Marvel: the Beginning Awakens the Small Universe

The characters are slimy written, full of nonsense, and the emotions are clumsy.

Before it was released, the battle with the Chitauri soldiers felt like fighting until the road was wiped out. After it was put on the shelves, it forced Majafa Ke🦐 to reduce her intelligence and create conflicts. On the other hand, when Hydra comes into contact with the protagonist, it is reasonable and its IQ is on the line. Maybe the author has foreshadowing, but I'm still going to wait and see.

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Poisonous Point 1: Earlier, when Pig's Feet was practicing boxing in the old library, he could hear the heartbeats of Peter and Gwen outside the door. Later, he said that he had to close his extraordinary five senses for daily life, otherwise he would be bored to death. Haha, the Saint couldn't bear his extraordinary organs. Poison Point 2: Going to war with the US military, destroying a military base, threatening all the high-level officials, taking more than 30 million in "war reparations", crushing a general's head, and then leaving a general's daughter to take revenge. The key point is that Pig's Foot doesn't know about revenge. Pig's Foot is extraordinary, but the heroine is still an ordinary person.

AI has many characteristics, such as a lot of quotation marks, a lot of nonsense, and being a novice. When running AI, you often need to manually delete duplications and modify dialogues. Alas, this book has too many poisonous points. The emotional scenes have an AI feel for no reason, the dialogues are repeated, and some unimportant points are repeated over and over again. This is the same as 200 words of content and AI running 2,000 words for you can only water the content. I would rather believe that you are lazy and use AI than you are an Alzheimer's/selling account/a primary school student.

The comment section is full of curses, why is it still ranked sixth on the new book list?

If it weren't for watching Saint Seiya, I really couldn't stand it anymore. After a year of settling in, is this all? Isn't it the sixth sense that awakens the small universe? The protagonist also wants to light up the forty-eight bronze constellations. How about putting the cart before the horse? He has awakened the small universe through Sutra, can punch at the speed of sound, and can actually be injured by glass and bleed? ? Ah? What about logic? ? What was the chapter about when you and Gwen went for blood analysis? ?

The protagonist of this book is really serious and upright. In the front, he has to be low-key and restrain himself from killing innocent people. He turns around because he steals gamma rays to kill people and he can say a sentence several times. In the front, the cheats are not poor and it is normal. The cheats are still poor. Even if they are exposed, they are still poor. Invincible is written in such a frustrating way. No wonder so many people criticize it. After reading 30 chapters, the character is broken. Reading the comments, it is more vicious in the later part. I can only say that the subject matter is good.

The plot setting is too deliberate. The protagonist's sister exists solely to create contradictions and trigger conflicts. Gwen's existence is only to tie a rope to the protagonist. The protagonist takes Gwen to fight with Hulk to illustrate Gwen and the protagonist's feelings. The protagonist's style of narrative is also a bit formal, good and evil, who strikes first. In my opinion, these things are just another rope given to the protagonist by the author

I just read the chapter about the Chitauri Invasion. This book is amazing to read 👍

Author Mi, you came here for 17 days in order to bring out the plot of Gwen on Skull Island. Then please don't show the plot of Spider-Man and Spidey. You are inconsistent and unrepentant. Is this how you have repented of your past?

，      ，，，？ ? He also emphasized that he was short of money, so he had plenty of places to rent, and he couldn't afford a good rental. Second, in order to build armor, he rushed directly into the military base for no reason and killed a group of innocent soldiers. He didn't even change the reason and said it was a necessary conflict? ? This brain is really... Third, the protagonist went to a waterfall in the wilderness to practice, and Gwen found it for no reason... Was it intuition? ? I also made an idol drama with a plot of affectionate confrontation and extremely abstract The writing is very poor. It can be seen that the author wants to create a ruthless and perfect image. The problem is that it cannot support it. Gwen has inexplicably helped the protagonist many times without any reason. The whole text is full of inexplicable descriptions. I really don't know how it got on the list

After so many years, the old problem has not been changed. The modal particles and verbs are either used in the wrong place, or the same words are used two or three times in the same sentence. What is even more terrifying is that eight of the ten chapters are now complete nonsense. The content of two sentences can be written into one chapter and two chapters, and the same sentence can be written two or three times with different words. It is really no longer brilliant, and even the most popular books have been sealed.

I've been writing for Marvel for so many years, but I haven't made any progress at all!

So watery! A question repeated

Mi Yike really doesn't know how to write emotional scenes. Want to close the update subscription

I saved 14 chapters, and I haven't even finished writing all the Hydra branches. Those who didn't know thought it was some kind of final BOSS.

Your book is really too exaggerated. Not to mention the unbalanced combat power, it can be said that the fight with Thor is impressive. You have to know that Hulk can press Mjolnir, but your protagonist can kill Hulk and has to fight Thor 55. Do you think that no one has read Marvel? The Sixth Sense alone has hundreds of super powers. I don't know how your protagonist is such a waste. Subscriptions are a waste, withdrawn.

The invading aliens bite each other like ants, which makes me unable to hold my nerves. It's so inconsistent.

With the physical fitness of a 15-year-old, if you throw a punch within 2 seconds on average, 10,000 punches will take more than 4 hours. Even if you punch one punch per second, it will take almost 3 hours, not to mention that there is no recovery time. What I hate the most is filling in random data, or data that is outrageous at a glance. It's okay to express the character of the protagonist's perseverance, but your ridiculous data will only make people with brains abandon the book, even if you add a setting in front of the protagonist's physical fitness that is different from ordinary people? The ridiculous ordinary person punches ten thousand punches a day at the age of 15, but it is not so troublesome to ask AI before writing 🤭.

As I write, there will be more and more settings. Unfortunately, the settings are all written to suppress the protagonist's strength.

If Banner didn't die after Killing the Hulk, I could barely keep reading, but I couldn't resist it when it came to the Ross family and his daughter. I looked at the table of contents again and there was a Demon Hulk, which I thought was Shen Nong!

It keeps coming, are you weird? It's okay if you say it occasionally, but I'm really convinced when you keep saying it.

I really can't stand this book anymore. I hope you can learn from this book next time. The emotional line is abrupt and I want to express the caution of the protagonist, but the main thing that makes people uncomfortable is that it is written as a reckless man. You can suppress the realm and at the same time give the villain a wit. You can take advantage of all these slots without fail.

When Lao Mi writes a book, don't expect to finish it, but the parts he has written are among the top three in American comics

As expected, Sister Mi is so meticulous in every book

Keep it up, Lao Mi, it's over 👍 Don't worry about Heizi

I haven't watched it for a few days, eunuch? Oh no, is it finished? Familiar feeling~😁😁😁

Familiar smell, Eunuch Mi is back 😏😏😏

Eunuch Mi is over again. The first time I read a novel written by Eunuch Mi was when I was a freshman in high school. The one I read was about a spy who had many ex-girlfriends. My favorite later was Super Player, but it was a pity that Eunuch Mi ended up unfinished because he was supporting the epidemic. The recent novels written by Eunuch Mi under this and other accounts are not very good. My feeling is that the wording and sentences are becoming more and more like a fantasy novel with a new skin, and it does not have the flavor of your past. (As an aside, several other veteran authors who write American comics have the same problem as Eunuch Mi. The new book is completely a fantasy novel with new skins, and also adds unpopular things, such as the God of Death) Finally, I hope that the American comics written by Nurse Mi will get better and better after changing her account.