Warhammer: Rebuilding a Warband

The writing is too messy and procrastinating. The subject matter is good and develops slowly, but it is too self-pitying. The whole presentation is a main line development, and then the rest is filled in and becomes messy. I don't know what to write or what to read. Moreover, even if he changed the core, the transformation of the Astartes itself will not make him so sentimental. The Astartes were born for war, and the writing is too messy.

This book has the kind of feeling that your brain gets excited as soon as you read it, and you start the book as soon as you have an idea. The outline is quite awkward, and the content contains a lot of self-pleasure. Who knows when it will stop updating?

Khorne, God of Blood Khorne grows stronger with every conflict that breaks out, for he is the embodiment of wrath. Recently, there have been frequent barbaric acts in Guhurne, and his power has been improved again. He is always in anger, roaring as the embodiment of power and war. In the bones and wood carvings that serve as records, He is described as a huge dog-headed creature, wearing brass armor, sitting on a throne atop bones, and his endless followers will offer their heads as tribute at their feet. Khorne is said to reward valor, strength, and conquest, and punish cowardice, and it is believed that only the weak fight with the help of magic. Wherever his blood-drinking believers went, they were brutally slaughtered. If they can't find a target to kill, they will kill each other or even kill themselves. Regardless of his origins, the blood god craves slaughter in his name. The blood of friends is accepted as well as the blood of enemies; Khorne does not care where the blood comes from, only that it flows. Slaanesh, Prince of Darkness Slaanesh is the master of all extremes. As the Lord of pleasure, seduction, and creation, his sphere of influence includes music, art, and desire, but also abuse, perversity, and cruelty. His joyful laughter appears when believers succumb to temptation and good becomes evil. Slaanesh's temptations are highly addictive, and those who follow him are soon consumed by pride, arrogance, gluttony, or other excesses. All of his power comes from the ulterior secrets in his heart. Due to the disappearance of his true form, he is regarded as the weakest chaos god. The throne in the center of the fallen palace was empty, and His minions were either twisting their hands in pain, or searching for His fascinating scent everywhere. Even so, underestimating His power is extremely fatal. Although he is imprisoned in the hidden dusk by the artifacts of the elven gods, He is still carrying out his own plans through dreams and whispers, slowly breaking through the shackles, preparing for his destructive return, and the wave of dark emotions will eventually engulf the entire mortal realm. Nurgle, Plaguefather Nurgle sees himself as the god of generosity, a laughing elder who spreads his carefully crafted concoctions over the ungrateful universe. In fact, Nurgsar's mystical gifts to the real world are seen as nothing more than wild blessings. The ancestor god Nurgle is considered by some to be the god of dark life, but he only brings disease and despair, spreading diseases that cause supernatural harm, and transforming those infected into the most disgusting forms. Many people fall into His arms simply to escape the pain and suffering of illness or to pray that their loved ones will not suffer a similar fate. And they did get what they wanted. Nurgle would be tolerant so that these believers would no longer suffer from the disease, but it would not take long for the disease to bite back. Nurgle delights in corruption and the corruption of the body; although the eternal cycle of decay, rebirth, and disease is attracted to him like a corpse to corpse flies, what he cares about most is the disgusting and inescapable disorder. When the infection reaches its peak, Nurgle's power will become most powerful, bringing despair to all living beings. Tzeentch·Rebel Tzeentch has endless conspiracies and mediates between all forces in a complicated manner. He is the architect of destiny; as the god of occult, hope and deception, his understanding of magic, destiny, conspiracy, ambition and deception is unparalleled. As the God of change, He has almost unlimited power, because everything needs to be transformed. Only through transformation can warriors achieve greatness, gods can bestow gifts, and living beings can die. Perhaps Tzeentch will also pull the strings of fate of other brother gods. After all, he is famous for his madness. Not only can he see the past, present and future at the same time, but he can also know the outcome of countless complex conspiracies. He doesn't care whether various conspiracies interact with each other. Manipulating people's hearts is not to accomplish the goal, but to manipulate itself. To