Just Make a Doomsday Game and Invade Reality?

The protagonist is a lone wolf, which is quite exciting to watch. You must add a teammate to the protagonist. . The added teammate is of no use at all. . Then he imposed a restriction on the protagonist, saying that he would send new teammates. Also because my new teammates were robbed by bandits I didn't know, and then I tried to listen to the bandits just for the sake of my new teammates in this mission🤮🤮🤮

Nowadays, readers' thresholds have been raised by high-subscription cool articles. The protagonist has strengthened his human limits for the second time when he goes to the bandit line. In the eyes of readers, he is like a little superman. He is also manipulated by a group of ordinary people. This is a serious poison and the image of a coward is immediately established. Even if all the bandits are killed later, this impression cannot be erased. It is popular nowadays to avenge a grudge on the spot. You still delay it for a long time with ordinary people. Even if it is to attract official personnel, this scene is still not pleasing to the eye.

It started off okay, with the lone wolf plot, but then the plot went awry. First, a girl dropped in from the air, which was acceptable. But later on, the plot with the bandits started to fall apart, and it was very poisonous.

It's quite embarrassing. Couldn't you just use superhuman hand speed to kill a few of the bandits with six shots per second? Don't want to rely on yourself and hope that others won't attack you? What is the difference between this and the Qing Dynasty's compensation for ceding territory? You can't hit me after the land is cut Hee Feiwu loser Either the protagonist is the author's puppet, or the author is a softie, how could he come up with such a magical plot?

The writing is very poor. If you want to see the plot, just go to chapter 34. One bite will feed it directly into your mouth. If you can accept chapter 34, just continue reading.

To be honest, I think that although bandits are poisonous, they are not particularly poisonous. This lynx is really poisonous. Why do you have to add a girl?

I feel like I'm hallucinating other invincible writers. Although I wrote very well at the beginning, I found out that I am too invincible. If I don't click on the protagonist, I may not be able to make money in the future. I have to write a long novel and I have to eat more. Okay, add supporting characters and teammates, and it becomes a pile. Not to mention that you can't eat it in the future, you can't eat it now. What is important is to maintain the original interest and lengthen the length, not to change the interest and lengthen the length. No one will read it, and it's useless if you write it too long.

Except for the protagonist, who is still a normal person, the rest are all mentally ill and reveal a clear sense of stupidity. All kinds of indifferent people, do not speak people's words.

Generally speaking, the doomsday design is creative, but the narrative is like boiled water, and the bobcats are better than the protagonist (social fear, the details are hoarding rats, loving waving hello), Personally, I feel that the protagonist is very much like the Asashi man in Japanese comics He is first-rate, does not take the initiative and does not plan. When someone causes trouble, he will first express that he does not want to hit you, and then "lightly" slap you in the face to pretend to be cool. His mentality is still that of a commoner. The supporting characters are all kinds of anthropomorphic and crazy, and the protagonist is still like a passerby ostrich, making him sleepy.

The period from 35 to 40 is purely redundant.

Is the protagonist the only one alive in the world of Ta Ma? No need to interact with others? If you are still a lone wolf and are not allowed to add teammates, then just write that the protagonist eats and sleeps? Read a free novel called Ji Ji Wai Wai Wai Wai. If you like it, read it, but if you don't, go away! If you have the ability, write it yourself!

I just flipped through and read a rubbish book. My IQ is really not up to par.

The writing is plain and simple, the plot is streamlined, the characters are brainless, and the characters are flat.

There is something wrong with the design of the game. The game neither hints what this round is in the broadcast, nor does it gradually reveal itself over time. Everyone except the protagonist lives purely by luck. It's okay to write about "abundance". The number of animals and plants will increase over time. There is no sign of the Golden Crow or Corpse Smell. The crisis day goes from zero to full. If it were to become hotter and stinkier day by day, more people would be able to survive, and everyone would seek a way out in order to survive. The core of the article can be changed to-life will find its own way. Instead of what it is now, except for the protagonist Mu Xie, everyone else is a lamb to be slaughtered.

It seems that he was reincarnated from the dirty soil. I just don't know which old monster is under this skin.

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The world boss section is pretty good.

The plot of meeting my fiancée was a bit speechless. It took a long time to set up and people died.

The expected eunuch, the background setting is flawed