Cultivating for Immortality, Starting as a Martial Artist

Author, such a skilled dancer only weighs 100 jin (50 catties) when drawing a bow and arrow? That's ridiculous! You should increase the weight by 100 times to fit the dancer's character description, right?

Cultivating immortality—with a Heavenly Spiritual Root and a Dharma Body—is too easy: Foundation Establishment in a hundred days, Golden Core in ten years, and late-stage Nascent Soul in a hundred years.

Putting everything else aside, the strength aspect is truly indescribable. The strength of a cultivator is comparable to that of a low-level martial artist. You are supposed to be a cultivator, yet your strength in the late stage of Qi Refining is barely 1000 jin (500 kilograms). I'm not talking about tens of thousands of jin, but it should at least be more than ten or twenty times stronger than that of an ordinary person to have any real prestige!

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I'll try it out first, but the description is too long; it's usually very padded. If even the description has typos, then the content...

I have a lot of ideas, but unfortunately my writing skills don't quite match them.

What's with the extra chapters? Is this novel based on a game?

Seeing the name "Mountain-Opening Pig" made me not want to read any more; it lacks imagination, and the rest of the content wasn't much better.

I don't understand. Doesn't having fewer spiritual roots mean better talent? Why does the protagonist, with only a lightning spiritual root, need to cultivate an additional water spiritual root?