even try to understand this madness is to lose one's mind. He bestows certain blessings on those who win his favor, usually some kind of mutation or transformation, and no matter how ugly or disturbing the transformation, his followers are grateful for this dark gift. The Dark Lord is the theoretical fifth God of Chaos, prophesied throughout history by both the Eldar and Men. But it was first mentioned publicly during the final stages of the Siege of Terra during the Horus Heresy. The Lord of Darkness represents total destruction without cause or purpose. While it was initially speculated that the Dark Lord was Horus or the Daemon Samus corrupted by Chaos, it eventually became apparent that the Dark Lord was in fact destined to be the Emperor of Mankind. When the Emperor faced Horus aboard the Vengeful Spirit during the final stages of the Siege of Terra, he realized that there was no hope of victory unless he gave himself greater power. Out of desperation, the Emperor absorbed the power of the Warp on an unprecedented scale, eventually emerging as an obsidian sphere surrounded by lightning. The Emperor's power was so great that he accidentally killed all the Custodes around him and turned them into severely burned zombies. The Emperor began to sweep across the madness of the Inevitable City, causing daemons, the Lost and the Damned, and even traitorous Space Marines to flee before him. The Emperor by this time had risen to become a full-fledged God of Chaos, and he believed that such an action was necessary to kill Horus and save humanity. Malcador was deeply saddened to see his friend become like this, and believed that the Emperor's actions had gone too far. But it was then that the Emperor met Aulanius Persson, John Grammaticus, Litto, and Garviel Loken. Persson faced his friend and brought him back from the abyss of corruption by calling upon the Emperor's own humanity. The Emperor encountered Persson in this specific time and place for the first time in thousands of years, and Persson was shocked and convinced the Emperor to gain confidence and give up the power he had received, even if it meant betting the future of humanity on a battle he might not win. This eventually convinced the Emperor to abandon his ascension to the Dark Lord's husk, which resulted in a shockwave of energy sweeping across Terra and the Spirit of Vengeance, driving away much of the corruption of the Warp spread by the Traitors. Although the Dark Lord's emergence was prevented by the Emperor's decision, the God of Chaos will appear at the prophesied moment, for time has no meaning to Chaos, and the Dark Lord's servants and his rule already exist. The Chaos Gods are entrenched in the endless, ever-changing realm of the Warp. They are ancient gods with endless evil intentions and extraordinary power. They covet the real world and weave conspiracies to subvert the universe all the time. There are four Chaos Gods. Each of them is the embodiment of obsession and fear in the hearts of mortals. At the same time, each of the four gods also believes that only they can rule all things in the world. In subspace, similar thoughts and emotions will automatically gather together, just like streams converging into rivers. They became vortices of pain and desire, turbulence of hatred and pride. These tides have rolled and flowed through the Warp since the dawn of the universe. These emotions are so powerful that from them arise creatures formed from mortal dreams and incubi. These intangible and instinctive supernatural entities eventually developed their own primitive consciousness. Thus were born the Chaos Gods - gigantic psychic beings born from the fantasies and inner demons of mortals. As all living beings in the galaxy prospered and grew, so did the hopes and dreams, the anger and strife, the love and hate of these races. A surge of pure emotion seeped into the Warp, nourishing the nascent dark gods and fueling their malign might. Eventually, the Dark Gods began to exert their influence over the minds of their creators: after early attempts to quickly bear fruit, they began their eternal corruption of the material universe and the races within it. The Chaos Gods draw their power from the actions and thoughts of the mortal races. Worshipers of the Chaos God will act in ways that enhance the power of their god, and in the process will receive strange Chaos gifts. These rewards may be extraordinary power, or even the gift of immortality. In the warp, the dark gods are constantly at war with each other, and the endless demonic armies are fighting in the eternally changing purgatory of the Chaos Realm. Their worshipers in the real universe also imitate this, and wars often break out between believers of different chaos gods. They use this to expand the influence of the gods they believe in, and at the same time, they also hope to receive more powerful rewards from them.

