Covering the Sky: the Great Holy Body

That's why it's called the Ancient Holy Body in the ancient era. Is it called the Ancient Holy Body in the ancient era? Why don't you go directly to the mythological period? The mythical Holy Body beat up Emperor Zun 🔨

Why not call her Chen Pingan? 😏

Needless to say, the heroine Xihuang gives Wu Shi a boost

Killing an alternative enlightened tyrant before he has gone through the great catastrophe? It's inexplicable, and it's not clear why the protagonist is so strong. He's just an ordinary Holy Body, and his qualifications are relatively poor (3000 Years of Dacheng)

The Ancient Holy Body was revered as the Ancient Holy Body because there was no great emperor in the human race for a period of time during the Ancient Years, and nine Dacheng Holy Body appeared in succession to quell the turmoil, including the Martian Holy Body, the Holy Cliff Holy Body, etc., So it was revered as the Ancient Holy Body. The Holy Body was originally called the Immortal Golden Body!

AI is good at writing it. There are too many descriptions. Many of the plots are repeated.

I feel that every Dacheng Holy Body is a bit of a trap. The Overlord regards the Holy Body as its mortal enemy and often kills the Holy Body regardless of the size. After the Holy Body was completed, he did not take revenge and only killed the main culprit without eradicating the root cause.

He has a weird way of speaking and won't say harsh words. He just goes to the Overlord Ancestral Star and crushes it with one foot. He also goes to fight in the starry sky with a few Overlord Ji Wai Wai Wai Wai.

There's something wrong with it. And the reason why the Immortal Golden Body was renamed to the Ancient Holy Body is: In the ancient era, when the emperor was not alive, the nine holy bodies appeared in succession to prevent the dark turmoil again and again. The ancient times were the time when the Holy Body lineage attracted hatred. Before this, the Immortal Golden Body may have been born, but they only provoked the Cangtian Tyrant Body lineage. There will be people in the Dark Supreme lineage who will come out to snatch the essence and blood of those who are enlightened in this world to continue their lives, but they will never choose to take action because they hate the Holy Body lineage. Otherwise, how could the Holy Body lineage decline after the ancient times? ☁☁☁☁

The author is deliberately slanderous, just writing about so and so for several lives, so and so has attained enlightenment, your ninth life, the peak of immortality, Shui'er

Not all holy bodies are Ye Fan. The Martian Holy Body is strong, but its combat power only reaches the Great Emperor level. It is always a little bit worse without the Tao Body and Tianxin mark. The Dacheng Holy Body can only rely on its health bar to resist the Ascension Supreme.

How to say it? A pile of them weighs ten thousand. There are a bunch of Holy Heavenly Emperors, Tyrant Heavenly Emperors, and various Heavenly Emperors. It feels like the Heavenly Emperors have lost all their strength.

It's well written, I don't see any bad points so far, keep it up. Now that Xuanjian is so popular, you can take a breath of luck and make something similar to answer the beggar's question under Sang Xia, and turn the beggar into a pure-blood holy body.

Are you crazy about money? On the shelves so early

Can you improve your writing skills? Do you know how to recite poems to depict characters?

At first glance, it looks like it was written by a junior high school student 🙂

How should I put it? It feels like a narrative article, and the communication between the characters is not very good and needs to be improved.

Others are going through a tribulation, and the enemy breaks in directly and fights with them. The enemy is not locked by the tribulation. Let's see what novel you wrote and bring the underlying logic of writing.

The main character's name is Xiao, and he's Ping'an. It's a proper fight against the sky and a sword. I know what it's about without even looking at it 😅

There is a bit of a difference between your book and the Holy Body book next door. The spirit is far different. The Holy Body seems soft and not as strong as the one next door 😆😆😆

🙂 There is no suspense that the protagonist's combat power can crush the villain... The protagonist should be given a powerful enemy...

The first three chapters are written like this, do you want to make it more topical?

@Author, Xue Yueqing is an ancient enlightened person. His enlightenment time is even later than that of Emperor Daoyan. He is just called Demon Emperor and is not someone who attained enlightenment in the ancient times 🙂🙂🙂

Not as well written as the one written by Dacheng Ba Ti

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