The Martial Dao Era: I Became an Immortal Across a Hundred Lifetimes

When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is paid more attention to. When you are on the third watch, the humble praise begins to sound, and the number of dead givers begins to decrease. When you read the fifth update, readers' support spontaneously formed, and the voices of praise became louder and louder. When you are at the tenth watch, the Confucian debates are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both inside and outside.

So far I have read 404 chapters (a very magical number). I don't know if the author is tired from writing. Anyway, I am a little tired from reading. If nothing else, this is probably the last time to write my review of this book. I delayed subscribing to this chapter for 23 hours, and I found that I was the 44th person to follow up. In other words, there are less than 50 subscriptions in 24 hours. I don't know how many orders this book has on average, but my blind guess is that it will soon fall below 100. If the author thinks what I say does not make sense, be sure to tell me the real subscription data. In addition, I am also following another book. That one is updated at midnight every day, with 4,000 words updated every day. I just read the latest chapter, and my update ranking is outside 200. I remember I said that I also write a book. If the author is confused about the current situation, I will help the author analyze the possible reasons. The rhythm of this book is messed up! This is the first problem with this book. The simulation genre is usually fast-paced, quickly upgraded, has many levels in total, and can change maps quickly. As for your book, it is only faster in the early stages. By the time you get to Bai Emperor, or even earlier, as early as Emperor Ziwei, the rhythm of this book has started to become like Old Lady's Foot Wrapping Cloth (you know what to follow next). It's just that Bai Di's problem gradually became more and more obvious. In an ordinary simulation novel, this number of words should have changed 3 to 4 maps. You have only reached the second map, and you are still far away from ending the copy of this broken ship. I still can't get past Bai Di's level. Do you think your mock essay is rich in content? If I hadn't said it, the author would probably still be complacent, thinking: "My mock essays are richer in content than all of theirs. Look how extraordinary I am." In fact, from the readers' perspective, what the author fills in are just plastic plots, and they can almost be picked up after reading one chapter every two chapters. The author may not be convinced when he sees this and thinks: Is it so difficult to write a flesh-and-blood simulation? I want to say that there is a reason why simulation writing is fast-paced. If you stay in the same scene for too long, it will be easy to write something inconsistent and logically confusing. To give a few simple examples, the previous description of the ending of the Blood Moon Demon King's arrival into the world said that Professor Bai Di disappeared for no reason, and then the protagonist was tortured by various characters in the hunting world. The author writes wherever he wants, but as the author writes more later, there is a sense of separation between the front and the back. According to the setting thrown out later, the ending described above will not happen. Because at this time Bai Di should be stimulated to revive. It's not the turn of these hunting gangsters to come here to torture the protagonist. For example, the ending of Red Emperor's Transformation into the Sun already describes the scene of Jueling's success. However, the author later changed the setting and said that the connection between the Jedi and the broken ship was the connection between the Jedi and the Heaven, not the inspiration. Thinking back on this setting, is there a sense of drama? (It's too bad that the author wrote wherever he thought.) Including the appearance lines spoken by Bai Di before he revived and released Bai Di's Sky Sword. In fact, in the later settings, Bai Di should not have said this. The author also arranged for the protagonist to try to read the story of Bai Di. However, taking into account the following circumstances, it is easy to conclude that the protagonist's experience of seeing Bai Di was purely due to the author's helping him cheat. According to the normal development, the protagonist can't read anything, and Bai Di directly revives. The protagonist dies just by glaring at him, and then he reads his memory? Now you know why simulation writing has to be fast-paced? Fight the BOSS quickly, change the map quickly, and distract the readers' attention before the bug is exposed. If the author is asked to release a reset version, my suggestion is to cut off the plot on the shipwreck in the later stage and not create so many realms. After transforming into a god, you can merge directly into a body, after you merge, you can directly transcend tribulations, and after you transcend tribulations, you can directly become an immortal. The protagonist always has trouble passing Baidi's level, just like I can't pass Ashina Genichiro's level. But writing a novel is different from playing a game. The longer you stop reading, the more frustrated the reader will feel, and the excitement you need later will have to be more intense to fill it up. However, the author spent hundreds of thousands of words writing a frustrating plot, so what does the author plan to spend tens of thousands of words describing the protagonist's feeling of relief after defeating Bai Di in the end? Don't come up with a sentence like"The protagonist swung his sword. In Bai Di's shocked eyes, and under the protagonist's radiant sword energy, Bai Di's figure shattered like the moon in the water, getting smaller and smaller, and gradually disappeared." Such a sentence. I think I wrote this sentence very carefully, but if the protagonist defeats Bai Di in one stroke like this, do you think the readers will buy it? The people who are chasing you all want to see how you arrange the protagonist to defeat Bai Di. But if you just describe it simply like I just did, and go over it in one stroke, you can just see how the rest of the people react. The author may still feel a little aggrieved. Everything you said makes sense, but... But there is a difficulty that the author doesn't want to talk about. If the author doesn't want to say it, I'll just say it! Author, when you wrote this book, did you write it word by word with a keyboard yourself? Isn't it? Not really! I have also used this kind of assistance to write a book (author, you know what I want to express). Sentences that may seem normal to those who have never read them are, at best, overly worded and repetitive. But to me, an experienced person, it is as obvious as a torch in the dark. I know that the author has cultivated, and I also know that the author has cultivated very hard. I can tell. But sometimes this trace is just like the author's protagonist in Bai Di's eyes. No matter how I hide or erase the trace, I can just see it at a glance. I saw this happening the first time I wrote my review, but I didn't say it until now. Who can code 10,000 words a day? Is the author Eagle Trumpet? Of course, that's okay. Technology has advanced. I've done this too, but I didn't post it on this platform. What I write is something that is not convenient for publication on formal platforms. I don't mean to say anything bad, but I want to tell the author that there are pros and cons. If you accept its convenience, you have to accept the hallucinations it causes and the disadvantages of lack of concentration. The author should work hard to overcome it rather than make it worse. (Author: It's so convenient to mess things up. You can complete a day's tasks in half an hour at most. Who doesn't love it?) Overcoming and being unable to overcome it, wanting to mess things up but not being able to do it completely. As a result, the author got stuck again. There is no other regret in this world. Originally I was thinking about how to give the author some suggestions, but after thinking about it I decided not to say them. Finally, I will give the author two monthly passes. This is not encouragement or appreciation, but just a commemoration of the fate that I was able to write three consecutive articles to the author in the vast sea of ​​books. Now that we have said what needs to be said, let the author do the rest!

In fact, there is a problem in many time-travel and body-taking novels. How can an ordinary protagonist have direct feelings for his original parents? Even if they have been together for several years, many plots cannot be separated from the family or cannot handle this properly. It is very awkward to think about it.

Count this food and grass. It's just that you have to use money to deposit and withdraw points, which is not good.

Author, the White Emperor is a dog that hurts the family. Can you move to conquering the universe quickly? And to be honest, if you don't care about the earth and let the universe develop, you will probably be able to beat the White Emperor in two or three lifetimes. Why do you write so frustratingly? You will lose your IQ after reading it for a long time.

I just want to say that there is no such thing as lottery and stock market in the world of martial arts? This is the first time I saw a simulation where the protagonist would quit his job and take a part-time job because he had no money to redeem his cultivation.

I order you to update 100 chapters a day. I know this is difficult, but this is an order.

Can't you just go to that Qingchuan Taoist and get the money? There are still tens of billions a month.

There's nothing wrong with writing, it's just that it's not refreshing enough, let's settle down some more

If we don't update this book, we will publish it, it will be over 100,000 words 🥵