Mortal's Beginning Married a Wife

Good guy, isn't this just relying on women to practice? It's all driven by Han Xiaoying. There is a system, but the protagonist has no spiritual roots and can only practice by relying on his wife. It's not that no one has written about this track, it's just relatively niche, and there are still people writing like this.

What fan authors like to do most is carving patterns on shit, or carving a piece of shit over and over again. A woman who either robs the protagonist of the opportunity or robs the protagonist cannot find her own way. For example, weapon refining: you develop an exclusive magic weapon and extend your bloodline for exclusive use. Develop a consciousness amplifier and a mana battery life. Talisman: To prevent body snatching and soul searching, of course it must be a material of corresponding level. For random teleportation talismans, it is best to combine the talisman and the refining tool for point-to-point transmission. For example, if the weapon refining items are placed at point A, you can use the talisman to carry the storage bag to teleport to point A. Such places or activities similar to the Bloody Forbidden Land are not afraid of opportunities.

The permanent token of Tianxing City is only 800. Then why does the garbage city cost 1,000?

The author has been writing more and more intellectually recently. The stable development plug-in also engages in some mindless operations. In order to increase the secret level of the plot, he has continued to lower his intelligence from the beginning. It is obvious that the trump card method is still used. The idea of ​​practicing Qi to obtain life-span treasures is still a well-known dungeon. How can a mortal who knows magic hope that others can transform it? The mortal world is just a mafia structure with superb abilities, surrounded by hungry wolves

Almost pissed off. You dare to write a fanfic without remembering the setting of the original work... No wonder there are so many problems. Not much else to say, but the spirit stone currency setting is completely different from the original work, which directly breaks the meaning of the existence of the fandom (the sense of substitution). Also, why is the protagonist a mortal? Able to escape, Able to use spells...

The author has so many tricks. He formed an elixir in his thirties, which is more powerful than Ling Yuling's net worth and Linggen.

Remember, you can only give points to women, but not to yourself? I am still a supernatural being, just destroy it. It is suitable for licking dogs, but I can't see it at all. Be infinitely good to a woman, do you know what will happen? Try it. The first sword you land is to kill the person you like first. What's more, if you are infinitely good to a person, you can't become her crush.

Putting aside the writing style, there is no way this plot and plot will be popular. Either the author hasn't read many novels, or he suddenly had an idea and started writing. What you practice and practice is to be free and at ease, and your destiny is up to you. The protagonist's cultivation depends entirely on his wife, which contradicts the mainstream literature on immortality.

I don't understand why the author wants to write the protagonist as a waste. It's difficult to replace him.

Isn't this a poisoned milk article that I wrote for many years? I'm still writing it now.

I don't know how to describe it, it's just that this cheating is okay, but the method of cheating is quite annoying. I have to cultivate + be afraid of being killed on the shore + PUA, but I don't work hard at the same time. I can't stand it when I see a daughter-in-law going to enter a secret realm I can't solve my own cultivation problem. If I don't make corpses, the author is forcing me to give the fifth sister wisdom and lock her soul.

The writing is immature and the writing is wrong.

After so many complaints, there is another important point. When I wrote so many chapters, I forgot that I was writing for a fan, and the fan could not see some people and objects in the original work. He also started his own magic cultivator, and now it seems that he will continue to write.

No. Goldfinger didn't even explain clearly. The protagonist's character is also unlikable.

The more I watch it, the less I can stand it. The protagonist is written in such a way that he doesn't look very smart, and he always calls himself a mortal. Having magic power is a matter of physical cultivation, but you can't use the magic power

No, it costs a hundred spiritual stones to enter a city, 1,000 spiritual stones to live permanently, and tens of thousands of spiritual stones to sell just any medicine. Is this still the poor mortal Tiannan in my impression? This is richer than Dapudu

In the original work, Han Li went home and checked that his sister had no spiritual roots. Now you have another one here who has no spiritual roots and can cultivate. I am very speechless😒😒😒😒

A mortal who has practiced for several years can injure Yuanying with a sword and pretend to be a Taoist friend in front of the old monster who transforms into a god.

I stopped reading when I saw the second-level elixir training, for fear that others would not see that there was something wrong with you. There are too many things in this book, especially prices. Secondly, there is no tacit understanding between husband and wife. You are a mortal, and you don't know the fighting power between husband and wife. Can't you just ask? Always during the battle, the wife suddenly uses something that the protagonist doesn't know, and then the protagonist is shocked. When he was in the wild, he suddenly added unknown abilities to himself, which led to unexpected attacks, and then came spiritual consciousness. I don't know how the author set it up. Han Laomo has Qi training four. I always feel like the protagonist's wife is like a blind man, a puppet on strings.

It's hard to comment on the main character's fan-favorite operation

Are you serious about writing a fan that feels so frustrating?

Why do I feel that the writing is so weird? Um, is this a poisonous point?

What I've read so far is okay. Keep the style. Also, it's a triad cultivating immortals for mortals. What you wrote is still too conservative.

Come on, author, I wish you will write better and better!