The Martial Dao Era: I Became an Immortal Across a Hundred Lifetimes

When you update once, minor flaws will be magnified, and your writing style will be criticized. When you're up two hours in a row, a little patience is born, and the plot's progress becomes more important. As you approach midnight, subtle praise begins to emerge, and the number of people dying in the mountains begins to decline.

I've read 404 chapters so far (a rather strange number). I wonder if the author is tired of writing. I'm getting a bit weary of it. If nothing unexpected happens, this will probably be the last time I write a review for this book. I subscribed to this chapter 23 hours late, and I found I was the 44th person to follow it. That means less than 50 people subscribed in 24 hours.

Many time-travel and possession novels these days have a common problem: how can an ordinary protagonist directly develop feelings for the original owner's parents, even after spending several years together? Many plot points still revolve around family or struggle to properly handle this aspect, which feels very awkward.

It's a good supply of provisions. The only downside is that you have to pay real money to accumulate withdrawal points.

Author, Bai Di is just a defeated dog, can't you hurry up and transition to conquering the universe? And honestly, if you ignored Earth and focused on developing in space, you could probably defeat Bai Di in two or three lifetimes. Why do you write it so frustratingly? Reading it for too long is making me lose my IQ!

I just want to say, doesn't the martial arts world have things like lotteries and stock markets? This is the first time I've seen a protagonist in a simulation novel who, because he doesn't have money to exchange for cultivation points, will kill himself to do part-time jobs.

I'm ordering you to update 100 chapters a day. I know it's difficult, but it's an order.

Why not just approach that Taoist Qingchuan directly and then make money? He could easily make several hundred billion a month.

The writing is fine, but it lacks a satisfying element; let it refine itself further.

If I don't update more frequently soon, this book is going to flop; it's already over 100,000 words! 🥵