Shrouding the Heavens: Hades

If you don't listen to advice and don't reflect when writing a fanfic, you won't get results. Unless it's a joke (such as the Security Emperor), you must listen to the advice if you want to write a Zhetian fanfic and produce high-quality results. In fact, I saw on the author's homepage that he has written 5-6 Zhetian fanfics, but he has not published a single high-quality one, which actually explains the problem. It doesn't matter if the author is doing it for love, but if you want to make money from it, you should read more about what the fans who have achieved results write. Also, listen to advice and read the comments section. Note, this does not mean reviews of this book, but reviews of all the books you have written and reviews of other similar works. If you study slowly, you will find the points that readers like to read. In fact, there are already many plot analyzes of the "Zhetian Trilogy" on the Internet. It is easy to follow the previous analysis and then write your own things. This is proved by the fact that in recent years, many excellent "Zhetian" fanfics and even "Wanding Fans" have been published. Not a troll, just a warning. Whether you listen or not is entirely up to your own free will.

Pluto's body is yin and evil, and the Taiyang Sutra, which has been cultivated to the extreme of yang, is not consistent with the author's imagination! You are no longer afraid of conflict

It's still the same problem. It's too streamlined and makes people lose the pleasure of reading. The writing style is still too poor.

Zhe Tian said Pluto, I want to get the body of Pluto, but the first chapter said it was a mortal body.

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Shouldn't the Pluto body go through Fatty Duan's underworld path or the path of reincarnation, life and death, lunar and other paths? You can even learn how to build a cemetery for gods and demons in the tombs of gods. You can use your body as a tomb and reincarnate in life and death! Even to a certain extent, everyone's genes contain the life imprints of countless ancestors. The human body is a natural tomb!

The chapter between the protagonist and Ji Biyue really made me sick. I can only say that the protagonist is really hungry. I originally thought that the protagonist and Weiwei were the most suitable, but I didn't expect it. Haha, disgusting.

It feels like the author writes very casually, with lots of typos and loopholes, and the writing is as bland as the protagonist's diary. The most brilliant thing is to use chance. Ye Fan has either borrowed something or has the same or even better one.

Which Pluto? Is he the super beast Pluto who is full of talk, supreme in power, able to break out of a mysterious black hole and start a hundred thousand years of eternal reincarnation?

The new book has just been uploaded, please give me a free collection from all the adoptive fathers passing by.