Corpse-Refining Immortal Clan: My Shadow Connects to the Corpse Realm

It puts too much pressure on the protagonist, and it's like walking a tightrope. An ant is still making conditions everywhere. If it wasn't arranged by the author, he would have died a long time ago. It's illogical.

Why is there such a name as an orphanage in Qidian? Because everyone feels that if the protagonist has a family, it will become a bargaining chip for others to manipulate the protagonist. The protagonist cannot protect his family 24 hours a day. With one control method to control your family, you can easily control the protagonist and make him kneel down while he dare not stand up. This adds a lot of frustration and trouble to the protagonist on the way to his rise. This is what most people don't like to see, especially when there are a bunch of dragsters behind the protagonist. The plot of someone deliberately targeting and controlling a loved one makes readers feel particularly uncomfortable. So many people hate that the protagonist who has traveled through time has relatives around him. Generally, a small number of readers will abandon the book directly when they see a book in which the protagonist is surrounded by relatives. If the protagonist is written by a person who has no ties to him, then as long as your writing is good, others will most complain about you. This book is also a starting point orphanage, and they will not abandon the book directly.

It feels like it is not as good as writing about the Hehuan Sect, because the Corpse Training Sect should be more cruel 🙂. The Corpse Training Sect is supposed to constantly kill slaves to use as consumables and then import them, which is suitable for the elimination system of the last place in the regional farmland, nineteen kills and the like. The Hehuan Sect needs a healthy furnace.

The settings are too complicated and the protagonist's plug-ins are not explained clearly, making it confusing😓

The writing is too messy and the description of the characters is too excessive.

After reading the comment section, save it and read it first. See if what the author writes is logical or not. Read if it is logical. I like books with reasonable plots, logic, and protagonists. Whether it is a protagonist with a positive outlook or a demonic killer, as long as it is a subject you like, as long as the logic is correct and the writing is smooth, I will subscribe. For example, if the protagonist's personality is cold and cold, and if it hinders the protagonist's interests, he will directly kill this kind of personality. Then the protagonist suddenly meets a woman or a woman pays a small favor to the protagonist. The protagonist's heart will warm up, and then he starts to work as a nanny, or subconsciously regards this person as the person closest to him. I hate this kind of writing of the protagonist's personality. People with a cold personality are not easily moved, and they will be completely moved by a small favor. This is inherently illogical.

The subject matter is very good. I suggest you write it more relaxedly. Most people who read the novel are ordinary people. Ordinary people can't survive the early stage and it's hard to feel immersed in it. Giving ordinary people a novice period is also giving yourself a chance