Give This Magical World a Little Truth Shock

It's the kind of novel where the protagonist uses knowledge from his past life to make inventions. The plot doesn't drag on and is quite interesting.

I was really stunned when I saw this introduction. My first reaction was that I was opening a small account, but it turned out to be his reference book.

Generally speaking, if you insist on mentioning other books in the introduction, the writing style will not be very good.

The main character's interactions with the female characters are simply disastrous, too stilted, and so are the other parts.

Did you learn this introduction from the author who said he had read "The Mythical Version of the Three Kingdoms" 😅

If the introduction wasn't so poorly written, I would have been fooled by the reference.

I thought the boss was opening a small account. I read it a few times. You said it was used as a reference book.

"On the anvil of war, the strong are tempered and the weak are eliminated. In this way, the human soul is tested like the metal in the forge." "Steel begets strength! Strength begets will! Will begets faith! Faith begets glory! Glory begets steel!"

The protagonist can't always be a loser. It's nonsense to just brag and pretend to be a tiger without being exposed. The protagonist's identity is hidden even if he wants to, and he doesn't even wear a mask. People can easily find out the identity of the protagonist.

Relying on knowledge to create an audience is too small and the point of view is too single. Edison invented more than 2,000 kinds and only the light bulb is familiar. It is impossible for every idea to be interesting and fresh. The more you go on, the less people will read it, and it has nothing to do with your reference book. Taking advantage of the popularity in the early stage, it is recommended to change the focus of the audience in the later stage. The protagonist's magic insulation can be directly replaced by a mecha to destroy the world. The mecha can be directly built using magic circle runes and other settings. While others are playing magic, I am turning on the mecha.

I just started reading it, but I didn't expect that I was blown away by the angry old man of Lily in the Desert at the beginning 😅 My personal preference does not include Lily, because I like to be immersed in reading books, but I can't take on the role of Lily and even feel jealous 😭 How can I put it, Lily appears in the middle of the book after reading it for a while, so because of the stop-loss mentality, I have seen this. The content is quite interesting, forget it. If it is not the main character, then I will continue reading. This kind of mentality Maybe the book is mainly about lily, so everyone can read what they like, so I won't do it But if the book does not have a lily theme at the beginning, and the lily appears at the beginning, it will make me wonder if this is the author's favorite content and emphasis. But the opening chapter of the book itself is very creative, the plot is handled neatly, and I can see the shadow and potential of a good book. Unfortunately, aluminum and copper are not my favorite. I wish the author will get better and better as he writes. Farewell

When the protagonist will control his own power, it is impossible to talk about it on paper. Anyone with any intelligence knows that anything without his own power in the extraordinary world is a castle in the air.

Am I mistaken? I think the writing is very messy. It's hard to describe that feeling, it's just uncomfortable and uncomfortable when I read it.

Basic route map of the Battle of Star City Steel Rock City

The narrative and scene plot twists are too stilted and bland, and it doesn't read fluently at all. The main reason is that there are too few foreshadowing techniques. Sometimes the next scene will happen in a blink of an eye, which makes reading very tiring.

When I read Chapter 22 of Volume 2, I was disgusted by the stupid pig teammates that the author specially wrote. Let's just leave it at that. I'll delete it and bye bye.

Why doesn't the protagonist make a firecracker for fun?

I've just finished reading another book. Let's read some old books.

"On the anvil of war, the strong are tempered and the weak are eliminated. In this way, the human soul is tested like the metal in the forge." "Steel begets strength! Strength begets will! Will begets faith! Faith begets glory! Glory begets steel!" "There are no ghosts and gods in the stars, no supernatural phenomena, and no magic and witchcraft. Everything can be interpreted through scientific means. Human beings can defeat everything with the light of reason. Nothing should be worshiped. The rational galaxy The backward concept of religion needs to be completely eradicated." "Tell them that their world is about to be destroyed by death, despair and scarlet war..." "Tell them that their hope and pride will be wiped out." "Tell them that their empty whispers are unheard - God is dead, killed by human logic." "Tell them that nothing can save them now.