Zhe Tian: the Ancient Demonstration, I Am the First Emperor

Yaodi has no character at all, and his name is a bit spicy🖕

No, bro, the works of those great masters only use ordinary language to write their works, you stinky fish and rotten shrimps still use classical Chinese?

Outrageous: One hundred thousand years in the first life? The fifth life is estimated to be nearly a million years old. When will the transformation take place?

Six-year-old Wu Shi can defeat the Stone King who lived three lives in the same realm in the virtual universe. Do you think Wu Shi is carrying the memory of the Immortal King to rebuild?

😰The most annoying cat slave

I want to know if the author has read Zhetian🤣. After the tribulation, he didn't choose to be with Tianxin, and he changed the Yuan Dynasty to the ancient times. Do you think you are writing an ancient novel? Let's change the Yuan Dynasty with the Great Emperor.

A life span of 100,000 yuan in the first life is a bit too exaggerated.

I'm curious as to why the protagonist resurrected an ancient emperor-level figure. After Ye Fan became the Emperor of Heaven, it took him hundreds of thousands of years to resurrect two unenlightened people.

It is absolutely impossible to live for 100,000 years in one life. Ye Fan's Holy Body and the Heavenly Emperor's first life are only 30,000 years old. How can it be possible for 100,000 years in one life?

Too many battles with the First Emperor, I'm sick of it

They always use the plural form of this or resurrection. This is too simple and too fake.

I suggest you change Chapter 21. There is no bloodline, just a relationship of adoption. Where does the bloodline come from? Isn't this inconsistent? If you don't change it, it will be difficult to write in the future.

It's okay so far, but the title is a bit ugly.

Brothers, it has been decided that the protagonist will have several titles. The mainstream calls him the Emperor of Heaven. Some creatures also call him Emperor Huang. Some stubborn ancient races who did not want to change the Yuan Dynasty were dissatisfied with the emergence of the emperor and the rise of the human race. They openly called themselves the Emperor of Heaven and secretly called themselves the First Emperor. These are all titles for the protagonists, of course, the main one will be the Emperor of Heaven. Actually, doesn't Cao Yusheng have several titles? But the first generation Tribulation-Transcending Heavenly Lord is called Minghuang, Mingzun, Source Emperor, etc. Thank you again for your suggestions!

The title is so ugly. How long has it been since I changed it?

Is the Supreme Immortal Body more powerful than the Golden Body? Is this what covering the sky looks like?

You don't need to surpass Xuanzhi to be strong, but you can always be on par.

Please vote

I hope to choose Yan Ruyu, Yaochi Saint, Zixia, Yaoguang Saint, and some ancient princesses. You can choose any one. Don't grab Ye Fan's original wife, okay?

The author is working against Chen Dong. After all, Wang Tiandi doesn't like it. I think the protagonist's name doesn't sound good. Su Ming and Su Qing, these names are better. Who is the heroine? (Zhe Tian) and (Perfect World) women without masters, I prefer Yan Ruyu, the ruthless empress, Liu Shen

The main reason why this book is not as good as the previous two is, I think, not that the author's writing is not good enough, but that the Zhetian series has already been written by the author, and he cannot write more exciting things within the framework of the Zhetian series. The routines have basically been written by the majority of fans. At the same time, There are too many genres, and it's not easy to get ahead. I suggest that guests don't write a complete Zhetian fan novel in their next book. Instead, they can try unlimited flow fan novels. Each world upgrades the routine flow one by one. Although it is old, the lower limit is here, and it can't be much different. Or travel through multiple worlds at the same time, similar to traveling through 99 worlds at the same time. If you grasp the rhythm well, it is very easy to excel.

The white officiant was still feeling leisurely. If a strong man came and destroyed the altar, he would be honest.

All realms surrender, all heavens bow their heads, one thought can determine life and death, one palm can overturn the universe. But no one knows how this aloof master climbed up. In my first life, I traveled across time inexplicably, and the consciousness of the universe gave me a "natural gift" - exchanging life for life. Every time a close relative dies, I gain another life. One more magical power. So, I watched my parents in my first life die to protect me. So, I watched my parents in the second life die in sacrifice for me. Two generations of parents, four lives, but I had to survive all the way, stepping on the bones of my loved ones, step by step, to reach the position of dominance. They say, I am the first person in all time. I just want to ask-- If the position of master is to be paved with the blood of my parents, I would rather never travel through time. Finally, I reached the pinnacle of cultivation and reached out to the river of destiny. Not for enlightenment, not for transcendence. I just want to go back to the place where it all started and fish out the boy who was selected by the consciousness of the universe from the quagmire of fate. In this life, I don't want talents, supernatural powers, or the submission of all realms. I just want-- Let my parents survive. The long river of destiny, I swim upstream. It's not for the sake of enlightenment, but just for the purpose of crossing over to the past self.