically useless. I believe that only when a symbolic system is built to represent common elements in a certain field, the transition from empirical science to theoretical science, whether it is reality or cultivation. In other words, the cultivation of immortality must have reached the stage of theoretical science, and those who are only good at force will be nothing more than some sect protectors in heaven. However, even common elements are too much for one person to check one thing today and another thing tomorrow, not to mention whether the understanding is correct, whether the logic is rigorous, and how to check it, especially when it seems that your field is defined as the entire nature. When you only stay at the level of empirical science, why are the principles you came up with more correct and effective than the principles that others have learned through trial and error over thousands of years? It's just an ordinary person's farming style. I'm afraid it's not as good as the fighting skills learned in life and death, and it's even worse than a system that has to constantly communicate and develop.

It feels like the author's mind has been in chaos since the appearance of the Ning Yuan Realm. Don't worry, it feels like you are driving away the selected readers.

It can be said that the development of the plot is exactly the same as that of the reconciliation in the village. It is a conflict between two families - the respected old man seeks reconciliation with the protagonist - the protagonist uses the difficulties the two families have gone through to persuade them to make peace - the two families disagree in person and decide to reconcile after returning home - the two families meet again and reconcile. It's not that you can't write the same routine over and over again, but you can't write it so close that the two paragraphs are separated by twenty or thirty chapters. You have to wait until the reader has almost forgotten the plot of the previous paragraph before writing it. And wasn't the focus of the plot in the past two days on Han Song? Why did we write about the conflict between the two families again?

Why do I feel like there are some malicious reviewers 😒

Has the author ever written about a cultivator who practiced alone in the mountains and didn't go out to interact with people? He just studied growing vegetables, growing medicine, and practicing cultivation every day. A lot of people read it at the beginning, but then he wrote more than a million words with this kind of plot, but most people couldn't stand it and abandoned the book. It's too similar to this book 😁

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I just want to know if it's aboriginal or time travel

Is the author really a newcomer? The writing style is somewhat similar to that of Zhongyuan Five Hundred

Write well. I also rush into the street. I insist on writing 200,000 yuan.

Why can't I find it at the starting point? I'll spend the rest of my life with a blue lantern.