
Zhu Xian: I, the Adoptive Mother Shui Yue, Am One Year Old and Have a Sword.
诛仙:我,养母水月,一岁一把剑
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- Ongoing
- Length
- 232k Words
- Genre
- Cultivation
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Mythic Cultivation
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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103Chapters
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I'm not the author. What did you write? Wenmin likes 2 or 3-year-old children? It is recommended that the relationship between brother and sister should start with how old you are, but it is not recommended that being a sister is much better than being a wife.
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The first chapter of the opening chapter was okay, but the beginning of the second chapter felt a bit unsatisfactory. Logically speaking, it should have shown the specialness of the protagonist more, and let several people compete fiercely for the first seat, which would increase the feeling of excitement. Otherwise, I feel that the junior sister's inner thoughts and shock at the end of the first chapter are a bit redundant.
It gives me the feeling that there is too much nonsense and too many words. It feels a bit like it has been polished by AI.