An Elven Girl Across Myriad Worlds

There is a problem with the pacing of this book. The protagonist himself is an elf with slow development. This is a very reasonable way to suppress the combat power that makes people unable to make mistakes. The problem is that the plot rhythm of your book is very problematic. Suppressing combat power is not a problem. The problem is to coordinate the plot rhythm to reasonably arrange the development of the protagonist's combat power. Generally speaking, if a good-looking novel has a depressing plot, the plot should be arranged in such a way that it suppresses first and then expands, and the length and rhythm between depression and expansion should be reasonably arranged and should not exceed the reader's tolerance limit and psychological threshold. As for this book, the beginning is as dull as clear water, which makes people sleepy. After a while, the plot finally gets a little ups and downs, and the result is that it keeps suppressing... Until the latest plot, it has been suppressed all the way to the end. There is no promotion or soothing transitional plot in the middle. It has been putting pressure on the protagonist layer by layer, but the protagonist's hangup is as if it does not exist. I don't know whether the protagonist can stand it or not. Anyway, I was so out of breath that I nearly suffocated to death. It can be seen from the chapter reviews of each chapter. Author, haven't you noticed that there are fewer and fewer chapter reviews?

I feel like the writing is not right. I originally thought it was about the development of elves, but it turns out that all the elves have fled to another world. So why does the protagonist still fight the devil? Does the devil have anything to do with him?

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It feels like the author is immersed in the art of defeating the devil and cannot extricate himself.

I feel like things in the main world should just be used as a background. According to the rhythm you wrote, the Demon King is so strong that he will return in a few years and kill the brave. At that time, the protagonist Goldfinger can't even earn a single point, and the journey to another world cannot take advantage of the longevity of the protagonist Elf. Then the battle with the Demon King will still depend on the brave. As a result, you can't tell whether the protagonist of your book is a hero or an elf. The result is that the protagonist has been suppressed for such a long time. The golden finger is completely useless. It is better to patch the main world, allowing the brave to continue to weaken the power of the devil, delay the time when the devil is unblocked, and allow the protagonist to have enough time to fully develop. In this way, it does not matter if the time in the different world is longer. The protagonist also has pressure to become stronger quickly, and the golden finger can also play a role.

After reading your remarks on the launch, it seems that you feel that there is no problem with the front-end of your current "Zhutian"... Then you are really good. I don't know how much you have read at this stage recently. I hope you are satisfied with it Zhutian officially begins with the next volume, and then you finish this volume even faster. In other words, you can't even click on the topic after it is put on the shelf, and there is a long list of foot wraps. I don't know how you dare, and you don't care about the data of your works. Do you not care about the comments of the work or even the editor's suggestions? If you really don't care, why put it on the shelf? If you care about why there is no sign of change or explanation, you are currently publishing chapters on a stand-alone machine emmmmm… Personally, I will not delete the book for the time being. After I find out from this book catalog that you have started the next volume, I will see how the preview of the corresponding chapter is and then consider whether to subscribe. Anyway, I will not subscribe to this volume

This book is very good, and the free chapters are okay. If it is paid, I think it is a bit unnecessary. For example, other books may end up with 1 million words, but this book may have 1.5 Million words or 2 million words.

When you see Chapter 34, what does the author want to write? What does this have to do with the protagonist? I feel like I have no idea at all.

It feels like there is a clear flavor of a new author In other words, setting is laid out, setting is laid out, setting is laid out, setting is laid out, and the setting of blockbusters is placed upwards. If you look carefully, there is no content at all. This kind of thing should be thrown into a separate work setting or split into the plot instead of throwing three chapters of setting up.

Combining the introduction and the current content, does the author want to write something like "the queen of elves, but the guardian of human civilization"? 🤔