The writing is too lame. There is no problem with the writing, but the plot arrangement is too bad. It's fifty chapters to rebuild the war group. Where is the reconstruction? I chatted and rambled all the way, but didn't push the main line. If it was a personal adventure, I would say this is a food book, but everyone is attracted by your name and introduction. What everyone wants to see is the development of farming and then the war. The author has a huge problem with the focus of his writing. Events are not written in detail, and there are more branch lines than the main line. So far, he has not returned to the parent regiment, and has no official identity. He is a chapter leader, company commander, and sergeant? He is just a new recruit. He has no clues about gene seeds, support from the empire parent regiment, battle seizures, or black market purchases. There are even warships and various forces involved, and the protagonist cannot even do the bidding. To put it bluntly, it is caused by not advancing the main plot. The protagonist has nothing and is nothing.

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It feels like there are too many funny elements, 3 points are funny and 7 points are normal. You can't be funny all the time, otherwise it will become self-pleasure.

Are you trying to trick your friends into coming to Warhammer? Talk about loyalty, but don't ask a question 🙂 Resurrection of spiritual energy (Nurgle), Labyrinth of knowledge (Tzeentch), cheating on girls (Sexual abuse), fighting happily (Khorne), so good 🙂

At the beginning of Crying Man, is the protagonist's life so tough?

I have a can, which is hand-made, but I don't know how your sauce tastes?

Hurry up and cut it. I just read a little bit. This will ruin your character. Soon all your old readers will be gone.

Personally, I still think this picture looks good.

Both internally and externally, right?

My answer is no. Warhammer is a bad place where you just go to be the Primarch, Star God, and Evil God. They are all uncomfortable bad places.

The Archangel is resurrected, will Guilliman recreate this scene😏

I came from the last book. Come on, but it's too little. Keep it up first, don't die.

First of all, during the duel with the recruits of the U regiment in the duel cage, it was first said that the protagonist was in a state of disarming, and then during the duel later, it was said that the sword was touching the gap in the armor of the recruit of the U regiment. So, was this duel with armor or without armor? This is one of the first, and the second is the situation where the veteran possesses the armor and fights for him as mentioned later. First of all, this reduces the protagonist's combat power. Secondly, the discussion with the two Inquisitors is also mentioned later. So, are you saying that you can easily control the strength of the new recruits of the U regiment and can only rely on the reactions of the Astartes to compete with two mortals? Especially the female Inquisitor, if you didn't tell me, I would have thought she was some kind of Dark Eldar. Is there something interesting about kicking beyond the Astartes reaction?

What exactly is written in this introduction? Don't know what it means

Although it's understandable that you don't want to have a father, how can you turn around if you leave the Archangel and do this alone? Apart from Anna, the only people who can be equal to you are the original body and the leaders of the major forces. Now it's all from the perspective of big events. Could it be that after this incident, he was demoted to rush into the Atonement Expedition? In fact, this solo trip is close to the Apocalypse battle. It's like Badab, even if you beat him to death in one go.

The introduction is so well written, eh, why did I see someone handed me an offer, and the treatment was favorable, but I saw a golden light shining behind the person, was it a special effect, he was smiling at me, no matter what, no matter, hurry up and sign the contract

Crying Man: Look at you, what have you rebuilt? Bat Cub: Just tell me whether it has been rebuilt.

Please add more details♪

How many chapters did you start to rebuild the Chapter?

Now that the foreshadowing has been left, when will the second book be released? 😡😡😡

Shouldn't there be Sadako or something in the well?

From book 1 to book 2. You should write faster.

I am a cloud hammer, and I am attracted by the world view of Warhammer. I think the author's writing is very beautiful! It perfectly fulfilled my imagination during class 😭

Find the sequence set＼😭／

It's not too much to give the essence