Signing in Starts from Covering the Sky

In the original work, Shi Hao, the Red Dust Immortal Queen, went through the Tribulation of the Immortal King and became the Immortal King directly, and then created the Sixth Secret Realm to become the supreme giant. Later, he directly pushed his cultivation to the top to become the Quasi-Immortal Emperor. Why is your protagonist so slow? The most outrageous thing is that there is an Emperor Light Immortal King. The Butcher Burial Master failed to become the Quasi Immortal Emperor and survived to become the Emperor Light Immortal King. There is no such realm. Are you trying to deliberately suppress the protagonist or to let Shi Hao catch up?

I like watching harems, but I don't know why people complain about harems when I mention them recently. I'm thinking that the original film Zhe Tian doesn't have a single female protagonist.

As expected, I hate smoking. When I see someone smoking, I want to walk away. Then I skipped the early part of the plot 🙂

After reading more than ten chapters, I really can't stand it anymore. I can't stand wearing sunglasses, smoking, and talking dirty words inside.

I'm quite disgusted with the main character's smoking, and the endless description, so I've withdrawn it.

I found that among all the Zhetian fanfics, none of the protagonists wanted to become an emperor.

To be honest, what the book "Zhetian" requires is a heart that cannot be killed. Of course, it is not killing randomly for no reason. There are people in the world who slander me, bully me, insult me, laugh at me, underestimate me, belittle me, hate me, and lie to me. How should I deal with it? "One word, kill, don't kill, my mind is not clear. The emperor's road is fighting. The whole world is the enemy. One person can become the emperor in one life. Who can't be killed? Ye Fan will kill you if he blocks the road. It doesn't matter whether you are a ruthless person or who is behind it. Whoever provokes me will kill whoever! This is what I understand about the emperor's road and the invincible heart! As for the opportunity, it is not yours until it is in your hands." Some people may say that the ruthless person left it to Ye Fan. I want to say that the ruthless person put it there for Ye Fan. But you have to get it. Otherwise, wouldn't it be better to give it to Ye Fan directly? If you can't compete with your peers, how many times do you have the right to get it? In the original work, how many times has Ye Fan been hunted down to a life-or-death crisis? In the original work, even Ye Fan's son and the two sons of the Immortal Emperor have to die together. I haven't seen Ye Fan take action! Don't think too bad of me! Maybe some friends will say that I am cruel when they see this comment. But think about what kind of world is this? A world where people can eat people without death? In the real world, you feel comfortable when others scold you? If you are the Holy Mother, just pretend that I didn't say it!

I have only read the first chapters of this book. The most important thing is that the first impression is not good. The writing is not a big problem, but the details are uncomfortable. In the comments, many people are talking about the protagonist's smoking problem. In fact, I don't smoke either, but I don't have any opinion on people who smoke. As long as you don't smoke in public or affect others, it's your own business how much you smoke. However, the main character smoking in a fantasy world is very inconsistent in itself. In addition, many people do not smoke. If you suddenly smoke in a fantasy world, and the probability of it happening is quite frequent, it is impossible to ignore it. This makes many readers feel awkward and naturally have no desire to continue reading. I read a lot of comments saying that the writing in the back is quite good, but the first impression given to the readers at the front is not good. How can the readers continue reading? After all, the author is not a master and can make the readers read patiently. Most authors do not have the opportunity to make trial and error. Nowadays, there are too many novels and there are many choices. Readers read novels just to feel happy. If they feel a little uncomfortable, they may give up immediately. After all, even the Great God is no longer easy to use. If the author writes novels to make money, he should change the front part and make an announcement. At least many new readers will not run away just by leaving a comment. After all, novels are written for readers. If you make some changes, the performance of the novel will be better and the author's income will increase, so don't worry. Of course, if the author writes a novel just for his personal hobby, then it doesn't matter how he writes it. He can write whatever he feels comfortable with. The above is just my personal opinion. I hope the author will write better and better.

Is this person serious about his height of 179cm and weight of 56cm? Isn't this just pork ribs?

He is obviously a time traveler and has read the original work, but it turns out that he seems not to know many of the plots of the original work. Ye Fan's dragon horse in Kunlun was very surprised after seeing it. He also seemed not to know about the small world of Wu Shi on the Eternal Planet.

Smoking inside the sky? Sunglasses? How obsessed you are, it makes my liver hurt when I see you

Is the author in the advanced stage of smoking cancer? Smoking crazy? As a person who has smoked for 8 years, it is really disgusting to see so many instances of smoking in this book because the style of painting is wrong. There are so many instances of smoking in a fantasy world. I think smoking is the main character.

I just read Chapter Fourteen and smoked like crazy. Is that a fucking chimney? Smoking is neither a bad thing nor a good thing. It doesn't mean that you can't write about it. Doesn't smoking in your fantasy world make you feel more disconnected? It doesn't matter if it's placed on the earth, but it's still rattling when it's passed through. If I didn't look at the title, I thought the Dragon King had returned. This is just like when Ye Gucheng took out his mobile phone and sent a message to Moments during the decisive battle between Ye Gucheng and Ximen Chuixue. You set up ten chapters for someone to take over as the Emperor of Heaven, and then return to the urban Dragon King with just one cigarette. An inspirational story about street gangsters. I didn't remember the basic content of the first few pictures, so I looked for cigarettes and skipped them. Good guy, the three golden chapters have been replaced by the three chapters looking for cigarettes.

There's no need to step on it like this, right? Have a grudge against you? Use original work. A protagonist inserted into it. Not only do you play the protagonist of the original novel, but you also step on the pets around you. What do you really think you are?

I feel like the system is of no use. Apart from the heavy pupils I was given at the beginning and the three saint-level mechas I redeemed, they are all covered in sky-shielding techniques. What a waste.

The protagonist's combat power is so fake. The Emperor of Heaven is equal to the Great Emperor in Perfect. Although he is a clone, the Supreme is injured even when he hits the Supreme. This combat power is too weak.

Why are there so many disgusting guys around me? Dragon Horse God Baby, can you be more serious?

Isn't this handsome enough?

Is there any mistake? These Ye Fans are so ordinary, almost level 400. After all, he is also the original protagonist,

It is recommended that new readers start reading after Chapter 20. Apart from a few chapters of fighting, there are no other discomforts. The rest of the story is very exciting, not too long, the foreshadowing is in place, and the show-off effect is good. It's very interesting. I highly recommend you watch it!

At the end of the day, I have fulfilled my promise. When I first read this book, I only published a dozen chapters. The more I read, the more I liked it and the more I was afraid of it. I was afraid that the author would become a eunuch while writing, so I brainwashed the author and told him to write it well and not to be an eunuch. The author also said that he would definitely finish it. Yesterday I fulfilled my man's promise, congratulations

And when you shout that sentence, it will last forever. Someone is watching you. Watching you act cool.

It's enough to say it once and keep it on your lips every day. Act like you are the originator.

Stop being a eunuch, more updates, I voted for you 10 times!

When will the author release a new book?

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